ZooS vs Smoke Trail

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  1. Self-Expression

    Self-Expression New Member

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    12-16 lines
    votes gotta be somewhat legit to count.
    1st ta 4
    win by 3 for a ko

    good luck man
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  2. Smoke Trail

    Smoke Trail Writing My Life

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    yea wad up man, im in here and verse will be edited in here in the most a hour , prob like 30mins
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  3. Smoke Trail

    Smoke Trail Writing My Life

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    ayo man i gots to be out and get some shit done, so i wont be able t post until late tonight or tmr, but u can wait n post or go ahead, holla
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  4. Self-Expression

    Self-Expression New Member

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    after this battle bitch, you'll rank wit Pitt..
    the school, the hole, and underarms wit no deodorant
    throw a fit, get over it, you cant beat me
    cant be me, imma 'USMC' your jus a RMnetcee
    im 'O'-positive, an Dope enuff ta beat a ST-'D'
    an best be'lieve, ill dance on him like a T.O. TD
    put'chu on ice like Cam Neely i ment ta sleep like Malik Sealy
    dont be silly, ill break you up like Usher did Chili
    the last Trail i took-out, took me to a look-out
    this ones like runnin wit a marry-go-round
    no doubt, ya hold no clout, you should be off the board with no rebound
    battlin yous like havin nothin...... ta write a-bout
    dont seem astound, ask around, im world renowned
    ill have the whole world lettin me know when imma blow, during the 2oo5 countdown
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  5. Smoke Trail

    Smoke Trail Writing My Life

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    ayo check the boy out.........

    i bet this cats the preppy type, lookin like Sonnie Bono
    fuckin homo, im poppin ya colla just to stain your polo
    i role solo, you need body gaurds and protective custody
    sayin " Please Smoke dont bust at me with the Colonel Custard Heat"
    you have no Clue, internet thug, skipping from board to board
    tryin each time to think of ill names to give you some sort of force
    no one respects you dawg, you have no real claim to fame
    even if 2005 could see the future this would still end the same way
    cause your so fuckin pathetic, have ya girl cooking me supper
    and with your little girl on my lap askin why daddy aint use a rubber
    ayo thou, whats up with your age, we know you aint even college
    oh i got it....
    you thought people would think age means knowledge.....

    Holla
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  6. Jualah

    Jualah Cleveland's Finest

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    Smoke trail took this one..
    Solid Opener..

    Muahaha... After this tho' you fell off a little

    Only Nice thing I could find from you 2005

    Vote - Smoke
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  7. Self-Expression

    Self-Expression New Member

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  8. Menso

    Menso Go Lakers!

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    Zoos

    after this battle bitch, you'll rank wit Pitt..
    the school, the hole, and underarms wit no deodorant

    meh..

    throw a fit, get over it, you cant beat me
    cant be me, imma 'USMC' your jus a RMnetcee

    meh..

    im 'O'-positive, an Dope enuff ta beat a ST-'D'
    an best be'lieve, ill dance on him like a T.O. TD

    meh..

    put'chu on ice like Cam Neely i ment ta sleep like Malik Sealy
    dont be silly, ill break you up like Usher did Chili

    eh..

    the last Trail i took-out, took me to a look-out
    this ones like runnin wit a marry-go-round

    blah..

    no doubt, ya hold no clout, you should be off the board with no rebound
    battlin yous like havin nothin...... ta write a-bout

    lol..

    dont seem astound, ask around, im world renowned
    ill have the whole world lettin me know when imma blow, during the 2oo5 countdown

    huh?..

    Your lines didnt hit hard man.. Your punches need work.. some of the lines were pretty long too, but i didnt have to much trouble with it. needs work tho.

    Smoketrail

    i bet this cats the preppy type, lookin like Sonnie Bono
    fuckin homo, im poppin ya colla just to stain your polo

    blah..

    i role solo, you need body gaurds and protective custody
    sayin " Please Smoke dont bust at me with the Colonel Custard Heat"

    blah..

    you have no Clue, internet thug, skipping from board to board
    tryin each time to think of ill names to give you some sort of force

    blah..

    no one respects you dawg, you have no real claim to fame
    even if 2005 could see the future this would still end the same way

    blah..

    cause your so fuckin pathetic, have ya girl cooking me supper
    and with your little girl on my lap askin why daddy aint use a rubber

    blah..

    ayo thou, whats up with your age, we know you aint even college
    oh i got it....
    you thought people would think age means knowledge.....

    meh..

    Honestly, i didnt like any of your verse. It could use a lot of work. you dissed him but not in a way that was jaw dropping, Witty lines win battles.. sadly neither of you had that many, but i liked one of Zoos' lines.. sooo

    Vote - Zoos

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=781288
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  9. Self-Expression

    Self-Expression New Member

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  10. | Renaíssançe |

    | Renaíssançe | Ar†is†iç Revivä|

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    "i role solo, you need body gaurds and protective custody
    sayin " Please Smoke dont bust at me with the Colonel Custard Heat"

    Nice, nice. Hottest line in my opinion.

    "no one respects you dawg, you have no real claim to fame
    even if 2005 could see the future this would still end the same way"

    Get the fukk outta here 2005. You got murked. Period.

    Your verse was all chopped up, but nice try.

    Vote = Smoke Trail
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  11. KiLaKaZ the BLackAttican

    KiLaKaZ the BLackAttican B L a C k A tt I C u S

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    yeah this battle was a bit sloppy, i'm sure i've seen better from both, not much better, but better.

    vote - smoke
    he had two hot lines
    as opposed to 2005's one
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  12. Self-Expression

    Self-Expression New Member

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  13. Smoke Trail

    Smoke Trail Writing My Life

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    ayo wad up, 3-1
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  14. Reflexx

    Reflexx [insert cool thing here]

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    Zoos:

    after this battle bitch, you'll rank wit Pitt..
    the school, the hole, and underarms wit no deodorant

    pretty good.. i liked it.

    throw a fit, get over it, you cant beat me
    cant be me, imma 'USMC' your jus a RMnetcee

    meh... RMnetcee is kinda played out if you think about it...

    im 'O'-positive, an Dope enuff ta beat a ST-'D'
    an best be'lieve, ill dance on him like a T.O. TD

    meh...

    put'chu on ice like Cam Neely i ment ta sleep like Malik Sealy
    dont be silly, ill break you up like Usher did Chili

    uh.. didnt really catch that...

    the last Trail i took-out, took me to a look-out
    this ones like runnin wit a marry-go-round

    blah.. seriousley..

    no doubt, ya hold no clout, you should be off the board with no rebound
    battlin yous like havin nothin...... ta write a-bout

    much better... with the board and reboard...

    dont seem astound, ask around, im world renowned
    ill have the whole world lettin me know when imma blow, during the 2oo5 countdown

    i seriousley didnt understand this line... the fuck was it suppose to mean? lol


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    Smoke Trail:

    i bet this cats the preppy type, lookin like Sonnie Bono
    fuckin homo, im poppin ya colla just to stain your polo

    sonnie bono eh? ... blah on that... nice comeback at the line though... stain ya polo lmfao.

    i role solo, you need body gaurds and protective custody
    sayin " Please Smoke dont bust at me with the Colonel Custard Heat"

    eh... first line was good then a bit sloppy at the cononel custard heat..

    you have no Clue, internet thug, skipping from board to board
    tryin each time to think of ill names to give you some sort of force

    pretty good...

    no one respects you dawg, you have no real claim to fame
    even if 2005 could see the future this would still end the same way

    nice...

    cause your so fuckin pathetic, have ya girl cooking me supper
    and with your little girl on my lap askin why daddy aint use a rubber

    blah...

    ayo thou, whats up with your age, we know you aint even college
    oh i got it....
    you thought people would think age means knowledge.....

    ahahahaha nice...


    Both verses were kinda good... but honestly I beleive that smoke trail took this one... he had more punches and his flow was much better to my tounge... so yeah... kinda like an over time battle cuz I really couldn't decide on who's was better... but someone took this with better punches and all...

    Vote -- Smoke Trail

    (i'ma vote like this now lmfao... I like the way Menso does it lol.)
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  15. Reflexx

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  16. Smoke Trail

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    4-1.........game over kiddo.......thought u could come to the boy,think again son, merked here
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  17. Self-Expression

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    lmao @ you, look who voted, yea, i won.

    i wouldnt had said anythin cept you accually think you did somethin, dont believe me, ask the known heads to vote, youll see..

    lol @ thinkin you won..

    i bet this cats the preppy type, lookin like Sonnie Bono
    fuckin homo, im poppin ya colla just to stain your polo
    ^^your best line an its BEEN used 9043680538645 times lol

    i role solo, you need body gaurds and protective custody
    sayin " Please Smoke dont bust at me with the Colonel Custard Heat"
    ^^that was just stupid yo lol, all rhyme, nothin more.

    you have no Clue, internet thug, skipping from board to board
    tryin each time to think of ill names to give you some sort of force
    ^^woooooooow. look at those skills why dont we.

    no one respects you dawg, you have no real claim to fame
    even if 2005 could see the future this would still end the same way
    ^^congratz, of all the name plays he used THAT??? muaahahahhahaaa.

    cause your so fuckin pathetic, have ya girl cooking me supper
    and with your little girl on my lap askin why daddy aint use a rubber
    ^^ill give you a laugh factor on this line. tho played as fuck. basic as hell.

    ayo thou, whats up with your age, we know you aint even college
    oh i got it....
    you thought people would think age means knowledge.....
    ^^wow, just amazing.

    keep pretending tho.

    merked? lmaooo
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  18. Self-Expression

    Self-Expression New Member

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    that line alone took out your verse.


    sucker
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  19. Reflexx

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    2005... ZooS ... whatever... hope you're not talking shit bout me... I didn't really find the battle all too good or anything.. .let him brag if he won lmao.
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  20. Self-Expression

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    your too 50 cent gangsta for me yo, ill just shut up before i get delt with by your thugness.
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