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  1. MC Radical

    MC Radical twitter.com/TheLastHero69

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    What is the point if like yall might say?
    Is it me rhyming or just your minds play?
    Is it a seagull down by the sea?
    Or is it your mind and plain old me?

    Don’t be confines in the like of sins,
    Write down your feelings and say to yourself what is real!
    Think of the things you accomplished in life,
    Or what you could do to make them all up!

    Think of the things that yall do best,
    Think about your loved one in life.
    Cool might go crazy but what about life?

    How people be careless when they have no life,
    You will be careless when you drink and drive.
    You’ll se a wacko when you walk in the streets,
    He has no shadow and neither a dream.

    I lived a life with one big dream,
    I have accomplished it but nothing is real.
    So what’s the point of life yall might say,
    Is it you rhyming or just my minds play?

    Don’t loose hope and love throughout life,
    All might be illusion but what do you like?
    People have hope and some have a dream,
    Most of them don’t get a chance to say that’s it real.
    test
  2. unspoken1

    unspoken1 Revolutionary Wordsmen

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    yo well this was a pretty good piece
    test
  3. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Decent piece, had some nice lines in it. Keep it up

    one luv
    test
  4. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    interesting piece..i liked it though

    keep it up

    enjoyed both of your pieces u got on the first page today
    test
  5. MC Radical

    MC Radical twitter.com/TheLastHero69

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    Than yall!!! Much Luv!
    test
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