Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by Yung Troy, Jan 28, 2008.
Aight Im here . Let me know when you are ready. Or just drop your verse and Ill drop mine.
ya' verses tell it all, you are "softspoken"
so the WEAKEST line I spit, will leave ya' heart broken
and the Truth is alwayz spoken, believe these words
that just FLIP on a nigguh, you are the Bird
meaning you already WHIPPED, but aint TOPPIN' this sire
Im a BOSS with "Hot" Flow, you were Employed but I FIRED
HOW'D YOU EVEN GET hired, why you attempt hip-hop
SOFTSPOKEN aint HARD, but would of did betta with ROCK
and maybe I'd respect him more
without slappin him with backhanded metaphors
leavin' him hell of sore, aiming at his head of course
it gets SPLITTED, like two fed up spouses divorce
you didn't get the reports, I do damage, all sorts
Rippin' Flippin', Spittin' on you, Flow is galore
straight to the "core" of ya' verse, which is CENTERED around nothin'
its obvious that you're a fuckin,
IDIOT, hahahahahahaha, no OFFENSE
haha none taken lol
Ok you called me out but Seriously who’s afraid of a Yung Troy/
You ain’t no great worrier ‘yet’ you’s still a grocery boy/
That allowed a Trojan horse to breach his Yung anal walls/
Not something im into but Troy, that took a lot of balls/
Right now you small in my book like Mugsy Boogs compared to Yao Ming/
And I’m beatin you at your own game I don’t rap I just sing/ ( lol )
Yeah ill admit Imma rookie , but no newbie lines please /
Cause after this battle your names Hector and my name ACHILLES/
Lyrically slashin yo throat leavin the Emcee Battle Board amazed/
Draggin you behind my chariot ,but don’t vote just yet, I do this for 9 days/
Here’s yo chance to back out now cause im sure you didn’t prepare for this sh*t/
And I think id be a little bit embarrassed to if I just got beat by Brad Pitt /
I tried to find some things aboutcha but that turned out to be a funny job/
Cause some dude out there is using your name tryin to dance to spongebob/ (lol)
And I really hope that’s not you cause id break the rules and edit my post/
My previous lines clowned you but seein you dance would discredit you the most/
Put That One In The Books...........................
did you just vote for yourself lol there are rules about that right ?? lol
Nah, I was talkin' the battle in general
lol , yeah i was thinking the same thing .. pretty good one .
upin for votes ..
Vote= Young Troy.
Softspoken you were not awful but take a cue from how yung troy wrote. shorter lines.. that way as someone reads it,, they are hitting the rhymes frequently and feeling a bit of flow.. your lines were long and made it hard to feel any flow . the 9 days line was good.. and clever.. keep it up..
Troy pretty good verse- I mean seemed like it flowed pretty well as i read along.. nothing mind blowing . boss line was aight. etc. I'd like to see you focus on a topic, and kinda devolp your punches around it,, sometimes it seems you jump around,, that'd be my only suggestion/critic
appreciate the feedback thats what im here for ....
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