Yung vs. IllWeeMan

Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by Yung Troy, Jan 28, 2008.

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  1. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    16 lines
    I'll post tomorrow
    Don't bitch out
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  2. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    lmfao. Are you serious? Whatever..and I'm not posting 16 lines of my time for.. YOU.

    I'll post 12 MAX
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  3. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    Okay, whatever you wish.........

    If you're a "god", then Im Athius
    to add insult, I hate this bitch, ANGRY everytime I see his alias
    cuz you aint HALF what you brag, not even RADIUS
    matter fact, you WHOLE persona tells me that you FAKIN' IT
    I know you hatin' this, dissed by a rookie
    but its best you take notes, be my bookie
    place a bet declaring me as the winner,you'll get ya' moneys worth
    but I've already placed this bet, I'll get my money first,
    And you are just a "victim" of this verse
    without QUESTIONING, the rhymes PLEADED "hit em' where it hurts"
    best be lucky that the VERDICT didn't say "murk"
    cuz you'd get buried in the dirt, "in the FILTH of ya' verse"
    clean it up "VET", befo' you fuck with this "animal"
    who eat rappers, and YOU ARE NOW the victim of a cannibal
    but that is not my aim, " to have a wack taste in my mouth"
    so I'll spit til' the taste is out.........
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  4. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    Hurry, the king is getting impatient...................
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  5. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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    haha shit...
    illweez duckin this?
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  6. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    No, I'm not ducking this. I'm giving him a chance to re-write. Shay, you know as well as I do that I can beat this faggot. Let's not deny this. I'm off to work, so when I feel like writing a verse I will.
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  7. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    This Guy Lies

    He Was Surely Trying To Text A Verse................

    Guess It Wasn't Good Enough So He Decided To Leave It Alone For Now And Write Later.

    Lame............
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  8. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    I guess you didn't want to re-try and do another verse? Lol.

    Good luck man.

    Another Kritikal Spitta? This bum can’t be serious
    Weez crushed you’re crew leader..
    How the FUCK you plan to overcome the Resilience?
    We don’t hate ‘cause you’re wack.. Your hopes are kind’a fogged
    Check your verse..
    We hate ‘cause you’re verse has more quotes than dialogues
    This battle is one sided.. RM can’t stand this fag spit
    And I’ll get rid of Troy like canceling Brad Pitt
    You’re names Young? Please son, I’m clowning this kid..
    Happy to beat Soft Spoken? Too bad I’m louder than him
    This battle ain’t shit, and your verse is just a stupid issue
    ‘cause battling you.. I get K’S like your crew’s initials

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  9. Memorie

    Memorie Of The Long Term Breed

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    "Ouch."


    And a nice play on his name ... Everything else felt like filler but I guess you kinda turned it down some for his sake

    Yung ... Your bars need condensing and revision, you had some punches, but they sounded retarded like a boxer who had gangrene so proofread s'more

    Vote = Resilient.
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  10. Everest

    Everest E=MC Eat my Shorts

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    i don't understand memorie's vote but whatever to each is their own.

    This wasn't close in my opinion.. and suprising to me since Resileint posted second. you should know that verse wasn't nearly good enough..

    Vote= TROY
    I really liked this verse. you hit a topic with the bookie line, and rolled into two punches that played off that line. which is good. I'm reading to much around these boards where some takes a fair punch line, and doesn't use the information provided by that punchline to continue emphasize that previous punch.
    anyway ,, i liked your lines well enough, but the last 5 alone would have been enough to win it.

    Resilent -- that brad pitt line was wack. Brad pittt played achilles, of whom fought against troy's armies,, and how do you cancel a person? kill them or something?
    anyway. the softspoken line was your best.. which isn't saying much.. sorry guy..
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  11. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    ^ Lol.

    So, fuck me. I should have explained my lines then. When (in Hollywood) you cancel someone, they get fired from set. He played in the MOVIE Troy, you fucktard. But it's cool man, I figured some retard would show face in here.

    1-1. [funny]
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  12. Everest

    Everest E=MC Eat my Shorts

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    alright. great call names. real nice.

    Another Kritikal Spitta? This bum can’t be serious
    Weez crushed you’re crew leader..
    How the FUCK you plan to overcome the Resilience?
    We don’t hate ‘cause you’re wack.. Your hopes are kind’a fogged
    Check your verse..
    We hate ‘cause you’re verse has more quotes than dialogues
    This battle is one sided.. RM can’t stand this fag spit
    And I’ll get rid of Troy like canceling Brad Pitt
    You’re names Young? Please son, I’m clowning this kid..
    Happy to beat Soft Spoken? Too bad I’m louder than him
    This battle ain’t shit, and your verse is just a stupid issue
    ‘cause battling you.. I get K’S like your crew’s initials

    Read your verse again. Do it.


    ......did you? ok. no seriously did you? i didn't think so.. go ahead.. go on...i'll wait..................................................................................................................................................................................................... ok now seriously who's the retard?
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  13. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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    ouch...
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  14. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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    Vote - Res
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  15. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    1-2^

    my bad............
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  16. SpeedyCalhoun

    SpeedyCalhoun Obviously...

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    Nuff said...











    V~Res
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  17. Killa Bars

    Killa Bars New Member

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    Vote troy Nice Word play...
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  18. Deadly MC

    Deadly MC New Member

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    Vote Troy>> I like your style had me more entertained..
    Resilient. You had some good lines but over all i got to give it to troy...
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  19. TheReturn

    TheReturn Life of the Party

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    roflz, shit is deadlocked 3-3 yo.

    Troy on a comeback son, racked up them 2 monster votes in a row.
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  20. Halloween Jack

    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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    LMA thefuck O@noobs thinking that MODS CAN'T CHECK IP'S.
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