Yung J - Tonight Instrumental (New Level Recordz)

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  1. (((YungJ)))

    (((YungJ))) Da Best Slept On Producer

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  2. LuckyLuciano

    LuckyLuciano New Member

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    nice beat, get kinda repititive tho....your longest melody is 2 bars if i counted that right...either make the melody longer or change it up....nice drum work, but same story, gets repetitive....overall nice work tho...the potential is there

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  3. Dskillz

    Dskillz aka MG The Future

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    nice beat i like that snare

    i agree with a change up on the melody tho

    good work
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  4. Cowrecked

    Cowrecked Nasty Chopz

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    very nice drumline... feelin that a lot...nice snappy snare, thumpy drums...the melody is nice as hell... you could have some switch-ups...but yea, feelin those strings man..keep it up

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  5. (((YungJ)))

    (((YungJ))) Da Best Slept On Producer

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    straight to the top
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  7. ChaseNCashe

    ChaseNCashe If it aint Polo, Keep It!

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    This is straight...Drums are stiff...This aint bad for one of your first shits on your keyboard.

    Like dude said it is repetitive. You should've drop that little stab out for the verse.

    Synths are cool.

    Not bad but needs more work.
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  8. (((YungJ)))

    (((YungJ))) Da Best Slept On Producer

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    yeah i agree im still learnin this thing
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    I like the synth that hits every 4 steps. it drives the beat along pretty nicely and such. On the commercial tip with this beat. The synth that comes in for the hook is alright, could be better in my opinion though. this is pretty cool, i like the verse part, id just use a different hook. keep cominw ith it
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  10. (((YungJ)))

    (((YungJ))) Da Best Slept On Producer

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    thanks man, i been trying to do commercial beats lately.....least you notice it....lol
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