Yung Impression vs Speek

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  1. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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    3-0 ko or 5 votes to win


    Checkin in
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  2. Speek

    Speek New Member

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    drop yours.
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  3. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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    nah yo you go i want to see if you a challenge or not
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  4. Speek

    Speek New Member

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    aight - give me a little bit, it's 7:00 where I am now, i'll post back with it within 20 mins.
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  5. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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    its 7:00 here too so we have the same time, aight
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  6. Speek

    Speek New Member

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    I capitalized some of the stressed words so it's easier to follow the flow.



    I got ONE confession, you're DONE this session, the only way you leavin's a funeral procession,
    I'm speekin and tweekin, your flow leekin and reekin of meak and weak words, while mine is intriguing,
    I'm creepin through doors, seepin through pores, liftin you up off your feet to the floor,
    If come the day that I roll through your way, you'll take so many shots put yo ass in AA,
    If this b-ball you CROSSED, i'ma toss you a loss, call me T. Danza cuz you know who's the boss,
    Let me build you a plaque, you got willed to your back, cuz I'm usin the force like Vader in black
    Coat and hat, light sabre no gat, my first battle's a win cuz i got rhymes you lack,
    My words penetrate your mind, i generate rhyme that's capable of slowing and speeding up time,
    Now let's end this thing, where's my SuperRap ring, cuz i'm smokin the bowl the NFL should be playin,
    So stay down till count 10, this is the end, maybe after I send you to emcee death we'll be friends.
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  7. Speek

    Speek New Member

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    yo Yung, i'ma be out and about around my campus, i'll try to check in on my boy's computers throughout the night. i'll be watchin - hit me back. and if anyone's readin get ready to vote after Yung spits.
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  8. Speek

    Speek New Member

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    what's up

    where you at yung, the public is waitin.
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  9. Roddy

    Roddy Well-Known Member

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    yes... the public ..mainly me... is waiting..
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  10. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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    i know ya verse will be wack and before ya post make a redo
    i gave u enuff space that Gsus,his angels&10 hummers can come through
    why you challenging a vet just stay in your own damn range
    if a girl ask ya can she holla fo a dolla that means she tryna make change
    U at a young stage of wackness & ya future U wont be a good rhymer
    he duckin punches & leaning back so much he can have his own recliner
    he talks too much shit and its easy to beat this newbie Speek
    he scared, just read his name backwards & i always have my keeps
    just for you standing up to me newbie im gonna give ya a rep
    ya rhymes & skills go both ways like ya whole verse doin a 2 step

    Damn this verse wack^^^ i need come harder

    If there is a round 2 i come much harder if you want there to be one

    lol... i bet ya don't know what half the shit you wrote mean....well anyway votes
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  11. Jot Flames

    Jot Flames I Wish I Was Al Murder U

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    Yung had an ill closer closer thats it..overall yungs verse was pretty weak. Speek came with better flow, yaw'll was about equal on direct punches, but speek had a weak closer. anyway battle not too hot. Close one.......toss up------ it was heads so it's

    V/Speek
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  12. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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    now that i see what Speek can do we can do like another round so i can come 10 times harder
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  13. Menso

    Menso Go Lakers!

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    i know ya verse will be wack and before ya post make a redo
    i gave u enuff space that Gsus,his angels&10 hummers can come through

    no diss..

    why you challenging a vet just stay in your own damn range
    if a girl ask ya can she holla fo a dolla that means she tryna make change

    coulda been decent, wording is bad tho..

    U at a young stage of wackness & ya future U wont be a good rhymer
    he duckin punches & leaning back so much he can have his own recliner

    again.. no diss..

    he talks too much shit and its easy to beat this newbie Speek
    he scared, just read his name backwards & i always have my keeps

    eh..

    just for you standing up to me newbie im gonna give ya a rep
    ya rhymes & skills go both ways like ya whole verse doin a 2 step

    didnt really make sense..

    Ill crit other dudes verse later
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  14. iLL LoRE

    iLL LoRE Tha Future

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    vote goes against yung impression.. i liked that other dood's verse..its good
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  15. Speek

    Speek New Member

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    the votes

    im countin 2-0 nukka, more ppl holler at us.
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  16. Speek

    Speek New Member

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    winner?

    you want a winner? look at whose sayin i don't understand the shit i wrote and look whose sayin next time he'll come harder. if you speak english let me hit you with a translation......"I came in this for an easy win, instead i got knocked the fuck out, i can't belive Speek knows how to spit. cry me a fucking river. peace.
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  17. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    i personally liked imp's verse better. speek, you definatly got the flow and rhymes down, but you had played concepts, very few punches or disses. i mean your shit wasnt to impressive, it jus flowed and rhymed. yung mixed in creativity, and humorous disses, and his shit was more appealing.

    i liked this shit, plus the nameplay was coo, and closer was funny. keeps, ur shit's probally good to listen to, but it wasnt a good text battle verse, nothing quotable, no disrespect. but u lost this battle.


    good shit, pharrow. comin up.


    V-yung impression.
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  18. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    i know ya verse will be wack and before ya post make a redo
    i gave u enuff space that Gsus,his angels&10 hummers can come through
    why you challenging a vet just stay in your own damn range
    if a girl ask ya can she holla fo a dolla that means she tryna make change


    that was the shit i liked, forgot to post it
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  19. Speek

    Speek New Member

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    2-1 thanks for the breakdown al murder keep them votes comin.
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  20. Artik Phrost

    Artik Phrost ..*iLLest FemcEE*..

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    SPEEK:
    -over all....this verse was lacking....you got the components down, you just need to word them better and be more creative.....do you toung twist on da mic?

    YOUNG IMP:
    -over all....this verse was kew....wat chu lacked in punches...you made up in humor and tore that boy a new asshole
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    DA BREAKS:
    punches: YI
    flow: YI
    open: YI
    closer: YI
    multis: S
    vocab:S

    vote- YOUNG IMPRESSION
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