You're the One's. (Keystyle)

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  1. Wicked5744

    Wicked5744 Last I awoke, it was morn

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    I've never known to write such texts,
    Change the font so drastically,
    The language and order is reversed,
    Flipped, and repositioned,
    And now I write like I've never known.
    I write what I've never known.
    It's all true,
    Heart felt and felt through my veins,
    Heard in every corridor,
    And seen on every tablet.
    The meanings all hidden in themselves,
    To be revealed only by that meaning.
    To understand such things,
    To be deep on such levels,
    Is to know oneself,
    Or remember one's past.
    These meanings hidden in these texts,
    Upon the tablets,
    Within the blood,
    And through the corridors,
    Are only understood by the one's who have read,
    Who take the last steps to finalizing the problem through publish,
    These are the writings I have discovered,
    The reawakening of my mind,
    And the insightful phrases thrown from my nerves.
    Understand them,
    For I try, but do not.***
    test
  2. Wicked5744

    Wicked5744 Last I awoke, it was morn

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    (I wanted to add more, I was still feelin it)

    When I feel as if I read,
    But have not read,
    I realize I do not write such stanzas,
    These verses do not come from the finger tips of man,
    Nor God,
    But simply of fate.
    That's all I understand,
    Hurled upon a program or organic substance,
    Left their to slowly simmer in minds,
    In egos,
    In hearts,
    And poison, cure, or taint the body and soul.
    I write such things not from my perspective,
    But from his.
    Two personalities?
    Or maybe even an entity within me that takes control of only,
    Only the thought,
    And movement of release.
    I don't know.
    I really do not know.
    If I did I would not write in such a way.
    I would not write to the people,
    I would not write to me,
    I would not write through my body,
    I'm asking simple questions,
    And finding new answers,
    To which start new questions,
    but to those, I find no answers,
    I only write.
    And continue to prosper through ritual.****
    test
  3. *GeMiNeYeZ*

    *GeMiNeYeZ* ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~

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    great job, i like the post and then come back to finish... u can never ignore the call to poetry! lol.
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  4. h.wood

    h.wood IMAGINATION SUPER STAR

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    ^ yep and i love this line-
    " are only understood by the one's who read" i think because i think that in order to understand poetry you have to write it or take the time to really read it
    like a language or feel or maybe personality which you came back with in the second part :> bravo
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  5. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    And you speak of my style being different? Indeed, this piece was different, unique, yet truthful to the fullest extent. How many know what it is to know themselves? How many can then manifest it unto the paper? It is said that to know someone else, you must first know yourself, it would seem that you are preparing to speak to the world...
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  6. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    dope piece, had alot of quotable lines....keep it up wicked

    one luv
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