Your Random Thoughts...

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  1. Ntrikit

    Ntrikit Please stop freeposting.

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    I travel seated next to an old man losing his hair thumbing through magazine articles on wigs.
    Turning to him to ask, “Why bother?”
    He replies: “Would you pet a dog with mange?”
    I nod looking down analyzing his reply.
    He nods and I glare out the window at passing buildings.
    Then I turn back to ask him: “Why do dogs want somebody to pet them?”
    He smiles and says: “I’m not sure.”

    Sometime later I sit staring out over a lake and watch the ducks
    Their body outside the water seems so calm and so still.
    Reserved and relaxed they float along.
    But underneath their legs kick fervently.
    Men are the same
    I’ve heard that before…
    Or maybe I knew it before I heard it.
    I can’t remember but it’s true nevertheless.

    The rich are never happy.
    Today they view tomorrow.
    Tomorrow they see the next.
    And they never find today.
    The poor are also never happy.
    They view yesterday.
    Never see tomorrow.
    And drink to get through today.
    They are the same….
    Lost

    Parents are really the Children
    They find themselves in their offspring
    Cry when they leave.
    Smile when they return
    And miss them while they’re gone.

    Nothing really matters
    Not a thing at all
    We’re all just a myriad of thoughts overlapping each other.
    A dream that never ends
    Who is the dreamer?
    Me or You

    Are these my random thoughts?
    Or yours manifested through your mind into your dream…
    It doesn’t really matter though…
    Cause nothing is really real.
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  2. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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  3. Dark_Angel

    Dark_Angel Dark_Angel

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    wow, i really loved this peice! these are the thoughts that alot of us feel but have trouble expressing and you have expressed it great

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    The rich are never happy.
    Today they view tomorrow.
    Tomorrow they see the next.
    And they never find today.
    The poor are also never happy.
    They view yesterday.
    Never see tomorrow.
    And drink to get through today.
    They are the same….
    Lost

    Parents are really the Children
    They find themselves in their offspring
    Cry when they leave.
    Smile when they return
    And miss them while they’re gone.

    really nice work
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  4. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    aight azuzes(sp) this shit was on point.

    "Sometime later I sit staring out over a lake and watch the ducks
    Their body outside the water seems so calm and so still.
    Reserved and relaxed they float along.
    But underneath their legs kick fervently.
    Men are the same
    I’ve heard that before…
    Or maybe I knew it before I heard it.
    I can’t remember but it’s true nevertheless"

    This part stood out the most to me, cause i see alot of people around here who act all calm like life is treatin them well and they have no worries. But on the inside (the part you cant see like the ducks legs) it's awhole different story. Great job

    one luv
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  5. Ntrikit

    Ntrikit Please stop freeposting.

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    Allnakey - Thanks for takin the time to reply. The truth about people is that inside, deep down past all our useless knowledge we're all the same. Erase everything except emotion and we're ONE. Everything else is learned.

    Dark_Angel - I'm also happy to see you was feelin these lines. Appreciate the reply.

    Mind Soul - I appreciate your replying to this although we've had our differences.
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  6. Ntrikit

    Ntrikit Please stop freeposting.

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    *And This IS What It Sounds Like....When Threads Die*

    (To The Prince Tune of "When Doves Cry")
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  7. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    yo dont sleep on this right here ima up it for ya
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  8. Ntrikit

    Ntrikit Please stop freeposting.

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    Nice Try...LoL
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  9. j$crILLa

    j$crILLa ~$crillVille~

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    i was defintitly feelin the middle section the most.... nice poem
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  10. Ntrikit

    Ntrikit Please stop freeposting.

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    Amazing that NOBODY caught the beginning....

    Wonder why that is....
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  11. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    like your style.......glad i took a look at this.....nice nice for real......i wont quote lines, there were too many i liked....
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  12. Ntrikit

    Ntrikit Please stop freeposting.

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    Check the one I posted before this....I'm not really too fond of this one. I shouldn't have posted it actually.
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