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Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Emtee, Feb 17, 2006.

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  1. Emtee

    Emtee License to Ill

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  2. Foguinho

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    Pra cima!
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  4. TWO M.C.S

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    beats interestin, kicks kinda remind me of some old school shit, ya voice is pretty tight, but ya delivery isnt totally polished up yet, once you deliverin EXACTLY how you envision, shit is gonna be off the hook

    keep elevatin homie

    holla back, heres my link

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=966812
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  5. Emtee

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    thanks for da feed man. imma check ur link.
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    check 1,2
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  7. Emtee

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    uppin' for sleepers.
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    peepz be sleeping.
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  9. Emtee

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    uppin' this...
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  10. Sever

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    I think you had the proper idea of what the flow should sound like.. but your delivery was a bit delayed.. I learned that you have to spit about a split second before your brain thinks you are supposed to.. because it takes that extra split to get shit out on beat.. it's different for everyone.

    This is a WIERD beat.. I almost think I've heard it from a video game or something, you're trying the fast flow in the wrong places.. you seemly have the word emphasis thing down

    like you're like

    dadaddadadddada intercala on the track
    spittin it rippin it snippin it don't be callin me back

    like you have the multi shit down.. lol

    the chorus is very wierd.. this shit is a wierd track, I don't know if I like this or not..

    You have the capability of flowing fast.. your voice could use a bit more bass.. you're sacrificing voice for the fast flow.. last line was nice.. whoa @ 'take a look uuuuuhrownd'.. lol yeah whoever that is is ruining this a little lol

    6.75 out of 10. The beat really took away from you.. once you get a better beat, and work up to the potential you have you'll have no problems tacking three more points to that consistently, on your own you did well, but as a total track grade that's what I felt. Keep it up though, you have plenty of time.

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=967927 - if you're interested, thanks a lot in advance. be easy, speak easy, keep rippin it. Nice track.
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  11. Emtee

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    word, appreciate da feedback...
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