Your opinion on this verse.

Discussion in 'Cypher' started by RMomentum, Dec 21, 2013.

  1. RMomentum

    RMomentum New Member

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    Cacophonous piece of rubbish, my Momentum’s moments
    Trichotomous with aromas get a bonus to these poems
    Risk a Limerick-by-lyric, it’s drippin' so sick
    Ceillin' is leakin', I’m dippin this bitch
    Spillin' this lyrics, lyrically rich
    Killin' and Billin' for not feelin' your shit
    (Maybe i'll continue to write more verses to this, depends on the feedback.)
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  2. Klein Helmer

    Klein Helmer Ressurected

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    Looks like it could be good. You should record it though, I couldn't really say more until I hear what you're going for.

    Best,

    - Helmer
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  3. RMomentum

    RMomentum New Member

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  4. Well Versed

    Well Versed New Member

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    its interesting...but short...and where are u going with it?! thats my only question...but i like it
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  5. RMomentum

    RMomentum New Member

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    I stopped writting. People said I looked like a lyrical miracle tryhard
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