Your Lies set me free

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Clarksvegas_Dan, Nov 8, 2004.

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  1. Clarksvegas_Dan

    Clarksvegas_Dan Registered Voter

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    The lies in disguise
    fell on my eyes
    and helped me realize
    that I owe nothing to no one
    Cause you set me up
    so my dharma was changed
    I don't have to be righteous
    when my enemies blame
    Me for not being what they set up to maim
    I change my name from
    Vishnu to Siva
    I'm still the same
    But with a different future
    How long did you think it would take
    To convert me to the one
    Who puts heads on a stake
    and places them in line
    or feeds them to swine
    I'll destroy all the worlds
    that my student protects
    I'll murder you all
    before you infect
    my families intellect
    And if it's too late
    I'll blame it on fate
    My silly raps are weak
    but my Soul still is great
    Yeah I took the bait
    And tore it off the hook
    I must have mistook
    my enemies as friends
    But Siva is the master
    Of bringing the end
    And I'm not even supposed to be here today
    test
  2. InTheStars

    InTheStars Reflective

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    You seem as if you are someone who writes to just see what might come out...
    uppin for you to get some replies
    let you know, no hard feelings (about anything)
    couldn't dare see you fall off the page
    test
  3. absolute zero

    absolute zero Among the living

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    i liked it....smooth flow and it was just a simple piece, and i think that's what grabbed my attention

    my bad for not seeing this the first time

    God Bless
    test
  4. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Umm...Kinda got lost in the piece. I can see there was a message you were trying to deliver, but it just seemed to be missin pieces IMO. Uppin for you though


    one luv
    test
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