Youngsonz - Tazed! (feat. R-Mac & Moody)(DROP LINKS!!!)

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  1. Charlie_Br0wn

    Charlie_Br0wn (Creative Alias Here)

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    Aight so last night I was at my boys house and I brought my mic and everything...and we got on this track.

    Hook - Young U
    Verse 1 - Charlie Brown
    Verse 2 - Young U
    Verse 3(A) - R Mac
    Verse 3(B) - Moody

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  2. littleslimlocc

    littleslimlocc New Member

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    beats pretty fuckin dope, got a eerie gangsta vibe - hooks aight, not very fluent but dukes got an ill voice - first cats aight, deliverys a little shaky in spots, but he came with some coo lines, pubic hair bigger thahn you lmao - second cat is aight, not very clear with some of his enunciation, stretches some bars too - close to bein polished tho - hook again coo coo - kinda coo got a southern type of vibe, hes a little choppy in spots, just waverss slightly - next cat is aight, he also sounds a lil green - ill ass GRIMEY voice though.

    overall not a bad cut - ya'll are on the verge of droppin certified heaters

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  3. Doza

    Doza New Member

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    the chorus I dont really like that joint it just aignt enthusiastic

    first dude is aight he straight. ryhmes a lil basic

    second dude nice voice but i guess i dont really feel all the gangster music

    second dudes flow is also a lil off

    the third verse is aight but everybody is flowin wit only a lil bit of emotion to me



    y'all cool though could be better

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  5. Charlie_Br0wn

    Charlie_Br0wn (Creative Alias Here)

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    Word...thanks for the feed. I'll be sure to peep yall later on when I put my speakers back in my room.
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  6. Envizioneri

    Envizioneri Gifted n' Prolific

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    first dude...pretty decent lyrically, flow is okay for the most part, but it needs a lil more energy and charisma....then it'd be on point
    second dude...addlibs up a lil high on this verse...also needs some energy here, but not bad
    third dude...dude movin the mic when he rhymes...coupla points where his voices get faint...
    fourth dude...not bad, but could also use some added charisma
    hook...not too bad
    overall, decent track....should add some more emotion and hype yaselves up wit the beat, cuz that beat calls for some amped presence....with emotion, this would be ill

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=955195

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  7. Charlie_Br0wn

    Charlie_Br0wn (Creative Alias Here)

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    Feedback has been returned...Uppin!
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  8. Matter_of_Fact

    Matter_of_Fact Infinite Immortal

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    peepin' it out

    beat starts nice, liking it, on some gangsta west coast ish, first cat's got a nice presense on the mic for real, delivery's coo, emotion's str8, could be a bit more fluent, second cat's nice, got a better flow, more fluent then the first cat, lyrical content's nice, emotion's ill, hook's alright, could use some work, third cat, his doubles are a bit loud at points, flow's coo, delivery and emotion's nice, lyrical content follows the rest, overall the track's alright, could use a bit of work in some spots, but it's all good, keep doin' the thing fam, One

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  9. Charlie_Br0wn

    Charlie_Br0wn (Creative Alias Here)

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    Feedback Returned!
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  11. SKeeM 2

    SKeeM 2 New Member

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    im feelin this beat...on some dark eerie grimey shit...

    Hook - Young U----pretty tight, kinda remind me of GAME...

    Verse 1 - Charlie Brown.....ok feelin flow..lyrics nice, backgrounds could be better..not bad though

    Verse 2 - Young U----sound diff from the hook...lyrics descent...flows is pretty coo

    Verse 3(A) - R Mac---ok ok feelin this..maybe a lil more emotion, like ya flow the best outa everbody

    Verse 3(B) - Moody---not bad, flows tight...lyrics were aight..

    overall this tracks ight...quality is pretty good

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  12. Charlie_Br0wn

    Charlie_Br0wn (Creative Alias Here)

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    Feedback returned!...finally! LoL

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  13. SacriFICE

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    Yeah, I like this beat.. my type of shit...

    Mic quality isn't too great, and mixing could be alot better... yall need to learn the concept of Dynamics Processing :)...

    Verse 1: Flow is on point, multies are dope, you'd sound alot iller with better mixing but, for what this is, you are pretty nice.. I enjoyed your voice..

    Hook: is ok..

    Verse 2: Not really feeling this cats flow, real basic... although with some work, could be dope, like the voice... once again, mixing is pretty bad, but it's cool.... lyrically pretty basic.

    Hook: growing on me... I'm feeling the hook.

    Verse 3: First part is cool, dudes flow is pretty nice, fairly basic, but no real complaints... shits aight

    Second cat: like this cats voice too, this dude is pretty nice...

    Quality is kind of bad, some better mixing would fix this pretty easily.. but over all this track is pretty dope.....Feeling Charlie Brown the best...

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  14. Charlie_Br0wn

    Charlie_Br0wn (Creative Alias Here)

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    Word man...yeah well that's what you get when you use a crappy mic and cool edit pro and...someone like me who doesn't know jack shit about mixing.

    Thanks for the feed though...UPPIN.
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  15. MC Devious

    MC Devious New Member

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    Like the way the beat comes in......first cat is raw he rides the beat real well and I like what hes saying, 2nd dood has the smoothest flow and his multis are crazy, I like this guy keep doing you man.....hook is pretty nice doesnt change up much from actual song but it doesnt make it any worse either......3rd guys verse was a lil rough but still not bad overall everything on this song is pretty tight I cant knock it at all stay up and keep droppin that hottness.......

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  16. Charlie_Br0wn

    Charlie_Br0wn (Creative Alias Here)

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    Word thanks...I returned the feedback.
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