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  1. Drschmalzy

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    I always dug this beat. This isn't bad. It sounds like you just went in and laid it down for the f'k of it. I dig displays of lyricism! You got some pretty cool content and your flow is pretty solid. I wasn't a fan of the ending with the whole mumble-chorus! It made it feel tooo laid back even for a track like this, you know? Not trying to diss the record because as I said, the lyrics weren't whack but it just seems as if this was a practice song or a drunk song. There's nothing wrong with that.. I just wouldn't let the world see 'em. lol .. Keep working homey

    Check out my record, "Stepping On My Kicks"
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    Lol word I layes ot down in ten.min and was just ducking around lol props tho ill check urs out yea I.just liked this beat n the chorus was me just talking lol that's why I faded it guess not enough lol
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    Lol just thinkin I was gone when o.did Thai didn't even remember making it lol
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    vocals a lil' low but they sound clean...

    flow is ok... lil' simple tho' nothin really standing out as far as lines or delivery

    I dunno man u not catchin' my attention on thiz....

    juz bein real but I'll check somethin' else out to see how u soundin later

    HoLLaz
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    No doubt appreciate it ! Can't please everybldy
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