Young vs. who eva

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  1. Young Pha 'ro

    Young Pha 'ro settin' sh*t proper

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    challenger set rules

    i dont really care

    i'll drop first
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  2. B Drama

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    i'm down... what you think, drop somthing like 6-8?
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  3. Young Pha 'ro

    Young Pha 'ro settin' sh*t proper

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    6-8? cool

    ne thing else?
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  4. Young Pha 'ro

    Young Pha 'ro settin' sh*t proper

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    you don' want like no two rounds or som shit like that?
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  5. B Drama

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    go back to the drawing board, you need to lay low
    because competitive kayak only time you a FAIR-ROW,
    you too far below amatuer,
    only been writing roughly under a week
    kids just another tourist, he at RM just takin a peek
    your skill level predictable I'll just look at ya join date
    up a creek? yeah, young fish can barely swim and yet he tossin out bait
    i don't know your name, but you a young buck, that's fact
    take your ass to the dojo, before you drop your first verse,
    i predict gonna be WACK


    that's all ya worth...
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  6. B Drama

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    match lines.. that's it... g'luck..
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  7. Young Pha 'ro

    Young Pha 'ro settin' sh*t proper

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    very rude......

    My momma used to say dont ever let shit get the best of you
    i thought that meant to always try until i saw some shit like you
    you about a bunch a gas with some cheeze up in it
    you pussy, before i send rounds
    ill put the crome so close to your face u could see you reflection up in it
    but i aint gonna lie i dont go to dojos or got semi's or automatics
    but i got es from down your block to set it on you automatic
    and you just phony homey with your head up in the air
    while you flying with the birds i'll pigeon hunting down here

    that's all your worth.....
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  8. Young Pha 'ro

    Young Pha 'ro settin' sh*t proper

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    so that's it home boy?
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  9. B Drama

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    yessir..


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  10. Fliped ScRiPtZ

    Fliped ScRiPtZ Flips yur scriptz

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  11. Young Pha 'ro

    Young Pha 'ro settin' sh*t proper

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    ....... =o....... s punches werent even his....... flow? plz! wat u saying is that his bars were easier to follow....... bullsh*t.......... that's the last time i ever toss lines onto paper........
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  12. B Drama

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    one vote against you and already you bitching...



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  13. Snikka

    Snikka Vision Action Execution

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    lol @ B's verse.... uppin
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  14. XNTU8

    XNTU8 HipHop ACCENTUATION

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    first of all... well break down FA'ROs verse....

    My momma used to say dont ever let shit get the best of you
    i thought that meant to always try until i saw some shit like you
    --shit i thought this intro was gunna be ill with the set up, then it just turned whack, plus u rhymed YOU wit YOU...

    you about a bunch a gas with some cheeze up in it
    you pussy, before i send rounds
    ill put the crome so close to your face u could see you reflection up in it
    -- the set up is crap, the punch a played concept but aiight, again you rhymed UP IN IT, wit UP IN IT...

    but i aint gonna lie i dont go to dojos or got semi's or automatics
    but i got es from down your block to set it on you automatic
    -- so your basically sayin the last line you said was a lie... hmmm herb, and then... again with rhyming AUTOMATIC... with.. oh what do you know AUTOMATIC...

    and you just phony homey with your head up in the air
    while you flying with the birds i'll pigeon hunting down here
    --- HAHAHA you realize this is ya only bar with a rhyme in it?? and its crap--

    then.... BS VERSE---

    go back to the drawing board, you need to lay low
    because competitive kayak only time you a FAIR-ROW
    -- good intro, not too strong but nice flip on his name, using comparitive rhyme schemes +1

    you too far below amatuer,
    only been writing roughly under a week
    kids just another tourist, he at RM just takin a peek
    -- not bad struggling bar, seems like you coulda flipped it better...

    your skill level predictable I'll just look at ya join date
    up a creek? yeah, young fish can barely swim and yet he tossin out bait
    --liked it coZ he jus called out YOUNG vs WHOEVER... LOL nice...

    i don't know your name, but you a young buck, that's fact
    take your ass to the dojo, before you drop your first verse,
    i predict gonna be WACK
    --- not bad ending, but kinda weak IMO....

    after that do you understand why bitching about losing votes is going to be utterly useless? coz this guy had you in every aspect, look he threw you a vs, that knew would beat you, regardless. but anyways

    BDRAMA took this in every aspect...

    Vote-BDRAMA

    and this aint a hate or DR vote... im new here too, but cmon man, that verse you threw him was garbage fa ro....

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  15. B Drama

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    2-0


    thanks for the breakdown. up this for votes..
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  16. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    next time make Ur call out in hookups or it will be closed.
    this forum is for name vs. name only.

    thanks
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  17. Snikka

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