Young love for the future

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  1. Southern_Dirty

    Southern_Dirty -="Too Dirty fo Ya'll"=-

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    (I got all soft writin this one lol)(its fo tha ladies)
    Baby do you recall
    a rainy night
    In eyes I kissed
    not needing sight
    god sent this
    into our night
    a sign to show
    dreams can come true
    lets take it slow
    to remember joy we knew
    enough to last
    years to be
    our love will cast
    into life's sea
    test
  2. *GeMiNeYeZ*

    *GeMiNeYeZ* ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~

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    Welcome to the Realm!

    Nice poem... short and sweet to say the least... very pretty! Go whisper that in some girl's ear...
    test
  3. MisterEThoughts

    MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth

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    straight to business haha nice and short nice prettyy.
    test
  4. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    decent piece, simple and to the point

    one luv
    test
  5. vinous

    vinous New Member

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    lol.
    yes, very nice piece, simple and sweet.
    test
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