You Wanna (Poet, Vise, & Right Hemisphere) *drops links*

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  1. Vise

    Vise Ya Tu Sabes

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  2. Praverb

    Praverb I breathe hip hop...

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    Poet- dude is nice on the mic woooooooo...brought lines wooooooooo and the delivery heat

    hook is gravy...

    Vise- let's see...hehe at Bentley line...hehe @ dues lines...wow @ the end of ur verse u switched up the flow woooooooooooo feeling wooooooooo niceness

    Hemisphere- flow wuz nice...delivery wuz pretty cool as well...on the real though he came the weakest imo

    woooooooooooo fiyah track
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  3. -ABT-

    -ABT- a.k.a. BentFranklin

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    return the flava

    hook is alright

    1st - lines could be worded better...flow is on for the most part...definitly got potential lyrics arent THAT great...but u could tell he tryin kno what i mean...he doing his thing

    2nd kat - lyrics real...flow is coo...sound polished most definitly...switchen it up mad nice son...word

    3rd kat - came nice...lyrics were cool....did his thing as well

    yall did ya thing...good looks on the reply homey

    stay up all of yall

    pz
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  4. exothermic

    exothermic Well-Known Member

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    listening....

    beats nice.. too much bass tho... maybe it sounds good in speakers tho iono

    chorus is pretty good one of de better chorus's i ever heard from a cat on the net

    poe... hmm lkolol he changed his verse it looks like lolol.... rhyme scheme pretty cool... like when he speed up his flow n shit sounds nice.. deliverys nice as well... lyrics cool prolly the best poe verse i ever heard yet

    n yeh he did his thing on the hook

    vise... voice is original for sure........ flows nice rhyme scheme pretty good... deliverys nice... lyrics cool... good verse lolol luv the switch up

    hemi .... flows good... deliverys nice as well... rhyme kinda basic... lyrics basic at times but overall cool....

    n yeh hemi did come the worst lolol still came nice

    overall hot song...


    return feedback plz
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=12373812#post12373812
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  5. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    I felt this, hook was propa....my only complaint was that first dude was a little off on some lines everything else on his part was cool...second guy did this track justice, I felt his shit, third guy was cool, I think his lyrics could of been better, but for the most part they were cool. Overall everybody held there own...I feel the second dude outshined the other two though...y'all did ya thing though...be easy.
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  6. Noodles

    Noodles The People's Champion

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    soundclick sucks... I'll get at this when it decides to take its mouth off the lollipop.
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  7. RiGhTHeMi$pHeRe

    RiGhTHeMi$pHeRe New Member

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    soundclick is back up ppl, thanx for the replies thus far... reply and we'll hit y'all back




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  8. APeAR

    APeAR New Member

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    yall ripped this shit... beats proppa...all yall rode the beat nice... lyrics, flow, erything was on point... i agree wit what everyone else by sayin Vise came the nicest... i wouldnt say outshined tho... cuz uh... no one outshines tha clique...

    so in the words of Bizerk...
    yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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  9. kCliPze

    kCliPze Not To Be Fucked Wit

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    Okk.....

    I'll just sum this up Poet has yet to improve since the last time i heard him.. so ya dudes still trash.. really shoulda put hemi on the hook.. vise tell poet to stop pausing and to use better wording.. but ya on to you.. vizzle.. ya verse was pretty nice actually ya voice was different at the begginin but guess its cool to change it up every now and then.."basically i paid my dues i dont need no credit.. get it?" yes i do and that was a pretty nice line .. "while u busy tryna lease imma own the game" like that too... ya flow at the end was crack too.. pretty good verse from ya.. stay up on that.. now hemi.. i hated how u made ya voice deeper at the start .. that I i I am shit was fucking dope.. really liked how u delivered that.. your lyrics werent anything special tho.. u already know that tho... told ya that a minute ago.. sounded good thod elivery and shit..

    track was aright stay up and all that jaaaazzzzzz

    and never collab with poet again.

    ok Good
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  10. Fred Wycheck

    Fred Wycheck New Member

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    Poet came with a good style in my opinion, rode the beat well, his delivery was perfect for it. flow went well over it too. good shit from him, good choice for the first person on the beat. I didn't like the break though

    vise, you came good, and I think you and hemi both did great...there was actually nothing wrong with your verses, they were pretty hot too. and you had a good ass flow too for it...delivery sounded str8...ummm, damn, it's hard for me to break down a track like this cuz I really don't know what could make them better.

    hemi, like I said above...shit was great, honestly hemi, I loved your presence on this, and the last lines, hahah serious quotes fa real, jus prolly not appealing to those who don't know you..that's the problem with being unknown, you gotta dumb it down for alot of peeps that dont have a clue about you (Like royce did..he kept it strictly to what peeps knew about him and explained a few of the important things they didn't) but seriously both you and vise had nice verses...

    I ain't gonna rate it...I have trouble rating these tracks honestly, my feelings change to this song everytime I listen to it
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  11. RiGhTHeMi$pHeRe

    RiGhTHeMi$pHeRe New Member

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  12. Sickll Sell

    Sickll Sell R.I.P. PG

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    -thinks hemi came best...but thats my 2 pennies
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  13. Vise

    Vise Ya Tu Sabes

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  14. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    listenin .... beats aight not really my type ...
    flows on point you sound polished and comforatable on the mic ...
    besides the beat I think you sound tight I'll look out for youre next track !!!
    hit up mine

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=913630
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  15. SKAVENJAH

    SKAVENJAH New Member

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    i like this song...overall its solid...... i dont really think that any emcee outshined on it...... seems dope to me..... where you guys from? i like it tho...im gonna download and give another listen later...and chek you page

    pz
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  16. Verbatim

    Verbatim Mr Write

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    killin is nicePoet is killin this first verse..lol already a classic...well damn....farnsworth line is tight...pay dues line is nice...flows fluid...hemi qucik as flow at the beginning, ok, ok I'm feeling that...lyrics are pretty cool...damn shit stopped abrupt as hell..lol...nice joint my dude..I see you still bringing it
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  17. FinesseNYC

    FinesseNYC FinessetheGreat

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    haha me and my boys were planning on ripping this beat this sucks now. lmao hook is even similar. great minds think alike i guess.

    ayway,

    first cat got a dope ass steez nice voice no homo. you straight killin it kid.

    hook is proper

    2nd cat
    lol, drop the names like game. judgin by yall names i thought youd be on some wack backpacker nonsense. this is hot man. your rhymes are locked..good shit

    3rd cat
    nice verse. some lines are type corny but its still sick for the most part. got a nice swagger..nice man. keep doing your thing.

    get back at me

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=914421
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  18. Vise

    Vise Ya Tu Sabes

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    thanx for the replies thus far...


    exo, i'ma hit your thread back later on tonight...



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  19. kaveh

    kaveh New Member

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    returnin the favor:

    beat is dope
    first cat is very nice/smoooth.. flow is nice, delivery is dope also.. feelin the voice, sickk verse
    2nd cat is nice also, flow is pretty fluid.. lol @ "drop more names than the game".. love the fast spittin lo
    3rd cat is dope also, all cats are mechanically same, all got the same level of skills

    sickk track man, im feelin this alot
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  20. Noggah

    Noggah Politically Incorrect

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    this beat is crazy... im feelin the upbeat.... chorus is nice...

    poet - u did ure thing, u came through nicely... i see u been listenin to tapes of me for practice, haha, just playin, but for real, it was real nice, u really polished yaself up...

    Vise - Killed it too, came with the rhymes like usual...good delivery...everything was nice, not really much more to say cause u did what u always do

    Hemi - feelin the delivery, you had some good shit too, you basically did the damn thing too


    all three of ya'lls verses really meshed well together and i was just feelin the whole vibe, good shit fam
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