You have physical needs & I have emotional needs

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  1. mr.rip

    mr.rip New Member

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    You have physical needs & I have emotional needs

    In the beginning everything was cool
    I had your undivided attention
    Now you’re playing me for a fool

    I know two wrongs don’t make it right
    But it was my bed that you were in
    And out of every night

    You was calling and always texting me
    I got use to your body being next to me

    I know you have a wife
    I just feel like I should be number one in your life
    What you do for her is your business
    I never been here be for God as my witness

    I can’t see how you can take this so light
    This thing could be so good if you would only act right

    I’m so sick of sharing you
    It’s to the point it’s driving me crazy
    I need to know where I stand
    Is this just a sex thing or I’m I your lady

    Your actions are tearing me apart
    I’m willing to give you all of me
    In return I want your heart

    You got me feeling like you don’t want to be with me
    Is it because I give it up to you so easily

    Keep in mind you’re the one that pursued me
    Last time we talked I told you that you’re losing me

    You told me don’t be like that
    You brought it to this point
    So this is where we’re at

    My problem is I’m so weak for you
    I for get what I wanted to say when I speak to you
    I get a rush when I know you’re stopping by
    I’m catching feelings for you
    But you’re like every other guy

    I wish I had a button on my heart
    So I could turn my feelings off

    You’re use to women being a bitch to you
    Maybe I’m just too soft

    But I have to keep real with you
    And be true to myself
    I know falling in love with you
    Would be bad for my health

    I need more then sex from you
    We both are grown
    If sex is all that you can provide for me
    Then leave me alone

    Terry L. Sidney
    1/25/2010
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  2. Degenerate One

    Degenerate One Noe Nose Touching

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    Well, she should know not to fuck around with married men...
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  3. mr.rip

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    no doubt but so many women do that stuff. men as well.
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  4. serioustempa

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    This is a tight piece full of many physical and emotional needs.

    Yes I agree! Both men and women are being curious and adventurous with their spice. Personally, I say it comes down to communication. Having that from the start is a key element to all relations. Some just don't apply well or have some delayed reaction.

    Indeed a great piece, had me thinking out loud to myself. hehehe

    ~Up~
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  5. retts

    retts BlesseD

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    I've been in these shoes your writing about.. and this peice reminded me of him/me/us so much.. wow..

    It fucks with your head, your feelings, your heart... and honestly - it ain't worth it in the end. I like your writing style and the honesty in your words (if this is even a real life experience.. lol).

    Be good to yourself is my only advice... thx 4 sharing.
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  6. Bhitiah

    Bhitiah Powerful Scriptures

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    Alot of women feel like .. Sex is a relationship.. Like if he's sleeping with me then he's not sleeping with her, which is never true, but true enough @ the time.. Glad to see your still around, not that I'd expect any different, lol.
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    If ol' school destiny's child wrote poems..
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  8. mr.rip

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    This poem is about somebody i know is going through. like so many other women that are selling themselves short and just settling.
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  9. RealMS

    RealMS Ne te quaesiveris extra

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    Yeah that is seriously bad if someone is married and still wanting something on the side. Ohh yeah good piece rip lol
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    mr.rip New Member

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    thank you real ms nice to see you. thanks to everyone that replied and can relate to this. yall know how i do lol i keep it real not watered down.
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  11. Ruby Gloom

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    Very nice piece, Rip! Felt the emotion as I was reading.


    Hope the friend you know going through this, is able to work through it.
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  12. L u c y

    L u c y (Administrator) SWERVE

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    A class above your last one! this felt real... the emotion felt real
    I actually wondered if you had been in the situation til I read your post (you dating a married WOMAN obviously!)
    I think this is the best work of yours I've read.
    as Nani says hopes she finds a way.......
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  13. mr.rip

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    lmao i'm not dating anyone at all lol.

    but thanks for your input haha that made my day lol.

    basically if you tell me what you are going through and i can really feel it no question if i can write it raw. but in my life time i have dated a married woman befor lol. thats b4 i had a conscious lol. at one point in my life i didn't care about women the way i do now. I've truly changed.
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  14. PR STATUS GFU

    PR STATUS GFU Under The Influence

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    like i told you on the PM, i like it.. good shit

    keep it coming
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  15. mr.rip

    mr.rip New Member

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    thanks verb
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  16. BelowTheHeavens

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    Not feeling it at all tbh, it has no flow/structure.

    pretty terrible in all honesty.
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  17. mr.rip

    mr.rip New Member

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    thank you your reply below the heavens hope you can find something on how you like.
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  18. Spitblaze

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    This is tight I like you put emotions
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    Psychotic Man 360 Watt WaRLock

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  20. mr.rip

    mr.rip New Member

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    thank you spit and james glad you enjoyed it
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