~You Don't Know~ Full Track...Some Real Shit...

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  1. Rhawfax

    Rhawfax Hold My Pocket

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  2. MisterE

    MisterE Look @ His Face Now!

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    first verse is sick, i like this man......nice to hear a change from the gorey madness


    good, mellow honest feel.....




    chorous is eh......could have used more emotion, and another layer or two



    wow second verse comes in nasty as fuck......this is dope



    emotion is illtastic.....lyrics nice.......nice struggle in the voice



    this was a solid drop tho...good show of versatility



    hit me back pleeeease



    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=926037
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  3. 360

    360 裝褋褣裐裳裛裒袙

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    "When u ppl realise that i am not well"


    2nd verse is fuckin killer homie. good shit, if u do this track again re-do the chorus yo shit wasnt very good, right idea but wasnt done well sounded a bit off.


    killllllller verse man, inspires me to write some shit. good shit dude
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  4. 360

    360 裝褋褣裐裳裛裒袙

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    yo what beat was that
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  5. Rhawfax

    Rhawfax Hold My Pocket

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    its from my homie statement
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  6. kaveh

    kaveh New Member

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    yeh this is dope man, no need to explain...
    you got a raw style, this is more mellower than you normal hard shit.. im feelin this man
    drop more of these for sure, this can definatly be bumped nicely
    everythings on point
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  7. Neyedus

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    Beat is ill

    Different steez on this....

    first verse - "fake friends but they aint as fake as you." shit is ill man, emotion is fits the track perfectly.....delivery is sick....sounds like shes been through hell too...

    chorus ehh.....honestly yo, im not feelin it....which is weird....cus usually when you sing, I love it, haha.

    second verse - coming in with the energy.......not even my own shrink has a clue....wow, this verse is fuckin insane.....

    ill track...
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  8. STATEMENT.1

    STATEMENT.1 Cant Shake The Devil

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    yeah like i said, that second verse is sooo nasty
    good lookin rhaw
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  9. Tha Kid Rayne

    Tha Kid Rayne New Member

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    havent peeped u for a while

    good beat for the topic,

    ur flow and delivery is good cuz u calm, aint all hype like usual...

    1st verse: im feelin it, "only thing we have in common is depression"

    Hook: Eh... hook couldve been better, its good but somethings missin from it.. it still fits perfect

    2nd verse : "die in a cell and when will u people realize im not well" ur sick, u depict a good picture wit ur words..


    is this a free download, if it is ima throw it in my mp3 player, good shit

    now holla back homie, i got some new studio quality shit peep and leave feed http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=12613283#post12613283
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  10. skarekrow187

    skarekrow187 ~~...:::SKAREKROW:::...~~

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    yeah man, this beat is sicknin, ya fuckin flow is original, nice use of multis and punchlines, fuckin emotion has to be your best asset, this shit is fuckin fire yo, hook leaves sumthin to be desired, but the shit is so fuckin thorough i dont give a shit.


    man you have to get at me for a colab or somethin man, shit would be sick as fuck!
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  11. Elias_Returns

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    Yea this joint is very original. I feel like i've heard that beat before but it definitely creates a good background for what your sayin. You painted a nice picture to it and I agree the emotion on the 2nd verse definitely shines best and you killed it. Not sure what you were trying to capture with the emotion of the first verse but it sounds different from the 2nd...Its still hot though and i'm still feeling the content. The hook can probably be redone maybe to have a more ear catching effect but i'm feeling the hook lyricwise and the song just comes together very nicely. Nice work man. I'm glad I stopped to check it out. Feel free to check my thread...

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=926369
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  12. Raptor

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    real nice!...wasnt feelin the hook though....the rest was dope!
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  13. Definition.

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    This is my type of track..... i like writing and listin 2 this kind of ish.... and u made this one enjoyable 2 listin 2..... im fealin it...... nice drop tho..... keep that shit up
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  14. SadistiK1

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    I almost didnt even check the track.. I was thinkin " Ehh... Probably the same shit again... " But Im glad you proved me wrong

    This is by far the most honest and ambitious track Ive heard from you

    Beat is ill, verses are great, sounds genuine.... Not feelin the singing, but oh well, still my favorite song Ive heard from you....

    1st verse was definitely the highlight, sounded really honest. Good job, save the hook this is really ill
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  15. Hibernation

    Hibernation Well-Known Member

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    This Shits SICK Homie

    Stick With This Style, Its More You An Sounds WAY More Polished, Sicknesss Ten Fold
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  16. PPRO

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    Yo, the song came off as a real emotional joint. Like I don't have to ask I just know this shit is based off some real shit. The song value for me is something I would have to be in that mood. One of those emcee smoke an L and like get gone from everybody but my music type moods. other wise this proably wouldn't get to much play. I like the song and the second verse was killer. Just so mood setting for me. Hot though.
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  17. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    wo the beat is sick ... so is the flow on it damn Im feelin this from the jump ...
    youre recordin quality is mad good too ...voice is sick nice ass drop son ....
    hook I wasnt really feelin it jus sounded off to me not off beat but jus somethin ...
    but damn youre verses are fire son .... concept was nice man hit up mine

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=926540
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  18. _Organik_

    _Organik_ Deaf Villian This Guy's

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    Dope shit... nice emotion .... i like you on your horrorcore style but this shit is ill to .....

    keep it iLL
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  19. Neyedus

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    yo Rhaw, could you possibly send me this beat?
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  20. Chaostheory

    Chaostheory New Member

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    love the emotion.. its great. Lotta dislikes on the chorus.. could i fix one up for you? that would be raw.. unless u wanna take the time to.. like neye said.. luv it when u sing. rofl.. ayways.. good drop.. always lookin for your latest to d/l
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