You Can Try But You Can't Hold Me Down

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  1. Rasp

    Rasp D-Tai-Bai Records

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  2. Rasp

    Rasp D-Tai-Bai Records

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  3. illOmen

    illOmen I SuCk

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    interesting beat, real different, first verse was good, not feelin the hook that much, some of the lyrics could be a bit more advanced, the vocab too

    stay up
    test
  4. OneSinXIII

    OneSinXIII I Am, What Comes Next

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    beat is generic from fruity loops or some shit, but it aint that bad, im not really feelin this that much sorry, but lemme break it down, the lyrics arent anything special, no real concepts like most kats come with but this is very different, i do not like the hook what so ever, the delivery is kinda boreing, sounds like you havnt been flowing that long or writing one, but you did ya thang son, holla back

    peep the new track!
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1019247
    test
  5. Psicobabble

    Psicobabble Rebellious Rhetoric

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    Wuddup man. Flow is simple but it's steady and calculated. Sounds comfortable enough. Chorus is IIGHT yeah. not the best but by NO means the worst. Just needed to be doubled. your verse sounds more doubled than your chorus. the beat is ehhhh. Nah u doin ya thing though. keep dropping
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