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Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by FukkedUPKidR, Jul 31, 2003.

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  1. Teen Prodigy

    Teen Prodigy Short2003's e-child

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    I dunno maybe its just me, but the actual pen hitting the paper is therapy,physically making art its like my mind is connected to the pen... and if they come together just right.. u have some ill poetry ;). Writting on the computer takes away some element of purity for me...but to each his own i guess...lol.. it dont matter .. cuz that poem u just dropped is still perfection [teet]
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  2. skandelous_lala

    skandelous_lala back from the dead

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    i'm the same way, dunno why but it is easier for some reason

    anyways...awesome piece, i really enjoyed reading this. great job.
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  3. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    I too find it easier for some reason to do writing using the computer, Im feelin ya on that so if it's odd then Im odd too:)
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  4. Teen Prodigy

    Teen Prodigy Short2003's e-child

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    all of y'all are weeeeeeeeeeeird lol
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  5. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    yea nice job, i was really feeling this piece.


    stay up, much love, peace
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  6. Old Soul

    Old Soul Nipple Nibbler

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    This should be made into a song, seriously. You have a great way with words & play on them effortlessly sometimes.

    Another great piece.
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  7. Royal Sovereign

    Royal Sovereign New Member

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    I could see the light of day through your words
    Then I heard..
    And I felt the rain, when it poured
    My pain
    …And all the hope I had restored, beat me down slowly
    Knowing every time you swore….


    ^^^ wow.... what can i say, this was excellent. Very intense and well written.
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