<*xXx* 6 Bars'n Keep It Movin' *xXx*>

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  1. Gen The God

    Gen The God The Life or Death Poet

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    Same here, I kick back with a 40, down three of those...
    drunk to the point I can't see my toes and my chest is freezing cold...
    f*** heat, a liquor buzz'll leave my heart frozen.....a smart person...
    would know to start boltin before I squeeze their neck til they start chokin!!!
    I'ma rhyme pro with the sharp lines dice foes into parts...
    last thing you'll see is my eyes glow in the dark before this knife goes through ya heart!!!
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  2. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    no one comes close to this explosiveness, blowin' micr'phones all apart
    hear some sparks of wisdom, like a light show in the dark
    I spit fire, I write friction, so don't rub me the wrong way
    just another long day, smothered in some other's songplayin'
    it's all plain and simple to see, even my falls gain a victor's defeat
    false statements, visUally: a small pane, a window apiece (small pain, window of piece)
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  3. Gen The God

    Gen The God The Life or Death Poet

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    Whip our dicks out and piss on you all day, while ya'll lames sittin to pea...
    real niggas aim differently, while these faggots consistently talk gay...
    I'm a leap on these rappers, put a cease to the chatter...
    cleave through the meat, slice you from ya spleen to ya bladder...
    this PHILLY chick claimed she gotta man, but he doesn't matter...
    5 minutes later her legs SPREAD like CREAM CHEESE on a CRACKER!!!
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  4. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    it's silly here, most a' these emcees cause me laughter
    it's really weird, i'm postin' things that leave 'em freezin' an shattered
    hangin' on every choice word like floridian chads were
    and the ballots are in, the rarest pick, of an iridium rapper
    a notch above platinum artists, but I wasn't that far into 'em after
    my precious metallic ore went through a purification transfer
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  5. Gen The God

    Gen The God The Life or Death Poet

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    Question the gallant force of my talent and I'm sure that you'll hate the answer...
    a force-able rapist slash transformable raging cancer...
    I never trained with pampers, just dropped s**t where ever I felt...
    from day 1 with these blazing stanzas, leave rappers endangered like Asian Pandas...
    straight bananas with visions of murder and women screaming in agony...
    as incisions slit through the cervical tissue ripping their kid...s*** is a tragedy!!!
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  6. mczackaryg

    mczackaryg New Member

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    Its tragedy these bitches had to be stuck up guess they high on them selves
    i be high to blowin coke up nose blow more lines than hor blowin dudes,
    bitch showin me attitude im mad u make u suck my dick so i be rude,
    dont give 2 fucks like i give ur mom 3 fucks a day as she gives me my pay
    she pays good for a b***h thats poor, got that p*ssy sore that ma a good lay
    as good as lays chips get out the dip an munch an crunch, potatoes for lunch
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  7. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    what the fuck? dumb, and young, but, I used to think it was the shit
    to do so much coke, drownin' my old sorrows 'til my upperlip
    becomes a snow plow like no tomorrow, drinkin' like a fish
    smokin' like a ...fuckin', salmon, 'til I swam up stream
    quit lettin' the flow control me and began my own thing
    grew legs and dropped the gills, landed attached to no strings
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  8. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    The things we lean on
    with busted spleens
    horror dreams seen
    I’m a dreamer call me the king of themes
    I sit by the waist side
    like that thing on my waist righ…
    it gets hot when shot none stop
    so blood clots get buckshots
    leave em’ bloodshot in a bloodspot
    ((HOldUp))I need to stop…
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  9. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    so if ONE DROPLET hits the OLD rug, LET ALONE the CARPET, don't just TOSS IT
    ARSON the whole FUCKIN' HOME, unless there's PLENTY of AMMONIA in the chemical CLOSET
    i'm at the PINNACLE of SOLVIN' this METRIC KIND of unSMARTness from these AMATEURS
    too many SYLLABLES' the PROBLEM? nah, yer TETRA-MINDED, these BARS are in PENTAMETER
    meaning, FIVE NODS of yer HEAD IN A LINE, i'm aHEAD A' MY TIME, it's HARD to underSTAND BUT YER
    CHALLENGE IS THIS...rap outSIDE a' this BLACK BOX for once and START some EVANGELIST SHIT

    *typical rap beat timing is tetrameter (4/4 or 4/8), this would be considered 5/6, capitolized bits only to define general location of "beat expression" try it, pentameter opens your mind, and it sounds neat on 4/4 beat as well, keeps stepping forward on it...
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  10. mizzOe.

    mizzOe. valiumaddict

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    i've yet to see someone make me pause when they flow
    i'm a herbal addict, blow so much clouds i cause tornadoes
    i torch and flame those chosen few who step in my vicinity
    give dap to those who feelin' me - then go on a vicious killing spree
    man this is me in my realty, it's just in my nature to be hatin' you heavy
    i'm breaking you steady before i slash through you with Jason's machete
    fuk are you ready? cuz like the a single nut, you couldn't test, I
    think about it, cuz when i bless mics, all of the rest die
    so get off this page if you can't hang with the greatest
    your language is hated cuz you're just bad with session rhymes
    and it looks like some of you took my advice a tad ahead of time
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  11. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Been doing pentameter for many years,kid...drawn from iambic pentameter.My good friend Spitfire and SpitShyne have also done it...both did it before me in styles that I hadn't done.A few years after I did it,guys like Gen the God have done it too.I have multihundred bars with pent sextuple and a few octasyllable flows in it. Good to see someone else has the range knowledge and daring to step it up. Welcome to the Flow of The Chosen Few...
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  12. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    thanks deth, yea, i'm old, been doin' weird mathematical crap for awhile, was into poetry before i even liked rappy stuff, i'd like to find a talented enough beatmaker to to atypical time stuff and make whole songs, but eh...

    and mizzoe, it's 6 bars...of whatever *ameter you so choose and try to keep with the rhyme/topic above you, coccyx...


    you need a device to craft a better line, sliced in half a second by
    the nicest asshole ever, why? 'cause I like to smash contestant minds
    I decided that ahead a' time, now the chime has passed, press rewind
    find the track and let it grind until yer spine is cracked a second time
    yer disc skips a vital beat, you're already plenty lame an' at fault miz
    beefin' dirty, you need to end it, or get put on the FDA's recalled list
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  13. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    Oh if I be like him
    seem like them, sound like them
    then I wouldn’t be like me
    I am like please…
    I am chemistry in imagery
    Got haters equilibrium on lop-sidedness
    I op-out of those similarity spits.....
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  14. JASON ANTHONY

    JASON ANTHONY White Devil

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    I'm a guy gone psycho, you guys know, I'm the type ta type on typos,
    Constantly high on hydros, tight though, quick ta let bygones be bygones though?

    no

    When I breathe I leave an impression, there's no question why I'm the mod here,
    Been dope since birth, I'm 26, tell your bitch that's almost 4 in dog years,
    6 bars is nothin, apart from fuckin, I do this best so don't start nothin,
    You still got my last bars stuck in your head from the last time I ripped you apart, cousin.
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  15. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    I’m above the rim snitches
    tupacalypse now skitz
    I don’t give a phuck
    smacking haters like a mack truck
    got snitches ready to sue me for 50 bucks
    so go ahead and act Young-Buck
    your luck's unevenness, this I sense,
    there lack in ambition, i stay impressive
    only because my aim's as sassiness
    your fame dreams keep me laughin at your miss
    while my money stacks keep me adaptin to bullshit...
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  16. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    What's good JA!!
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  17. JASON ANTHONY

    JASON ANTHONY White Devil

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    Life is, bruh.

    I see you're still holdin it down in here.
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  18. mizzOe.

    mizzOe. valiumaddict

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    I pass the blessings, on the mic I kept these bastards guessing
    breathless tryin' to school motherfuckers, like we asked for lessons?
    cuz judging by your past progressions - you were always whack
    a whorish cat who produces nothing but garbage and boring raps
    it's all an act, my flow be vicious i spit and flip cars with it
    i got rhymes for days - so fuck you and your six bar limit
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  19. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    My god...I'm just just sayin'...shit, 'tard, quit it...
    I didn't make the cypher topic, I'm just a bit part in it
    all this bitchin' and whinin' kid, go cry fer ya momma
    my first drop ever was better than the finest you've gotten
    man, if i really wanted to i could do a five minute long diss
    track against your ass so simple an' have no issues on the song tip
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  20. mizzOe.

    mizzOe. valiumaddict

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    that's a tad wrong kid - you could try but can't hit this savage
    you could make a 4hr diss, but ya bars still lack punches, like christian taverns
    my spits be spazzin' - hurting kids and their bitch feelings
    you remind me of myself, when i took a dump... this evening
    ha, fuck it, i'm rhyming and just sonnin' kids for enjoyment
    and B you be doing man/dates without government employment.
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