XpOeT 3-2 vs. ExodusIII 3-3

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  1. Strike

    Strike packin that metal

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    RBL North Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due Friday night 12:00am Pacific
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm Pacific
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

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    All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
    A line is 1 length of the screen.
    u must agree on an amount in ya check in
    & match whatever amount u agree on


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    1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra
    vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Everybody MUST vote on the champ matches!!
    And they do not count as part as your required 5 votes.

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  2. XpOeT

    XpOeT no title needed

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  3. ExodusIII

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    exodus bitch...i'm off the meter
    it's the 4th of july...
    only sparks you'll be seein is from the heater
    i'm signing out muthafucka....then i'm back son
    a clean slate's the only thing this heads gettin cracked on
    this dude's a biter, but he claims he's only borrowing
    he'd probly spit a cum line if he wasn't busy swallowing
    yeah...i'm wallowing in my own self pity
    man, i'd pity xpoet but the dude's just shitty
    dude get to flipping...and i aint talkin burgers
    i'm talkin fingers...in burners to leave you murdered
    opposition i merk em...well i usually do
    i can't believe this shit...man i'm losin to YOU
    call yourself xpoet...you aint a thug you frontin
    bitch, shouldn't be writing about love or somethin

    bleh...good luck mayne...not that you'll need it
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  4. XpOeT

    XpOeT no title needed

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    Exodus is a couple knotches down from being fuck ugly/
    Its obvious G Units in ya mouth like Young Buck is ya fuck buddy/
    You been talkin shit, better rinse and spit with listerine/
    Watch me blaze up this fag like i need a fix of nicotine/
    You a crack head's bitch, so now a days ur known as Mrs. Fiend/
    This battles like industrial waste sites, fuck trying to keep it clean!/
    Out of curiosity, since when can gay rappers drop straight garbage/
    I'll make'em suck off marvel characters so he can taste Carnage/
    go ahead and tip some cows, and try to squash beef/
    This kids has no heart,thats why he's always off beat/
    your concepts can be copped at swap meets,be real and admit it/
    Watch me pimp this bitch quick, like its a new show staring Xzibit/
    I don't like you Ex, so how the fuck can I make this shit clearer/
    You homophobic,so'll scare you to death by lockin you in a house of mirrors/

    suffice.....
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  5. Dark-Vybe

    Dark-Vybe Active Member

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    i'm signing out muthafucka....then i'm back son
    a clean slate's the only thing this heads gettin cracked on
    straight

    this dude's a biter, but he claims he's only borrowing
    he'd probly spit a cum line if he wasn't busy swallowing
    this line accually made me LOL

    opposition i merk em...well i usually do
    i can't believe this shit...man i'm losin to YOU
    heh

    call yourself xpoet...you aint a thug you frontin
    bitch, shouldn't be writing about love or somethin
    lol, nice play

    seems you didnt try an still came witty an clownin
    sweet verse

    ...

    I'll make'em suck off marvel characters so he can taste Carnage/
    heh

    your concepts can be copped at swap meets,be real and admit it/
    Watch me pimp this bitch quick, like its a new show staring Xzibit/
    lol, creative

    I don't like you Ex, so how the fuck can I make this shit clearer/
    You homophobic,so'll scare you to death by lockin you in a house of mirrors/
    ouch

    you thought outside the box alil more
    reached for harder punches


    honestly, yall went with 2 differant styles, both worked out pretty badass
    good battle to both
    sorry but, vote = tie
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  6. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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    this was a close battle

    this dude's a biter, but he claims he's only borrowing
    he'd probly spit a cum line if he wasn't busy swallowing
    ^^haha
    vs

    your concepts can be copped at swap meets,be real and admit it/
    Watch me pimp this bitch quick, like its a new show staring Xzibit/
    ^^coo

    but imma vote Xpoet, u had a ok verse, but its betta than last week fam...so keep at it and you will get better, and Exodus u had a aight verse
    i could only find 1 quote out of Xpoet's verse, he had some good ideas, but it wasn't worded good so it didn't have a good effect on Exodus III
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  7. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    X poet

    Out of curiosity, since when can gay rappers drop straight garbage/
    I'll make'em suck off marvel characters so he can taste Carnage/
    go ahead and tip some cows, and try to squash beef/
    This kids has no heart,thats why he's always off beat/

    didnt think thi was great but it was aight..and enough to win since exodus basically gave it to you...

    Exodus

    exodus bitch...i'm off the meter
    it's the 4th of july...
    only sparks you'll be seein is from the heater

    I thought u started off with fire but then just didnt care anymore..and went down here...
    okay verse...like isaid good opener bad closer..u just gave up...sign out and be 0-0 again lol what do u gain from that??

    my vote Xpoet
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  8. ExodusIII

    ExodusIII New Member

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    i'd rather be at 0-0 than 3-3....soon to be 3-4...

    good shit xpoet....pretty nice verse

    that was a keystyle by the way....i didn't expect any votes, but no showing's wack...so continue with the votes anyways....xpoet deserves some feedback for the effort he put into his verse...good shit
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  9. CONCOUYS

    CONCOUYS CONSCYOUS

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    your verse was aight but i missed wat u were trying to say at the end.
    and ex's verse prety munch took it home
    alot more punches and and better

    vote - expoet
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  10. Courtesy

    Courtesy Level With Me

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    honestly..

    ..im feelin Exodus way more, reminds me of "himselfs" style an his punches were more funny than determined

    xpoet alright verse hear an there, noticed alot of shit was forced but some lines were hot, the flow wasnt all there, but def a good try..

    ..all n all this was decent

    imma give it to
    ..Vote-Exodus
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  11. XpOeT

    XpOeT no title needed

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    3-1.........
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  12. Everybodys_Nig4ya

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    this battle was shitty....

    Ex.....i've seen you come better....maybe you should sign out until you get motivated again......decent i guess

    X.......ya flow was horrible.......you had some nice lines though......i haven't peeped you much....pretty decent...work on ya flow though dawg.....


    pretty 1 sided..........X-poet got this
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  13. U-TuRn

    U-TuRn me vs you? thats funny

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    This battle was pretty close. Both threw some decent punches while their presentation was on point. The wordplay of Poet is what swung my vote. His clear wordplay and punches throughout topped Exodus. Good Battle

    Vote-XPOET
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  14. XpOeT

    XpOeT no title needed

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    5-1....uppin
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  15. trey

    trey The Three Ball

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    xpoet will still win this regardless of my vote...but heres how i got it


    exodus bitch...i'm off the meter
    it's the 4th of july...
    only sparks you'll be seein is from the heater


    creative wordplay but pointless at the same time, so what the only sparks he will see is from the heater?...not really a diss ya know....decent tho


    i'm signing out muthafucka....then i'm back son
    a clean slate's the only thing this heads gettin cracked on


    dope, i like

    this dude's a biter, but he claims he's only borrowing
    he'd probly spit a cum line if he wasn't busy swallowing

    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!line of the battle...fire

    yeah...i'm wallowing in my own self pity
    man, i'd pity xpoet but the dude's just shitty

    filler not bad tho

    dude get to flipping...and i aint talkin burgers
    i'm talkin fingers...in burners to leave you murdered

    weak...if you deleted this your verse would have been much better

    opposition i merk em...well i usually do
    i can't believe this shit...man i'm losin to YOU

    as dope as something like this could be lol

    call yourself xpoet...you aint a thug you frontin
    bitch, shouldn't be writing about love or somethin

    not bad



    Exodus is a couple knotches down from being fuck ugly/
    Its obvious G Units in ya mouth like Young Buck is ya fuck buddy/

    g units in his mouth? makes no sense

    You been talkin shit, better rinse and spit with listerine/
    Watch me blaze up this fag like i need a fix of nicotine/

    decent flip on something thats been done since the begining of time

    You a crack head's bitch, so now a days ur known as Mrs. Fiend/
    This battles like industrial waste sites, fuck trying to keep it clean!/

    nothing

    Out of curiosity, since when can gay rappers drop straight garbage/
    I'll make'em suck off marvel characters so he can taste Carnage/

    setup is real nice, punch is cool too..worked real good

    go ahead and tip some cows, and try to squash beef/
    This kids has no heart,thats why he's always off beat/

    tip some cows lol no

    your concepts can be copped at swap meets,be real and admit it/
    Watch me pimp this bitch quick, like its a new show staring Xzibit/

    pretty good but you said watch ME pimp this bitch, not xzibit, so it really doesnt make much sense

    I don't like you Ex, so how the fuck can I make this shit clearer/
    You homophobic,so'll scare you to death by lockin you in a house of mirrors/

    nice, this and carnage line were your 2 best



    vote: Ex

    it came down to style and Ex just had more of it...line for line it was real close, but Ex just came on some different shit and it worked for me. Courtesy pretty much took the words outta my mouth.
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  16. ExodusIII

    ExodusIII New Member

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  17. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  18. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  19. Young Philly

    Young Philly Broad Street Bully

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    One sided here.
    X came better.
    Much better.
    Exodus had nothing I liked.
    X came more witty.

    V/Xpoet
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  20. marsellus

    marsellus nOne siCker

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    You a crack head's bitch, so now a days ur known as Mrs. Fiend/
    This battles like industrial waste sites, fuck trying to keep it clean!/
    Out of curiosity, since when can gay rappers drop straight garbage/
    I'll make'em suck off marvel characters so he can taste Carnage/
    go ahead and tip some cows, and try to squash beef/
    This kids has no heart,thats why he's always off beat/

    pretty nice portion, closer was iiiiight..

    ex was blah..

    vote - xpoet
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