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  1. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    www.myspace.com/jayo

    or

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=438157&songID=3772664

    top track tryin get feedback, beat is hot but i felt it was bad quality to begin, and im not professional enough to make it sound better with myself over it haha

    so yeah basically let me know lyrically, and all that, beat will change eventually
    preferably xclusive, so holla if you think you got somethin for this concept


    drop links


    ps: my vocals are up more now, should be even easier to understand
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  2. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    Atom React aka JAYO

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    Atom React aka JAYO

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  5. Sick-Sense

    Sick-Sense the muthafin ruggratt!

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    Good choice of beat. I can barely hear you my dude. The vocals seems very low, and has too much effect. Im not sure if its your mixing or possibly myspace. Myspace takes alot away from the quality. I like your voice, it's very smooth. From what I can hear, the flow sounds nice. Not really much to say from one verse. I would go back and redo the mixing. If my computer wasn't stupid, I would send you the beat.

    Be well.
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  6. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    i barely touch my vocals, thats why i said the beat was bad quality, however its normally mixed i dont know how to mix my vocals in with it properly so it comes across right, thats why ima end up changing the beat, but for now you kno, anyways yeah myspace takes a little away to, good looks tho on lettin me kno
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  7. Higher Rhymes

    Higher Rhymes Active Member

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    Althought the vocals are low and quality could be upped.. very str8 drop
    you have a HOTT flow.. always loved this beat too.. very hot lines up in here "fell for himself..world trade" etc.. wow.. nice content.. mayne i'm just feelin your overall steeze, you bring that chill, yet "in your face" thing.. its dope can't really explain lol peep mine

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=976952
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  8. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    good looks homie i appreciate that "wow" and "nice content" more then anything you said, i got a lot to say but it always gets overlooked
    ima hit you off rright now
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  9. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    theres no winning..
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  10. Predator INC

    Predator INC New Member

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    likin this beat. well first off you got a good voice and ya lyrics on point. like the concept in the first verse talkin bout its betta to be where that person at (heaven) then here. likin them samples u usin for the vocals. good quality on the mic. good shit. we should collab. 1.
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  11. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    good looks homie ill def look into you again for some tracks ima be doin sometime soon
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  12. Look im Gangsta

    Look im Gangsta New Member

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    This about a deployed and deceased brother?
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  13. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    naa its about my grandpa.. he passed away BEFORE all that stuff had happened
    and im going through telling him what happened since his time feel me?

    he wasnt here for george bush jr pres, but he was for his father
    he didnt see the world trade bombed
    or this whole al-qaeda shit with osama behind it

    i thought it'd be a good concept instead of just saying we miss you to explain to him what hes missed since hes been gone, i coulda got waay more into detail throughout both verses, but i just wanted to start it off that way and go into just saying "everythings wrong"
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  14. Look im Gangsta

    Look im Gangsta New Member

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    Word, I definatly feel it. I got a better version of the beat (I think) laying around on CD. I'll put it up if you want it (and I can find it).

    I felt that 'Try it black' track too.

    You've come quite far from when I last peeped you (iono if you remember me back then (yo momma 2nd))
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  15. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    yeah i knew ya name looked familiar
    haha that try it black shit was cause my mans at college said i couldnt hit up that beat so i had to
    but if you do got a better quality version id definately appreciate it, just let me kno

    either pm or on aim

    j18yo
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  16. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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  17. .Phantom.

    .Phantom. Hit you with a Bat, Man.

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    beat is nice.

    i just raised my volume- i guess thats a good thing haha

    voice is nice and smooth about it, im liking your lyrics and your steez on this. flowing real nice. quality and vocal volume sounds fine.

    emotion and delivery are all pretty dope. im liking this.

    hook is pretty cool, now on for the 2nd verse.

    taught me to be a good man if im ahead or not, soundin nice. delivery is dope, this is a pretty dope track fam. flow is nice. i cant rap and i aint got no place in these beats.

    this was a pretty dope track fam, goods hit.


    return the feed man
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  18. VerbalMercenary

    VerbalMercenary New Member

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    im kinda feelin the track i dont usually listen to songs over a commercial beat that everyone knows i tend to compare it to the origianl song but u definitely rocked the kanye beat propa the vocals was a lil lo but lyrics was on some real shit def good drop check me out on myspace or suttin pz
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  19. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    good looks i will
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