X Marks The Spot

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  1. ChyllTyrant

    ChyllTyrant AmIEternalOrAnEternalist?

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    this one's f'n crazy... i was trying to replicate an old style that i used... and came up with something completely new... tho i'm not surprised, i surmise that you will likely find this confusing as confuscious.





    X Marks The Spot


    the power of a radical
    of a radial time
    pi

    the multiplication of self


    the negative and the positive
    i neva give what i gotta live



    once more i am, denying my livid life
    but the pessimist, pissing a mist
    living in denial? call me wise
    calling my why’s, division of the vision




    (the problem is probably finished)
    solution: mixture
    sediment: sentiment





    lie within my lair...
    (the lyre’s lyric)
    the layers of a liar






    x________________
    (sign your name here)
    test
  2. screamer

    screamer New Member

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    Crazy chaos theory.... you made it personal. Nice read
    test
  3. nathedawg

    nathedawg New Member

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    lie within my lair...
    (the lyre’s lyric)
    the layers of a liar

    sign your name here

    this was crazy as fuck man... like you said!! lol

    but like screamer said above me Crazy chaos theory... you did make it personal

    props tooshort
    test
  4. ChyllTyrant

    ChyllTyrant AmIEternalOrAnEternalist?

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    thanks for the replies... try to look deeper than just seeing the chaos theory tho, see what it means to u in ur life...

    PEACE
    test
  5. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    this was nuts.....

    lovein the creativity...

    despite me being really confused on teh first read i managed to make it through a lot easier the second time around

    lol

    favorite lines

    lie within my lair...
    (the lyre’s lyric)
    the layers of a liar
    test
  6. Those were my favourite lines also, very interesting piece
    test
  7. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    Man I dont know what the fuck you are talking about and Im to damn tired to read to far into it, sorry. Got crazy ass wordplay though. I'm not use to reading a style such as this,I guess that kind of makes it harder for me to try and figure out what the hell you are trying to say, or the message that you are trying to get across.


    Stay Up, Much Love, Peace
    test
  8. ChyllTyrant

    ChyllTyrant AmIEternalOrAnEternalist?

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    thanks for the support lpoet and brit... i iike those lines a lot as well...

    and thanks for nothin allnakey...

    PEACE
    test
  9. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    wooooord up....another gem from you man....(rep points for creativity!!!)

    this was crazy on multi levels...lol....it had me puzzled

    sounded more like a complex math problem

    then the simple ending...X marks the spot....clueless to the info just sign your name on the dotted line....lol

    I dunno what to make of this but I liked it alot

    thanks for the headache...hahaha

    PEACE AND GODBLESS
    test
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