Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Everybodys_Nig4ya, Aug 31, 2005.
new track from ya boy Damonik
YAY or NAY???
DROP LINKZ PLEAZE
..especially for that ol' school LL beat haha..dope
thats not bad bro.. thats actually alot better than i expected.. voice is hot, flow wasnt bad there were times where u could ride it a bit better.. ur delivery i think needs the most work, u gotta spit it with confidence and come harder.. u got the lyrics and the voice, just spit that shit like theres no one better.. keep it up bro, definitly lookin forward to hearin more, piece 1
word....i was tryna stay laid back wit my delivery...but i see where u comin.....g'lucks
yea this is on some grown man shit
it's mad laid back but the doubles u did add some energy to it
overall this was actually kinda impressive
since it was my first time peepin u
keep it up man, holla
the next foo to sleep on me is getting B.I.T.C.HS.M.A.C.K.E.D
hustle & heat got best audio by far
u aint neva lied
we need to collab, soon as art gives me one of his dl joints, me and you
holla on aim
ill drop response in hookups
fa sho fam.....
remind me of young chris from the young gunz
a lil too laid back i think...need a lil more emotion...could ride the beat a lil better
lyrics is right.....
and lol@ that beat
thnx fo peepin cuz'n
i try to treat every song i listen to/or make like a album joint,
this was coo, what beat is that?
your adlibs were off a lot, by the placin an tone of voice, but, you got a lot of potential, you just gotta get a style that fit you an run wit it. the lyrics was solid, they were the best part of the song. overall, the song just sound real ameture-ish. but i feel you mayn.
i been thru some mess just like that, dont stress over that bitch mayn, im tellin you, its her loss. you gotta move forward an handle your owe shit as a man and as a father, an bein a man comes first, because only a man can be a father. dont get caught up in that drama, thats what she prolly wants, but you need to focus on what you need to do, understand? good luck mayn.
return the love if you get a chance http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=12591238#post12591238
g'looks......imma peep when i get a chance
im droppin a new audio soon......make sure yall keep an eye out for the kid
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