Wrote this for someone' Wedding...Quick Read...

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  1. MISSKEYdaQUEEN

    MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther..

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    UNION OF TWO

    Love takes on forms of many kinds
    mother and father
    sister and brothr
    parent and child
    and then lover.
    The union of two is the natural order
    of things.
    The union of two can bring forth
    miraculous things.
    When love is the key that brings two into one
    the natural order of life has begun.
    They pledge to follow the path that HE
    has set before them.
    The two will work together to be a model
    in life.
    And under God the union of two
    BECOMES ONE.
    test
  2. Dark_Angel

    Dark_Angel Dark_Angel

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    u said this at a wedding? it really suits, i like the poem although simple its heartfelt. nice work
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  3. *Princess*

    *Princess* skantless bitch

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    i liked this...gives a message of love...
    i liked how it was so simple but yet there was more to it...good job
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  4. mama21

    mama21 panama-red@blackplanet

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    i felt this ..that was good
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  5. MISSKEYdaQUEEN

    MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther..

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    Thanks all..I'll try to drop more
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  6. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    please do so...i always loved your work....

    this was so simple but it said so much...nice to see poems with good messeges in them.....
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  7. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Short and too the point. Heartfelt piece

    one luv
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  8. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    nice ms thang :)
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  9. the.dirtiest

    the.dirtiest inactive

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    i'm glad you're back :)
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