Wrote this 2 my homegirl cause shes DEPRESSED: Intricate Roads Take TIme to Untangle

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  1. mysticwarrior

    mysticwarrior New Member

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    Im not claiming to be a poet or rapper or anything, it feels good to put feelings down onto paper..... My homegirl is all depressed about her ex dating other girls and tough for her to be friends with him at the same time. (you've probably been there) After I heard Jay-Z's Dear Summer beat, it sorta inspired me to write this to her. So i probably will give her this poem along with some flowers hoping it'll cheer her up a bit.


    Title: Intricate Roads Take Time to Untangle

    When you know times are tough, you know that's reality,
    If you think the moment's tough, worse is to feel your lifes a catastrophe,
    So many things you've went through when you were young, u were fine up to today,
    Today's problems will be your tomorrow's laughs of the day,
    I know you have pain, it hurts so much inside,
    You know I'll always be there for you, always by your side,
    Do what it takes to put a smile on your face,
    it hurts me too, to see someone close to have their emotions misplaced,
    You're stronger than that, just keep telling yourself that,
    Keep Fighting to find the light, you know where the light switch is at,
    Random thoughts crossing your mind, so hard to exclude
    Keep reminding yourself priorities in life, you got better things to do,
    The pain's intact, someting you'll never forget,
    Memories are forever, the more you fight, the stronger you get,
    Overcome many obstacles, a game of chess he's only a peon,
    You worked yourself hard up in school and work, from the guttter and getting
    peed on,
    Dont let this problem stop you, cause its not even the icying on the cake,
    Just shake it off your shoulders cause theres plenty better guys to date,
    you got close family & friends always there to support you,
    Dont think too much girl, I was there too,
    I felt like hurting myself, it totally drove my crazy,
    I was probably more extreme than you were, so dont feel lonely,
    It was just a matter of time , til my first rebirth,
    Light shined and i finally breathed & enjoyed staying on earth,
    So just hold onto your saddle longer, its a wild ride,
    Til we stop running into speed bumps in life, thats when we die,
    Learning to move on, thats the hardest thing to get through,
    Take it easy girl, we're all here for you.
    test
  2. LadyL257

    LadyL257 New Member

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    :-( lol i been havin mixed emotions for..as far back as i could remember... im use 2 it lol
    but...u did a real nyce drop on this topic...almost made me feel like cryin cuz i use to feel it ws bad to feel depressed and down...but shit its lyfe.. i guess

    1luv
    test
  3. h.wood

    h.wood IMAGINATION SUPER STAR

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    what a nice poem for a friend in need. im sure she'll appriciate it^
    test
  4. Clarksvegas_Dan

    Clarksvegas_Dan Registered Voter

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    I thought this was pretty cool. Very honest sentiment, touching. Thanks for posting.
    test
  5. mysticwarrior

    mysticwarrior New Member

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    thanks for your responses ladies and gentz. She loved it and she felt alot better with her whole drama.
    test
  6. RealMS

    RealMS Ne te quaesiveris extra

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    ^That was very thoughtful. This poem read pretty smooth and I don't know what else to say except I enjoyed reading it. People do appreciate the little things, believe that :thumb:

    -Much Love
    test
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