Wrong Side of The Reflection

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by absolute zero, Apr 9, 2005.

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  1. absolute zero

    absolute zero Among the living

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    This was for the PTL, but jackle no showed, so I never even got to see what peeps thought about it, so check.....



    Bring me stories of life, dark shadow!
    I brought my pen along;
    May I use this mirror, wayside?

    Forgive me, I can never step to see myself.
    This glass is barbed wire:
    Smooth, and delicate to the touch.

    "Stay for a while." My bleeding host pleads.
    And if I skip the quaint pleasantries,
    I guess we'll see what it means.

    So I'll unpack my things,
    And lay quiet on the twisting sidestreets,
    Waiting to hear the tale

    Of anything that happens to myself
    When the mirror spins backwards
    And my life breaks within it's easel.
    test
  2. RealMS

    RealMS Ne te quaesiveris extra

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    "Stay for a while." My bleeding host pleads.
    And if I skip the quaint pleasantries,
    I guess we'll see what it means.


    I've been goin through that kinda stuff lately, kind of similar but really just...erhhm, uncalled for. Like if someone tells you something during a conversation, its expected that you ask-what do you mean, or it leads to another explanation. Well me, I try to see if I can get to what its about but it just leads to another thing. Get what I'm saying lol? IDK, it gets agitating, just say what you really feel! Dang... its like a think line you're on, but anyway

    you know what? I think I misinterpreted what you were saying....-take a chance, lets see what happens-and I took it another way. Still and all, eh I'll go back and read this. My reply probably makes no absolute sense.

    -Much Love
    test
  3. AlmostFamous

    AlmostFamous U got a problem?

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    scratches head

    dunno about this one man..

    need some clarification...
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  4. absolute zero

    absolute zero Among the living

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    yeah i kind of took it very literally. Wrong side of the reflection. It's about being trapped in the mirror, watching "yourself" live a very eventful life, and you can't escape the mirror to see for your own self.....i dunno, i'm nuts dude.
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  5. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    ^Kinda figured this was what the topic was about.

    This was a really good piece though. I think I need to start taking some ideas from the ptl and try to write some shit lol. Uppin for the sleepers though

    One luv
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  6. skandelous_lala

    skandelous_lala back from the dead

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    It was really hard for me personally to get a grasp on what you were talking about. That doesn't mean it was bad though by any means. Just b/c I didn't understand it doesn't mean anything lol

    Once you explained it reread it again and it helped..still a nice piece no doubt.
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