Written Voice

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  1. Philly_215

    Philly_215 The Silent Poet

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    Do you look at the words
    Analyze the diction , try to see their perspective
    Listen to their vision,
    Come to terms and understand their intentions

    When its written do you listen
    Can you hear it clear, the written voice
    Did you know it was there
    Spoken in different languages
    Depending on what suits you
    The written voice is the future

    Wait and just listen,,,,
    Over the noises of the streets
    Or the insanity your parents speak
    Beyond the comprehension of just your peers
    Or the one you hold dear,
    The world feels just…...

    Listen
    The written voice is there
    Step away from the crying baby
    Or the evil stares of a jealous acquaintance
    Sanity awaits its here in my pages
    Its there on their pads, there in their books
    Their hearts speak out listen and find out

    In the world of billions you aren't alone
    The voice speaks to you,
    welcomes you into our homes
    Come we have much to speak on
    test
  2. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    only 2 post allowed on the board at a time

    one of the MODs will close this
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  3. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    ^yup..

    piece was nice...

    Listen
    The written voice is there
    Step away from the crying baby
    Or the evil stares of a jealous acquaintance
    Sanity awaits its here in my pages
    Its there on their pads, there in their books
    Their hearts speak out listen and find out


    nice..thought that this was dope b/c it was from a different perspective then i usually write from

    Make sure u hit up some other pieces and i'm sure this will get more replies
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  4. illpoetical

    illpoetical raising the bar everyday

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    i liked this alot. you kept it very retrospective and in a way it was biographical. tight piece
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  5. Philly_215

    Philly_215 The Silent Poet

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    thanks and once again sorry about posts to many poems at one time. Replies on the way for others
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  6. Playeress

    Playeress New Member

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    Written voice

    I really gotta say that the poem flowed really well and kept me interested the whole way, nice work
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  7. THE TAURUS

    THE TAURUS NOTHING BUT RAGE

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    You know who this be

    Good Peace
    It basically spoke for itself.
    It flowed nicely.
    Keep hem coming.
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  8. Clarksvegas_Dan

    Clarksvegas_Dan Registered Voter

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    Real cool piece here. I liked it, kinda talkin about knowing when and how to listen and speak. Sometimes I have to take the cotton out of my ears and stick it in my mouth, and I like to rant so it's not easy. They got so much things to say....
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  9. SAMARA

    SAMARA truth is a sword

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    i likes.
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