writing unspoken words

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  1. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    do you see it clear
    walls I've built from tear bricks
    on foundations of fear
    near school zones, on tomb stones but learned quick
    another burned bitch, fuck i care
    but here i stare clearly away her pain's shared
    when those eyes welled with love and hatred
    something scared
    the kind of love that makes it
    take backs, breaks.. it's five oh
    why no? shit, bye hoe
    sorry i gotta leave you, didn't deceive you
    but i be who? oh, thought you knew
    im out, in n linen that's fire proof
    dont perspire, smooth
    i admire whoever whether the storms
    but i never been born a kid, I'm my motivation
    know the nation can't have my DNA live
    i give nothin back and take you for everything
    look..my eyes in the mirror.. don't see anything
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  2. Baby OJ

    Baby OJ The Freestyle Rapper

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    thats what's up Patrown! keep it up. It's on.
    Baby OJ
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  3. patrown

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    this can't be good.

    when the customer looks me right in the eye
    i'm mistook for just a nerd it's quite a disguise
    is it right to be so wrong and like it
    or should i be strong and fight it
    it might get redundant like sonic's day
    so i blow out an abundant chronic haze
    it's wrong in ways, but the song plays better
    when the only screams come in capital letters
    from the sun that beams with laughable pleasure
    taking tactical measures as an impractical gesture
    of retribution, testing solution with confusion of masses
    misusing it's gases on hapless tests, solutions extracted
    from the excuses for proof the world came from passion
    of a celestial being employed by half a ration
    destroyed by practical fashion.. galactic smashin
    star stunnin far runnin but far from the black vacuum
    i rock a silver kirby with a quivering urges to laugh at doom
    back at room one, door three.. before me's a sorely missed site
    Dad watching his wife in a rip tide as she's ripped right outta life
    about a right reason, night seizin seizures from benny withdrawls
    watching pennys dissolve in nose candy, while brandy chilled
    hands be filled.. standing still, commanding will to slam and I will
    inject iris hypodermic i just learned in the jugular works
    dont mind the regular squirts my head doesn't hurt too bad
    lurk,, twio pads got my attention
    eight plots i should mention on a secure extension
    i blure relentless lines pointing at me
    so defenseless.. they join the police
    i point at a crease in my pillow
    why aint my mint stuck to a brillow pad
    still go bad.. feel so sad.. freal tho had I mentioned
    im a ball of tension with a fall complexion pacing halls
    tracing the walls with the faintest touch falling on spaces small
    taste the wall.. not the place at all.
    only basements have the fragrance of where you'll finally fall
    __
    he's been smoking that cigar for nearly a month now
    it goes out.. and lights up on it's own, some how
    at sun down his horse lifts him by his shirt
    tucking him into the fresh dirt of his stables
    his neck burst with the neighs of fallen in fables
    when kaine and able strained to cradle romulus in a ladle
    food for thought.. ought to improve the thoughts you could lose
    wrotten and used, forgotten.. abused,
    boughten and confused, sodden and bruised
    staring into his eyes and surprise at the view
    to know exactly the impact he had to lose
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    as a child he only knew his mother and the books
    not the world outside they spoke of or how it it looked
    she cooked three squares and stayed aware always
    listening for Edward senior walking in the hallway
    It's wrong they waited patiently for the day when it came
    When the wood had given away, open house to the frame
    she motioned out the door on the last day I saw him
    carrying a check for the task as a deposit
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  5. patrown

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    it's her pleasure

    that pink shirt was unmistakable as it grew close
    with the same burnt clothing people knew most of
    the close up reveals skin peeling from exposure
    but the missing jaw cant hide screams for closure
    when it seems its over, she dove for the door
    landed sideways like a snake in a stove on the floor
    winding through the wake of time forsaking sunshine
    seeking night and taking in the way it gives some light
    you could run right up on a child partly showing
    hopes end, know friend, little Darcy's hardly broken
    an aging adolescent died at the age of seven
    and every ten years after, forever in seconds
    burnin and turnin in her grave in the wreaking decay
    seeking a way to play against the demons she made
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  6. patrown

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    does this make sense
    is the world too dense to see
    the line between we and me
    we can make it
    but it's on me to take it
    so choose with vacant thoughts
    or lose everything you've got
    the world brings it's pain into your home
    even know it's there eatin dinner alone
    there's no winner of thrones, just beginners
    and those who entered later
    went for greater goals, saw higher obstacles
    sent to the maker whole.. but burning in fires optional
    so when my starters pulled, n my markers dull
    who do i get to draw?
    the world alone, with the pearl light shone
    through the gates ive kept long closed
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  7. patrown

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    YAH way in over my head.. Stay sober and get to it
    Gimme a clover a pen, ill be a soldier in cement stupid
    Where's the yet to be heard?
    When did you say.. Next one day.. "ill be a nerd!!l
    soap boax throat talk,deep as the shallow end
    gallows roping halos that lead to
    alternate ends
    Where the fuck is it?
    Bunch of damn trucks. Air horn. Get It.
    Burn past unleaded stops at sand pit s "like a boss"
    Just to learn that lyrics in titles like white man and hops
    Or, "nice plan!" in a white van.. stole from a blind man
    rockin his "christ can" do bracelets
    The three blind mice and crew.. sacred
    Save it for sacriligious reasons
    I can say i didnt give in
    A cynic in his minds a critic of the times
    If it isn't the mime generation.. controlling basements
    smoldering ancient souls, that baked in flavor of "neh owrlens"
    The floor goes out? shit on subordinates
    Carrying seeds of thought they laugh an toss the white towel out
    An albatross dies in the shallow end proud
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    have i given one fuck, sittin here stuck?
    givin fear up brought vision and luck
    and collisions with prison when they roll up
    driven to primitive livin by the cold cutters
    used for somethin sales til the cuff's clentched
    been up since eleven, not down since oh nine
    but an hours around a second in no time
    milk sours before i check if i got corn flakes
    depreciate like'a wood deck or a whores face
    or a splintered ass, checks if i warmed a place
    in front of a bench registered with the exchequer
    signs of desk jesters, prideless next yessirs
    like a yes man's lesser..timeless predecesser
    spine's with head's attached to clever gestures
    pleasures spectre that small talks
    while wall clocks crawl like mall cops
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  10. patrown

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    1) i am not black, but i thank you for the misrepresentation
    2) i have no affiliation with the vagina aside from temporarily placing my penis inside of one.
    3) it is my sincere hope that you contract black siphilis from a mail order asian bride and suffer an excruciating death while watching your genitalia grow necrotic, fester, and separate from your body like a piece of shit might if you were to drop it out of an airplane.
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    when the sun sets over the fertile Earth
    a weed plant watches it disappear in the South
    because south is down and the sun went down.
    motherfucker.
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    focus on a star and watch
    others fade away
    and try your best not to blink
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    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Remember me? The son you thought you laughed away?
    The son you wished you never had...the one you cast away?
    Forsaken One like Ivanhoe in black and grey whose lance must slay
    Those who cast away the castaways they had today cast as prey
    So back away...or else you'll catch the wrath I spray
    Laugh n change my blue skies to dyes of massive gray?
    I'll clap the K smash ya blaze ya cap's back away
    Because ya arrogant ego is disparagin people
    To you? We're barely feeble forever never your equal
    Yell FREEDOM like Biko's [ pronounced BE-COO's ] sequel n shatter our chains
    Daggering slang cadavering lames with chapters of flames...
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    A warrior soul, from long and far has come tonight to speak?
    your presence here inspires me now to reach..
    If cast as bait I'd wait and lure the hunter close, be sure
    A toast to me and you and all the most unsure, I'm sure
    I raise my glass to you, and pour yours in mine own
    To rid you of the poison and show why I'm patron
    A challenge mostens the palate.. I'd like to have a taste
    the center of the hearts of those who find my words a waste
    I have no equal, on any part of this absurd rock
    because you are you, and I am me, but we my friend.. may shock
    I may be scots, but kilts are lost to me as well as chains
    No scars are on my neck, but my name was fully gained
    by a yolk we wore around our necks.. to break the field for grains. (harrow-_)
    and while they eat their multi grain.. today my friend, it's gruel
    I do what I can.. using two hands.. and I welcome the title of fool.
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  15. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Only the wisest welcome the title of fool with unbridled recitals of cool
    Faith learning and teaching like Bibles and school...not Bible school.
    The opposite of idle fool, patrown's known tuh be ill with lead
    You're a Scot? No wonder you fade em like Scotch n kilt em dead
    Deth's drops peeled n shred anatomies of foes arose casualties in droves
    From savage frees that froze souls n casually implode skulls
    I'll actually invoke coals from Hell's deepest planes
    Provin Satan's heat n game kain't hang when I'm speakin flames
    My speech n slang defeats the lame reaps beast n fosters slaughter
    Mobster mop Herbs...print words that pincer chop nerds like Monster Lobsters
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    every flame starts from a spark in the darkest of parts
    leaving it's mark with specs of light igniting hope in the heart
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    with two open palms
    i greet each rain drop
    tasting the brain rot
    chasing the same spot, head down
    lost in thoughts i can't explain now
    on the bright side of the train tracks
    i smell the greener grass and stay back
    it's not fate's task to lay a path
    but death's still waitin till the last lap

    so my last gasps lasted three decades
    invest all wages into yellow bricks
    to help escape from this shallow pit
    buried alive in a fellowship with hallowed earth
    my only hope in a world that disguises how it works
    i'd give two coins to the preacher and pay him his fee
    let me watch the birds eat the bread i'm dissapointed to be
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    wash the whip with wine.. wish me god speed
    feed every starving kid with the one fish we all need
    while my last loaf of bread holds down my paid bills
    birds flying around my head are starting to lay still

    so i made a quill to hold the weight of my release
    it wrote my only word in our war with belief
    dont.. what must we know to survive?
    in a world of killers.. holding themselve's above sacrifice
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  19. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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  20. patrown

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    thanks coup =) I'm back.. should be editing this with some quality soon and doing my grudge drop tonight if you'll allow
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