^^Writing At Work^^

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  1. acekilla

    acekilla Pulse Venom Entertainment

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    Work Sucks so i wrote a verse lol

    name another rapper outta jerse spittin like this/
    if it aint reggie joey treach then them niggas aint shit/
    an im a outsida flowin like im focused on the muffins/
    fully loaded wit a toaster that'll toss you over customs/
    i aint never been a fav been a loner till the end/
    with a rachet when i blast it your a donor to ya friends/
    my opponents never win cause im the coldest outta sin/
    plus yall bogus an get roasted like ya chosen from my ribs/
    choke em out until i win teeth to the fuckin curb/
    in a hearse with the worse reason fiendin for my verse/
    im a beast to all u skirts no remorse for divorce/
    separatation from the crabs in the lab on my course/
    so i laugh at the whores keepin hoes on the track/
    in a candypainted lac with a fuckin cane to match/
    sike the range all black and the battle scars sewn/
    my fanbase WoW'd cause these rappers get pwn'd/
    test
  2. bagglad

    bagglad Member

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    nice drop man you killed this part right here HA! HA1 HA!

    im a beast to all u skirts no remorse for divorce/
    separatation from the crabs in the lab on my course/
    so i laugh at the whores keepin hoes on the track/
    in a candypainted lac with a fuckin cane to match/
    sike the range all black and the battle scars sewn/
    my fanbase WoW'd cause these rappers get pwn'd/
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    test
  3. acekilla

    acekilla Pulse Venom Entertainment

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    test
  4. DFVaInSDF

    DFVaInSDF I'm Back

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    nah i gotta say this was tha hottest part

    i aint never been a fav been a loner till the end/
    with a rachet when i blast it your a donor to ya friends/

    i kno u at work so this ain't ya best but still a nice read. flows a lil choppy but i coulda jus been readin it off, I doubt it, but its possible.

    Do me a fava and check this out tho
    http://board.rapmusic.com/post-ya-a...zik-rt-chea-tragedy-check-out-drop-links.html

    Gud Look
    test
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