Writers Challenge #9

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Mind~$oul, Jan 29, 2004.

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  1. shaft600

    shaft600 New Member

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    correction didn't read instruction dropped and this is CORRECTED COPY

    Stats bleed most when cats
    Don’t read my post hate them rats
    Bite my rhyme eat cheese
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  2. Thrilla-Ali

    Thrilla-Ali Dapper Don

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    death is not eternal sleep
    your faith is weak
    what are they gonna say?
    when they engrave the concrete?
    question
    who created adam n eve?
    where were you?
    before your creation from head to feet?
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  3. Thrilla-Ali

    Thrilla-Ali Dapper Don

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    ^ heck i forgot what a syllable is lol
    and my bad on the 3 line thing
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  4. glasspen

    glasspen Brooklyn Bitch

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    In such simple words
    GLASS representsmy feelings.
    PEN reps my healings.

    - GlassPen
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  5. netnegro

    netnegro all you need is love

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    soft spoken mermaids
    scantily clad as nature
    rosebuds bloom once more.
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  6. Thrilla-Ali

    Thrilla-Ali Dapper Don

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    alot of people work hard for god
    just to go to heaven
    but no one wants to die though
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  7. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    ^Haiku please
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  8. Oliver Spitz

    Oliver Spitz *insert witty punchline*

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    so close and so cold,
    so divine yet natural
    age old left to mold
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  9. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    can run my fingers throught your soul
    never having the chance to grow old
    bleadin through the numbness of cold
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  10. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Oliver you did good, but you used the word "AND"

    and kyza that's not even close
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  11. StubbilyMug

    StubbilyMug DayorDollar Records

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  12. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    Touch me close baby,
    Grasp my hand lady, steady
    Lets make a baby​
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  13. scribbles1188

    scribbles1188 Well-Known Member

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    I don't write poetry much, but I tried this after seeing this thread, figured my girl would like a Haiku in her Valentime's card. I hope it's correct, I noticed some people can't grasp the concept of syllybles, but if you see something wrong just point it out. I'm pretty sure I didn't use any words that aren't supposed to be in a haiku.

    Someting from nothing
    A treasure has been exhumed
    Two hertes have come close

    I used the original spelling of hearts, from like the 1500's, now that's old school, but any feed backs good, even if it is critisizm.
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  14. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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  15. scribbles1188

    scribbles1188 Well-Known Member

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    Thanks.
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  16. nathedawg

    nathedawg New Member

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    breast and booty: girl
    can touch it; feels wonderful
    temptation is great
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  17. piginabox

    piginabox Wot Tha Fuck U Lookin At?

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    Insane? People Say
    Alone At Home Everyday
    Crying Tears Away
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  18. Zeta

    Zeta New Member

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    here i go...

    On the brink of an
    Everlasting omission
    There's no permission
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  19. piginabox

    piginabox Wot Tha Fuck U Lookin At?

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    ^^Not allowed to use no yes the or an or on.... lol so thats wrong dudette!
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  20. Zeta

    Zeta New Member

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    Lol

    And I thought I was so right.... gimme a minute
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