Writers Challenge #9

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Mind~$oul, Jan 29, 2004.

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  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Aight in this challenge I want you all to write a Haiku...

    For those of you who doesnt know what a haiku is, it is a three line poem. The first line must contain 5 syllables, the second 7, and the third 5.

    5
    7
    5

    You must do this without using the word; HE, SHE, HIM, HER, THEY, I. and AND
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  2. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    You cant use the word THE either
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  3. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    I may give this a shot..i've never written one before
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  4. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    Eloquent beauty
    Died throught our yesterdays
    I miss it so much
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  5. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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    allnakey no I's Allowed, other whose pretty tight.


    When death comes in sight,
    We should redirect our lives.
    But we’re not that bright.
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  6. Psycho69

    Psycho69 A Soul Born In Verse

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    tears fall to form pools
    reflecting pain from within
    The mirror to a soul

    I don't know.. lol I never did a haiku before.
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  7. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    ^lol you used the word THE and the last line had 6 syllables
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  8. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    everyday is new
    now my past can die away
    dying is my life


    blah that shit was harder than i thought
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  9. Psycho69

    Psycho69 A Soul Born In Verse

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    I always saw Mirror as 1 syllable.. oh well, Im more out of it then I thought.
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  10. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    Blasphemy situations
    Retroactive source,
    Hold nothing of value

    WHat HE say...lol
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  11. The FLU

    The FLU thats right pal

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    Elequent kissess....
    Intellegent mistress,,cause...
    Love creates visions...
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  12. lewdDog

    lewdDog Life is are own illusion

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    Perfectionist lie
    Our world is unpleasant
    There’s no time as present
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  13. mnice

    mnice New Member

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  14. mnice

    mnice New Member

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    Scared to fall in love
    Don't attempt to run or hide
    True love will find you
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  15. DaJackle

    DaJackle ThoughtS ProcessinG

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    song of a birds wing
    flaps one, two, three with a thud
    melody of life
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  16. lore

    lore It's just meeh

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    imma try this

    Distance seperates
    But a heart can remain true
    Miles can not change love
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  17. StubbilyMug

    StubbilyMug DayorDollar Records

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    Why have questions marks
    With solitude, drowning peace,
    Niched behind clamours
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  18. christofer

    christofer .Nothing Is Sacred.

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    etched words form dark blurs
    bright tears form darkened puddles
    letting blood fall free

    tell me the the syl. are right.. this is my first haiki
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  19. Justin85

    Justin85 True Poetical Emcee

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    Tears call out my name
    Emptiness is set in vain
    Holding all my pain.
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  20. shaft600

    shaft600 New Member

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    Stats bleed most when cats
    Don’t read my post hate them rats
    Bite my rhymes and cheese
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