Writers Challenge #3

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Mind~$oul, Aug 6, 2003.

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  1. BaByMaRiaH

    BaByMaRiaH ------------------

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    Lmao.. I really am an idiot.. *edited*
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  2. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    perceptionz grrl dont worry about it, it happens......yours was a good lil concept :)

    and mind soul DAMN......that last line just like hit me!.....
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  3. Vulkan'XL

    Vulkan'XL New Member

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    Everyone did nicely, and Perceptionz, I just thought I would point that out...Not trying to make you look stupid...;)
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  4. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    thanks for the luv....your shit was mad creative..like feme said that shit had to be hard as hell to do.....

    good shit!
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  5. the.dirtiest

    the.dirtiest inactive

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    Only my spirit will be left to find my destiny when i die


    i just found a new siggy!
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  6. Quant'm PhysX

    Quant'm PhysX Kundalini Poltergeist

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    Questions reach out for answers they may never find
    Unless they can confide in the spirits that are living inside
    Even the strongest may fall without non-existant guides
    Steering them in the direction they have always kept blind
    Tantric, the exploration of true identity
    In ourselves we struggle to see who will hold the reigns of the entity
    Only to dream silent wishes made mentally
    Never heeding the importance of trust to find the wrong way out
    Still you are saying to yourself "what is he talking about?"
    another question
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  7. Johnnie French

    Johnnie French Voodooradio.podomatic.com

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    My mind
    External pressures
    Never released always realized
    Total suffering encrypted in my soul
    Annihilation of the spirit
    Left for dead and left on agony’s doorstep

    Always internal struggles waltzing
    Gazing into each others eye
    Openly loving
    Nil and Everything
    You have to chose a path

    Bastard child of hope
    Left in these blood infused times
    Elastic
    Eating
    Directly at my
    Soul

    Investigating these ideals
    Never ending

    Mastering the body
    Youthful minds are a facet of the mind

    Soulful and real
    Open and well rounded
    Unfulfilled or Unfaithful
    Love…
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  8. h.wood

    h.wood IMAGINATION SUPER STAR

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    ^ that was great johnny.
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  9. Johnnie French

    Johnnie French Voodooradio.podomatic.com

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  10. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    H eaven got a new angel and it my momma
    O ctober 4 1998 was the passing date for my momma
    L ord gave her peace from the disease called cancer
    Death came for her with the cure from cancer

    M alpractice took my moms with out any reasonable answers
    Evil in my heart and it’s the equivalent of Able and Kane

    M y moms came home to die in peace she was diagnose with a terminal disease
    Oh Lord please forgive me for using your name in vane to give me peace
    My momma such a joyful being made life for the norm such a joyous game

    One word describes my mom
    Nubian
    Everlasting in my brain

    Lost words couldn’t even describe her fame
    Astonishing she was in this life of success and pain
    Still I rise to give thanks for the love momma gave to my name
    Thanks to the lord for creating such a vibrant human being


    Ten kids my mom had left in this world of love and shame
    I love you mom and I miss you so bad I feel it in my veins
    My memories are the heavenly visions that keeps me sane
    Eternity is the meaning of my love and pain


    I love you mom rest in peace
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  11. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    Feme's giving me a word or phrase to use:

    "CARPE DIEM"

    Can you carry me? Marry me?
    All of my souls in one. Eblazoned in hope for one
    Reason to live? Scatter my brain, scatter the shame.
    Personified in tiny pills I refill by my need for sanity
    Everybody's looking at me. Marry me into one.

    Die away sadness, all ye pitiful spirits in posession
    I need not love you anymore. I'd love to not need you.
    Everyone's a mystery, but I needn't be to me.
    My self is finally good enough for me.
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  12. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    damn you wrote that fast as hell.......i likes!

    "Personified in tiny pills I refill by my need for sanity"
    ^^
    feelin that line
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  13. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    :) I was tryna find the nonnet thread, because I did one in there too, but I couldn't find it. I think saggy started the thread, but it must have been before the last reboot.
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  14. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    ^yeah she did that thread, i was lookin for that too...Could have sworn it was posted after the reboot. [dunno]
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  15. Leesherz_89

    Leesherz_89 New Member

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    Love is like a sunset
    Orange on the horizon.
    Velvet grass plains dancing,
    Everyone romancing.

    In years of time, your heart will be,
    Swallowed up by mine.

    Happiness first comes with love but,
    Underneath it all,
    Romance will begins to die,
    Till the time has come to fall.
    Full-fill your heart,
    Until it bursts,
    Love is best, when it comes first.

    Perfect love will end so quick,
    After years of fight,
    In your heart, you'll love again,
    Next time, do it right.
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  16. da_after_shock

    da_after_shock New Member

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    Daily i suffocate in this nothingness of space
    Everlasting suffering, embraces the surface of my face
    Asking questions but answers tend to get lost without a trace
    Taking in emptiness yet filled with tons of nothing
    How can i live when i'm surrounded by my own sins repeating
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  17. misspimp

    misspimp a.k.a KATURAH

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    each & every single piece was beautiful & tight...

    mad love to errybody
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  18. Dark_Angel

    Dark_Angel Dark_Angel

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    i gotta say i loved them all, but lpoet gotta be my fav.
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  19. Dark_Angel

    Dark_Angel Dark_Angel

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    Silent Tears

    Silently you wander, escaping all that follows
    Intending of living today, just to make tomorrow
    Lost on a path of shadows, stumbling for light
    Erratic thoughts spin in this eternal chaotic night
    Nobility and pride go hand in hand, unwilling to ask for help
    To cry silent tears as you’re amazed by what is felt

    To wander a dark road, having everything but sight
    Enveloped and drown in a mist that hazes delight
    Aware that you’re lost, but you’ve lost your ability to fight
    Red stains your senses like possessions to a child
    Silently stumble on as you drown in your own life
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  20. Forrastari

    Forrastari New Member

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    F or I know not what the world holds
    O nly God has knowledge of the unknown
    R eadily I grant him total access to my being
    R easonable enough since he created me
    A s far as I am concerned, he dictates and directs all
    S o I will neglect the world and all of its pleasures
    T rust only him to secure my place in heaven
    A spire towards perfection in my sinful human state
    R ecognising that God alone is my faith
    I Forrastari succumb to his grace
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