Writers Challenge #3

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  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    This challenge i would like for the realm to write an acrostic poem. For those who dont know what an acrostic is, look below.

    Acrostic- a poem where the first letter of each line spells a word that can be read vertically

    example...

    L blah blah blah blah blah
    O lah blah blahb alh blah blah
    V lah blah blah blah blah
    E blah blah blah blah blah

    I blah blah blah
    S blah blah blah

    P blah blah blah
    A blah blah blah
    I blah blah blah
    N Blah blah blah

    Get it?
    Enjoy
    one luv
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  2. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    youre such a good mod boon :) [heart]

    i will do this later
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  3. h.wood

    h.wood IMAGINATION SUPER STAR

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    ok - i havent done one of these in a really long time--






    T.hrough the bristle's soaked in dreams the artist taints the canvas
    R.eaching out across the board he searches for understanding
    A.ll is said and done once his ambitions become famished
    N.either gray nor blue nor green can fullfill what emotions are demanding
    S.o he stumbles back and contemplates from a different angle examines
    P.lacing love within his palms while his faith goes empty- handed
    A.s he struggles to capture peace he paints a faceless man abandoned
    R.uns his fingers through his hair to let his locks fall down at random
    E.ternal is the desire to be a picture frammed evangalist
    N.ever did he realise his testimony contained contaminants
    T.ransformed by his admission he left drawn tears. TRANSPARENT.
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  4. MzLashay

    MzLashay Livin'

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    h.wood i just wanted to say i loved that
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  5. h.wood

    h.wood IMAGINATION SUPER STAR

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    thank you very much--- i wasnt sure if i was supposed to put it in here
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  6. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    h.wood Holy Shit! that was awesome, all I have to say...keep droppin

    peace
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  7. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    S, till waters run deep in a distance
    A, ll life breeds to maintain a balance
    F , lushed with envy a light strikes with malice
    E , nergy cast from the heavens brought me balance
    G , OD can my life be so far fetch and bound in silence
    U ,nderstanding my ways are as far fetch as questioning GODS commandments
    A , nyone feel me?
    R , aise up out of life’s melancholy
    D , rive forth the ambitions of life’s joyful jollies
    I, nspirit you meaning on this earth and bye-pass the follies,
    N , ever be limited to one way always drive towards new beginnings
    G , is for the good in people all over the world who never forget the meaning of SAFEGUARDING
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  8. Vulkan'XL

    Vulkan'XL New Member

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    In opening, I love you girl...

    Listening to your rhythmic breathing
    Over the phone lines...
    Vowing to love you like no one
    Ever could..As my truth rings...

    Coming from year's before my time...
    As minutes tick on in my ears, and the
    Right words eluded my every
    Inquiry, the brain overflowed with
    New genius and I began to
    Grow in the new-age existance I had...

    Finding you locked beneath my ribcage,
    Over-joyed at how I see you in
    Reactions to the world outside...

    Yearning to touch your lips in the darkness as
    Our existance becomes more like reality
    Under the floodlights of previous lovers...

    Holding you sacred to my heart
    As your voice trickles through my ears
    Not knowing how deeply I feel for you
    Now that I have made the connection...
    Allowing myself to love again...
    Hey, I LOVE CARING FOR YOU HANNAH!
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  9. BaByMaRiaH

    BaByMaRiaH ------------------

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    Confined to your binding arms, you whisper sweet somethings in my ear..
    Light, sound, taste, touch.. senses are banished from our celestial sphere..
    All the emotions rooted inside me have become drowned by your being..
    Ultimately, I've become you.. through your perspective my eyes have been seeing..
    Stationary is my own mind-state, your philosophies have overwhelmed my brain..
    Trying to retrieve my own previous beliefs simply results in causing you pain..
    Resultantly, I've become caught between either the safety net of your embrace..
    Or my longing to become an individual again, to have my own personal space..
    Pulling my body close to yours, you make my decision, as you always do..
    However tightly you hold me though, I'm still suffocating when I'm with you..
    Ominous, is this relationship.. doomed to take my every breath..
    Breaking my personalities fragile pieces until my soul's inevitable death..
    If I saw you a second each century, you'd still be the one I'd long to be rid of..
    Claustrophic is the feeling you instill in me, as you smother me with your love..]
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  10. Vulkan'XL

    Vulkan'XL New Member

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    Isn't it Claustrphobic?
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  11. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    Cancerous tumors linger beneath her caramel skin
    Organizing colonies of cells known for penetrating the souls of seamingly impervious men
    Rehabilitated red cells quickly multiply and defend
    Nullifying the pain temporarily...unaware that this is knowhere near its end
    Etching catacombs threw her body over and over again
    Relishing in victory before they actually win
    Everlasting pain endured by her family and all her friends
    Defeated.....but when fighting cancer the battle is often lost before it begins.......

    cornered
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  12. h.wood

    h.wood IMAGINATION SUPER STAR

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    these were all amazing
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  13. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    *takes a bow*
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  14. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    quickie

    Be me for a day
    Everything will make sense that way
    Though I loved you for the second that it takes to love
    Really though, was that good enough?
    Often I wonder why I still think of you when things go wrong
    The sun still rises but no longer plays that familiar tune
    How could you break my heart so it would fit into yours?
    Everything has changes so quickly
    Do you still think of me like i dream about you?

    They are not good dreams luv
    Once upon a time....is not how we started out

    Lets just leave happily ever after for someone else
    It never belonged to us luv
    For many years i dreamed of being your wife
    Everything changed in a few moments though when I realized that I am betrothed to life
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  15. the.dirtiest

    the.dirtiest inactive

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    envelop yourself in this our embrace
    my arms form concentric
    bracelets, arcangles of your weary temple. a
    relaxation, a sigh, a thankful kiss. cantilever
    acetabulum conjunction links the chasm between us. heartbeats throb
    counterpuntal approval as time does usgether deem
    enraptured: i into you, enveloped in your embrace.

    i like feme's and lpoet's poems most of all. both of you did a great job! *thumbs up*
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  16. the.dirtiest

    the.dirtiest inactive

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    not saying everyone else didnt...a lot of representation in this thread...but for me, lines like

    How could you break my heart so it would fit into yours?
    Lets just leave happily ever after for someone else
    It never belonged to us luv

    Organizing colonies of cells known for penetrating the souls of seamingly impervious men
    Rehabilitated red cells quickly multiply and defend
    Etching catacombs threw her body over and over again
    Relishing in victory before they actually win

    make me say dayum!
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  17. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    D thanks luv......yours was just WOAH.....very creative, that had to be pretty hard to do.....resp.

    [kissu]
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  18. GorillaThugMC

    GorillaThugMC Minotaur Orator

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    Loungin' at home, writin' this weak ass poem
    Artistic or not, shit is straight off the dome
    Zebras, what else fuckin' starts with a Z?
    Yeah Yeah, Y'all know it, I'm a G-O-D

    Yes Yes Y'all, Poet Laureate!
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  19. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    [funny] smokes youre too much man.....
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  20. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    A retired crack fiend still fightin vicious tempations
    Going days, all alone...life or death contemplations
    Nostalgic visions can be seen through these eyes
    Only my spirit will be left to find my destiny when i die
    Singing the songs of death while i dance on it's edges
    Time tickin away, time tickin away, time is contagious
    I am King, but i do not live up to my name..i'm nameless
    Cionna cries, only because i've passed down the curse

    a lil keystyle i just did
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