Writers Challenge #20

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  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    I posted this exercise up here before. Figure we start up again with something simple. Here go one I did on the last one we had on acrostic poems about two years ago



    I hate...

    Pushing aside nightmares that hold answers
    Oblivious to blessings above
    Everyone dies, death is cancerous
    Today just brought me closer to
    Seeing

    What i've been running from
    Inside of these words
    There was once a trace of my
    Heart...

    Everyday I
    Grow
    Open to things i've never
    Seen...before


    Blah...Everybody better do this. Remember I know where you sleep homie!
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  2. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    I See Myself Ok...

    Ignited to a delighted feeling that no- one knows

    She’s striking and dignifying in expansive clothes
    elegant and stylish in high heeled Jabo’s,
    emphasizing hips and hypnotizing talks

    man cant resist complementing her on her walk
    yes she’s thunderously tempestuous, at times, she’s
    serious as prince tantalus
    entire countryside subside cause of her liberty and justice
    looks like she will be the queen of luxurious
    female of the year, she’s bigamous

    OK
    Kill the slut.....lol
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  3. YesikaStarr

    YesikaStarr WordsMadeMeTheirBitch

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    She Ran From Her Reflection


    Something in her chest began to weep
    Hours after she had turned herself over to
    Eternity and its dancing demons.

    Reality becoming shadows she waved
    Away with promises of
    Never consuming the sun again.

    From her reflections she
    Ran...[hair waving goodbye to the truth]
    Once she saw sunken eyes
    Mirrored in frozen promises.

    He wouldn’t return
    Even if she kept arms extended in half circles
    Repeating vows of...unconditional slavery

    Regressing into shallow pools of co dependency
    Everything done to avoid nights alone under
    Florescent lights. counting cracks on ceilings and
    Loop holes
    Engraved in memory. She
    Couldn’t stay alone. knowing
    Tomorrow her chest would weep
    Insisting eternity will hurl her into
    Oblivion. Hes gone...without a trace of love existing between those stench filled walls and
    No one left to hide into once she runs from the image of a desperate woman. stranded.
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  4. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    Jesus Christ

    Just a Judge with no home
    Everlasting father Expressing his love
    Son begotten man of Sorrows
    Ultra aUther and finisher of oUr faith
    Shiloh Shepherd and bishop of Souls

    Carpenter chief cornerstone church counselor
    High priest and Holy one
    Resurrection Redeemer Rose of Sharon
    Immanuel I AM Image of the Invisible God
    Savior Servant Son of man
    The way, The truth, and The life

    (Who else but Jesus Christ?)
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  5. Mc Witha Temper

    Mc Witha Temper New Member

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    Pathetic prisoners plauged to repeat
    Obsolete officers often obliterate
    Etheopians eating every morsel
    Trippin hippies toking traditions
    Ressurecting reactions rapidly
    Your from yosemite yelling at yams

    Red and blue, two distinctive crews
    Emitting benevolence entrinsically
    Authorizing authors to act oddly
    Linguistics lacerate and lace ligistics
    Mathematically massacre miniscule individuals
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  6. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    I always enjoyed these...



    Feeling like emotions have left
    Overwhelming the truths that bruise
    Revealing welts of self hatred bloody and
    Guilt ridden…singing my souls true tunes
    Overcoming the so called becoming of
    The inevitable black mans blues
    Trapped…I find myself searching for
    Excuses feeling as if accountability is
    Nestled beneath yesterdays news…

    Pleading for redemption in the face of the overwhelming
    Omnipresence…thinking to
    Each its own…still and forever I set
    Troubled and all alone

    FORGOTTEN POET
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  7. Diyablo

    Diyablo New Member

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    Playa Hater....

    Pretentious people need a nudge in the right direction
    Leave achievers alone who dont deserve your attention
    And even when your gone never come back
    Your welcome does not exist and is already overstayed
    Achieve your own goals and precious dreams

    Hate is for the weak and certainly not the strong
    As a loser you definately top the list
    Treat others as you would love to be treated
    Earned respect is undeniable
    Realize the truth and be setfree from the chains of jealousy
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  8. AlmostFamous

    AlmostFamous U got a problem?

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    Hell on earth


    How do i do it lord.... show me the way to walk
    Everything I have been doing thus far is nothing more than just talk
    Lust and desire
    Love is my weakness lord... I pray at night and don't get a response...

    Over and over I try lord... over and over again I continue to lie
    No one is perfect is etched in my wall... as a constant reminder that I am a sinner

    Even my mom tells me I'm far from perfect
    After this life will I go to heaven or hell?
    Reveal yourself.... because faith is no longer on my side
    Time has come for me to accept
    Hell is here in my very own home
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  9. misspimp

    misspimp a.k.a KATURAH

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    She Needs Him

    SELF CONSCIOUS BECAUSE OF HIS ABUSIVE WORDS
    HIS CHEATING WAYS, YET EVERYDAY SHE STAYS
    EVERYONE ELSE CAN SEE IT BUT THESE ARE HER BEST DAYS

    NEGATIVE THOUGHTS FILL HER MIND
    EVEN CAME ACROSS ONE OF SUICIDE
    ENGAGED IN RAGE HE MAKES HER FALL TO HER KNEES
    DEFEATED AND LOST BUT SHE STILL BELIEVES
    SO INSECURE FOR NO REASON YET HES HER KING

    HEAVEN ONLY KNOWS THE TURMOIL AND PAIN
    INSIDE HER HEAD, HEART AND SOUL
    MANY TEARS SHED DURING HEATED NIGHTS - BUT ALL WERE CRIED IN VAIN
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  10. Philly_215

    Philly_215 The Silent Poet

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    Suggest I am any thing less then perfection
    Like my words don’t reflect their heart deepest desperations
    Enchanted by worded wars hopeful at days end for around of applause
    Persistence got me thus far, not to mention my inner feelings released from the vault
    Turmoil makes those that read believe that he’s

    On his way to great things, comparing him to other souls but combine they don’t match up to one whole
    None shall slow my ascent to full filling me; the slept on are what the sleeper are trying to be
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  11. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    I see Peace in this
    Am nothing but shit
    MY own ego is see through
    No one is a hero
    One caring remark is
    The fear in my heart
    Here is a spark
    In careless talk
    Nothing compares to the start
    Going through deafs hearing
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  12. Deaf Def

    Deaf Def Tha WordSmith

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    this was stupid, but i'm posting it anyway, just because i care to.

    Deaf Def

    Driven forces, forced courses
    Eventually torn, tearing what's worn
    Actually forgetting, forget remembering
    Freedom's price, paid with life

    Dealing with death, dead's path
    Eluminating skies, sky high
    Forget it, it did
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  13. theonlyghost

    theonlyghost New Member

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    We all shed tears for the fallen souls.
    How can we show love when our minds are full of hate.
    Even though we strive to show compasion.
    None of us escape the fear and let go of what controls us.

    Is this world worth fighting for?
    Time has come for us to unite with one another.
    Save what we can and create a better world tomorrow.

    God will light our path.
    Only long enough for us to catch a glance.
    Now we must walk this road alone.
    Even though fear is still within our souls.
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  14. nathedawg

    nathedawg New Member

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    its good to see such a good turn out for this


    maybe just maybe the realm will get more activity sometime soon.... but hey than again it is still summer time lol
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  15. Bhitiah

    Bhitiah Powerful Scriptures

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    Why did you unsticky this I liked it on the page...Was thinking about doing it. Maybe, Probably not.
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  16. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    Ditto

    I was coming back too...damn it...lol

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  17. who~is~she

    who~is~she THE ORIGINAL~ILL~SISTAH

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    Suicidal

    Sarcastic limits of my mental capasity
    Underestimates the desire to sever my
    Intimate bond with the living while
    Continuing to live
    Inaccurate recollections of the truth
    Disembowels any reservations to
    Abort what is already.....
    Life
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  18. Poetic Concept

    Poetic Concept New Member

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    Open scorn of a poet
    Blinded by truth from
    Light the same light it reflects
    In a blink of an eye
    Vivid imagery expressing its passion
    In a maze of forgotten words
    On lost letters, and tethered dictionaries
    Undermining talent, pencils open talons
    Slice books and dreams

    Pampering wisdom on lost scrolls
    Openly suggesting hopelessness
    Epidemic principals dont consume the poet for
    The oblivious poet it emotionless
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  19. poeticdreamz

    poeticdreamz Tha Dreamer

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    D R E A M E R

    Day dreams are the cousins of nightmares and it seems i live within them
    Reveling in the many pictures and scriptures they bring me
    Emancipation is unnecessary i call this place my home
    Arising every morning to the beginning of a new born dream
    Meddaling in the womb of metaphors is why we never know what the mean
    Elevate your thinking to the wizardry of a warlock
    Reducing the chances of you claiming you have writer's block
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  20. Deaf Def

    Deaf Def Tha WordSmith

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    whatever happened to shit like this?
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