Writers Challenge #19

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Mind~$oul, Jul 2, 2005.

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  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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  2. RealMS

    RealMS Ne te quaesiveris extra

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    Keep this up for an extra week.

    I'll look at the little trip and when I get back to where I started I always wanna keep on going lol.

    This 'trip' has a beginning
    that does not end.
    Haunted by hybrid images,
    and along the way repetition gave me some friends.

    I'm not done.
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  3. DaJackle

    DaJackle ThoughtS ProcessinG

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    The Fear of Death

    I am your enemy,
    for i have the claws to
    rip pridefull walls
    that are encased and awed
    over the the years
    by callus bared hands.

    I can make dreams,
    pastoral times,
    jewels of your enigma
    lust
    over temptations
    to become a nightmare
    even
    to your wakeful eyes.

    I will make sure you will
    cling and choke
    the chain of your life
    till
    your mental palms bleed
    thoughtless rose petals.

    For, i have the power
    to make you immobile
    and shake enfuriously.

    i can take the taste of
    sweet water melon
    and leave ashes
    upon your parched tounge,

    and the feeling of silk
    ephemeral
    like a climax
    to an evening of sin.

    And if we were to meet,
    you shall lose yourself
    within tapasteries
    of emptiness and shadowed walls.

    For, your nerves will never forget
    the aura
    of being powerless,
    to be untangeled,
    consumed by the fear of death.


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  4. lewdDog

    lewdDog Life is are own illusion

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    endless journey

    I begin my endless journey in search of happiness
    On the road of my internal Purgatory
    I stare at the clouds with impatience in hope that the sky will fall on me
    And crush my illusions of accomplishing my dreams
    As I glance through time I realize that my life has been wasted
    In moments I can depict where it went wrong
    I let the jungle of life leave me in the shadows
    To drown in self pity and indulgence
    Now I'm stuck reminiscing the ghosts of my regrets
    In my dreams where the pain of my past comes alive
    I've reached crossroads before but none as difficult as this
    I wish I had glasses that looked into the future
    To tell me if I should follow the light or if I should continue
    I believe if I continue this path of negligence
    I will choke in desperation only to find my self lost
    Lost in the greed
    Lost in the destruction
    Lost lifeless looking for happiness
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  5. Just So Cute

    Just So Cute RSTL Rank 12

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    A complete sphere is my embodyment..
    The maze of my life leads back to the beginning
    A complete circle where life began & where it ended
    Hard to explain to the plain ordinary person
    I have tried it once before, Now I look through my life
    Knowing every and which door
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  6. RealMS

    RealMS Ne te quaesiveris extra

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    Layers of a Different Perspective

    It hangs within the circle, but mine is on the outskirts.
    Never good with numbers, even shapes for that matter;
    I came to grips a circle has all it appears to be: Endless curves.
    Peculiar how there isn't an entering point, yet some things are on The
    Other side.
    Where I stand it's sometimes questioned, the perplexity. Being human
    Must not have anything to do with it's reasons.
    My good life is not perfect but I make it to where I can't complain.
    Without overstepping or half-stepping my boundaries,
    I have grown to love what mine has done for me. From where
    I'm standing I can see the other side and more but it's still
    difficult to see. It looks beyond green and not appealing at all.
    Nope.
    One is uncomfortable to share with someone their thoughts
    Cause
    they aren't understanding or loyal, so maybe that's reason
    The circle doesn't open,
    We all just assumed it did. Or used to anyway.
    My eyes are wide open, and I smile
    In disappointment. I don't feel I was supposed
    To be obligated in making my
    Own entrance into It's world.
    Then again I am myself and what's better is
    I found a spot I can relate better with:
    Reality.​
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  7. absolute zero

    absolute zero Among the living

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    A journey neither begins
    As one could end well.
    Lingering among the deadwood,
    In which time-travelers dwell.

    Time was never issued,
    Nor the strength of dark tidal waves.
    I've found the only way to see demons,
    Is if you look at the world sideways.

    Now let the night become her own,
    Forward glancing, daywalkers all perish.
    Sprinting towards Autumn with eyes shut;
    Maybe it's passion is what God will cherish. ​

    Have you raced to the ends of the universe?
    Have you seen all there is to see?
    Have you been to the top of that mountain?
    Would there be enough room for me?
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  8. SAMARA

    SAMARA truth is a sword

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    everyone on this trip missed the door to salvation.
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  9. RealMS

    RealMS Ne te quaesiveris extra

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    ^Lol

    May be why this trip doesn't have an ending.
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