Writers Challenge #13

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Mind~$oul, Aug 8, 2004.

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  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Realm Cypher....again

    BUT YOU CAN ONLY WRITE ONE LINE AT A TIME.....AND IT CANNOT BE MORE THAN 7 WORDS....ok

    1 line
    7 words... for example..."dont write more than 7 words please" <~~see 1 line 7 words.... [vn2] i'll start it off

    Happiness can only be found where the...
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  2. who~is~she

    who~is~she THE ORIGINAL~ILL~SISTAH

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  3. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Hope we save for our seepin prayers
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    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    Our quiet vioces dissapear into thin air
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  5. who~is~she

    who~is~she THE ORIGINAL~ILL~SISTAH

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    but the roar of our hearts capture
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    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    Happiness can only be found where the...
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    i missed up i didn't see the "the" at the end of the second line
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  7. Index.

    Index. New Member

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    bellowing silence signifying void within our love
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  8. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    How the hell yall gonna take my line out?
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    my bad, i just noticed. it was kind of caught in between a bunch of replies. lol
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    InTheStars Reflective

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    With sensuality that is purely full of....
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  11. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    LOL damn i messed shit up... lol sorry man, damn that means I aint even have to fix that line
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    DaJackle ThoughtS ProcessinG

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    Happiness can only be found where the...
    subconscience has no ability to dominate the...
    Hope we save for our seepin prayers
    Quiet vioces that dissapear into thin air
    But the roar of our hearts capture...
    bellowing silence signifying void within our love
    With sensuality that is purely full of
    rippled thoughts of our future
    as the potential grows in our consciousness
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    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    Happiness can only be found where the...
    subconscience has no ability to dominate the...
    Hope we save for our seepin prayers
    Quiet vioces that dissapear into thin air
    But the roar of our hearts capture...
    bellowing silence signifying void within our love
    With sensuality that is purely full of
    rippled thoughts of our future
    as the potential grows in our consciousness
    Deeper than an ocean of black holes
    fortelling subsequent promises that react from a...
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    Clarksvegas_Dan Registered Voter

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    coincidental chance encounter of each other again
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    Speedy Gunzalez Awareness is my Alias

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    Evg.poet As the Heart Speaks...

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