Writers Challenge #10

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  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    I jacked this topic from the RSTL.

    Enjoy
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  2. CommonenemY

    CommonenemY locomokopokeyohoehoe

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    im here because i was destined
    to see the simple beauties of this world
    as innocent as a newborn boy or girl
    both just as beautiful
    both made by the same hand
    but this is nothing unusual
    i now overstand
    to every storm theres the sun
    anxiously waiting to emerge from clouds
    to sing out to the crowd
    with a birds chirp to amplify its sound
    to every tear there is laughter to follow
    maybe not today
    maybe not tomorrow
    but the bottle can only add to the sorrow
    im here to realize beauty is beyond models
    beauty is beyond what most think
    beauty's use is often hollow
    as shallow as the puddle from the storm
    isnt that awful?
    beauty is the gospel
    a laugh
    a person that still smiles when they lost all they had
    beauty is beyond what i could ever explain
    but still search for one for you will be changed
    it is so simple but so unnoticed
    it is actually quite sad
    im here to realize
    and go spread the word of what i have learned
    beauty is this simple
    this nice view
    this summer morning when birds chirp
    there are many crows and undrinkable waters
    but beauty remains abundant on earth
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  3. Nebulaz

    Nebulaz fear God, not man

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    its the only place i know
    when people get lost in this world
    they all return home
    this lake sides my castle
    while others toggle their planners
    my simples chores are a handful
    as it is i take to much time doing them
    and not enough relaxing
    all the energy i dont expend
    it does still end up rather taxing
    the mood i absorb in
    only needs a power supplied
    by my lungs gentley contracting
    fulling themselves with sweet breathes
    exhaling dioxides of candy
    When God created man
    this is where He was standing
    no more peaceful of a place
    could this be if war planes
    had finished landing
    I am gonna go nestle into a dream i choose
    and hope amongst it
    reality and it i dont confuse
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  4. Zeta

    Zeta New Member

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    Okay I'm really impressed with yours Nebulaz, lemme try...

    The air so fresh crisp and clear
    As it swipes it's loving fingers through my hair
    Tells me things about myself
    no one on earth would understand
    This is why I am listening to the wind
    The sun shines as I sit outside...
    The cool calm lake
    I am here because the beauty of it
    I cannot forsake
    The birds sing their melodies
    As if they were serenading me
    I am here because they are
    I am here because life without lovliness
    Can only go so far
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  5. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    Even good sinners go to hell
    I might as well enjoy paradise on earth
    Watch the breezing trees
    And take in every purity
    Cause inside this worldly feeling
    Everything will soon disappear
    I can’t faint on heavens arrival
    Cause this worlds not going to end

    Please tell me paradise is a state of mind
    And this place I often visited
    Is only a mirage of built up desire
    I’m here cause home seems so distant
    Inside white flowers and relaxing benches
    Home grew two legs and ran away
    I’m stranded in the perfect paradise
    Inside this false state of mind
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  6. mocha_licious

    mocha_licious New Member

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    birds chirping
    the sky's hue is blue
    my heart's still yearning
    not enough of my fingerprints left on this world
    staring into a body of water
    looking into the center
    beginning to think this lake has a soul....

    swallowing slowly and yet i am gulping
    hard to relax
    but i bend my spine
    sitting here without rhymes nor reasoning
    i am here just asking why
    so throwed...i'm asking the wooden bench too
    but fug it i gotta let this go and let it exit my mind
    and i continue to drink on my Bud dry


    *yes this sucks...lol*
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  7. fairydance2000

    fairydance2000 don't wait, Procrastinate

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    I will tell you why I am here.
    As I woke this morning.
    When all good things are born,
    A robin perched upon my sill
    And thrilled a happy morn.
    He was so young and fragile.
    And so sweetly did he sing.
    That all thoughts of joy and happiness
    to my heart did spring.
    I smiled so sweetly to myself
    as I paused beside my bed.
    And slowly brought the window down
    And smashed hes fuckin’ head.
    That’s why I am awake. That’s why I am here.
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  8. The_MRB

    The_MRB infiltrate your border

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    coz i can't smoke in the house init
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  9. iamnotadigit

    iamnotadigit i

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    I tried to find my sense of life in things, but instead I found it in you. When you sang time and I seemed to stop together. But you didn’t need words—not with that red dress you and your hips seemed to wear so well.

    There are too many ghosts here—memories—all of them of you and the way you were—the way we were. Together. Apart. We were always connected. I thought we were invincible. A perfect, unbreakable chain.

    The world couldn't touch us. We were too fast. Too smart. Too stupid to know that we couldn't live forever in each other's arms.

    We were building. Something. Somewhere.

    I called you my songbird. We were here. I remember that now. There are so many things I've forgotten, but I won't forget that.

    We were in the lake. Time and I had stopped again. You were singing your last song. Beautfiful, unforgetable. You were falling. My mind drifted and I saw you in my arms before I could touch you.

    I had an image—distant, indefinte—spinning in my thoughts. The air tightend around me. You were gone.

    You told me this would happen. I didn't believe you. Here we are. Here I am.
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  10. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    It is an impenetrable sentiment...

    All I know is all I have, and I try to have as much as I can
    Make life as best with what God has given me.

    Hours of the day are spent in worry in dispair.
    Only He that stops to listen to the birds understands the words
    Made only by the common man.
    Every day I see people pass me, laughing and crying,
    Lonely or dying as the still lake reflects the somber society.
    Ends of the earth come together right here, and I am enriched by realizing this life.
    Something is beautiful about the morning where the birds speak and the lake repeats it.
    See, I am on this bench because, I live here...
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  11. CommonenemY

    CommonenemY locomokopokeyohoehoe

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    .........
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  12. ~Eloquent

    ~Eloquent Narcissistic....

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    the birds were signing like my heart once was...
    now its time for memories to rest in peace...
    wishin that we were reacquainted but the reality of that does not exist...
    a summer breeze within the mist abducts my tears within the drift..
    i could of sworn i saw you,but perhaps i was just to demanding...
    now im sitting here with my best friend M.J. tryin to come to understanding...
    the smoke inside my throat eases the pain,but at time my lungs dramatically increase with age...
    really i just wish i wasnt erratic with rage...
    i never speak just let my broken heart portray...
    my heart was once as pure as the crystal blue sky...
    but that was so long ago before this hope and pain collides...
    i have a reincarnated state of state of mind...
    the birds chirpin hope into the air...
    not possible...
    for the future of tommorrow..
    still in love with mary jane,only comforter towards my sorrow...

    they would probaly would say i write to much,but is it a crime to portray deep emotion?
    birds chirp so freely,almost like these fakes i know that run their mouth and start corrosion
    so deeply in this state of sorrow,just absorb enough strength to pray for tommorrow...
    but our city streets are hollow,with shallow thoughts and inhumane acts..
    i have a big heart...to hold all my pain inside, is askin to much,I will collapse...
    im not a preacher im just a realist...
    and i see the crystal blue sky slowly turn cloudy...
    i got a deep grudge against whoever doubts me..
    let it rain,to demonstrate God's tears...
    or so i was told...lost in the struggle with my fate speared....
    though who should i really fear?
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  13. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    Here I am, beside the lake..

    contemplating my actions
    was it worth it?
    or was it a mistake?

    I couldnt help it,
    it was a reaction
    induced by rage

    Now Im here beside the lake...

    in the middle of the day...

    far away...

    from anyone,

    FROM ANYONE!!
    NO ONE CAN HEAR YOU FUCKING SCREAM
    WHAT?
    LET YOU GO?
    WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU MEAN?
    SHUT THE FUCK UP
    WHAT?
    YOU DIDNT THINK THAT I WOULD KNOW
    WHAT YOU DID!
    MORE LIKE WHO YOU DID
    YOU FUCKIN HO,

    but thats ok...

    I HOPE YOU ENJOYED HIS DICK!
    BECAUSE OF YOU
    HES BURNING ALIVE IN THE FIRE PIT!
    YOU FUCKING BITCH
    OPEN YOUR EYES
    LOOK AT HIM BURN SLOW
    IM GONNA FORCE YOU TO SIT
    AND WATCH THE LOVELY SHOW,
    AND WHEN ITS OVER,
    INTO THE WATER YOU GO!
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  14. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    What?
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