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  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Write a Arcoustic poem to this picture.

    Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same
    words as in the title.


    Example #1:
    Heartbreaking

    He broke my heart
    Every piece, shattered
    All I wanted was his love
    Real, as he promised
    True, as mine for him
    But he walked away
    Right in the middle of paradise
    Every beat of my heart
    Aches for his love
    Keeping the flame aglow
    I will wait by the light
    Never losing the hope
    God will send him back to me

    By Jody Kuperavage
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  2. MisterEThoughts

    MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth

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    tahts hot aightz i will do this later finally man i been waiting for this picture thing for quite a while man come on more pics i am really digging this exercise more of this kind of things.... more pics to write to please....
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  3. BrokenSoul8604

    BrokenSoul8604 Apparently Emotionless

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    i love these things

    i'll be on lata

    God Bless
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  4. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    hmmmm interesting

    challenging....I'm down

    do we post our poem in this thread or no?
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  5. BrokenSoul8604

    BrokenSoul8604 Apparently Emotionless

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  6. DaJackle

    DaJackle ThoughtS ProcessinG

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    Nightly skies posses timeless memories
    Everest dreams drowned my eyes to see
    Views deep down burial incantations
    Espial, sins fly birds in nations
    Reverbed through my mouth, to my hands

    Memories posses timeless nightly skies
    Overload with temptatious thoughts, see
    Redundant deed still flowing swift incantations
    Everest seals reveal sins in my hidden hands never more
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  7. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    sometimes my eyes slide
    behind the evil and deception
    and reside somewhere sublime

    somewhere where love hate
    peace and rage all gather and
    become one defined

    the truth though seldom spoken is
    held tight within the depths of
    many mens hearts and minds

    i beged of her to touch my lips
    and her eyes wept like forever
    was nearing its end and tommorow
    was already left behind...

    wondering is this today or just
    yesterday played for the
    one hundrand thousand time and
    its in these times that my soul flirts with
    the holyghost like old woman touched
    by the hands of god so unoticable yet defined

    i wish i could give this shit up but
    the truth has seaped inside my soul and
    tainted the hopes of dreams once
    traped beneath the lies

    yeah i know its not the shit u asked for but this is what i wrote when i saw the piece...
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  8. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    Letting go of yesterday is often a task left better suited for tommorow

    -lp
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  9. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    never act like tommorow is a given
    b/c you werent garunteed today...

    -lp
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  10. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    fake people can say what the feel but they cant feel what they say

    -lp
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  11. DaJackle

    DaJackle ThoughtS ProcessinG

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    lol @ lpoet...i'll read that piece once i get back home
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  12. D-QueL

    D-QueL New Member

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    Trapped, angered, alone and empty
    Raged, inflamed, breathing fire
    Alone sitting on hot coals
    Plain vibrant colors shelters
    Pocketed around in devil’s blanket
    Envy and lust but restricted
    Dangerous acts appear once released from burden
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  13. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    Phenomenon flame on – heavens passion
    Humans and Angels explore dangerous romancen’
    Onyx Storm flood my bones a golden shower
    Eulogy with love poems black cloak with dancing flowers
    Nebulous to sudden bliss powerless over lust
    Idolize the women’s flesh incorrect distorted happiness
    X-chromosome mixes with Angel sperm offspring mighty men in the Old Testament

    Kindred to giant aliens made God very upset – Raindrops first origin
    Inherit the death mother earth undressed - clean us for 40 days and 40 nights
    Satan’s failed mission - one of many attempts to prevent the birth of Jesus Christ
    Sunshine won’t be denied - alas I stand under the shadow of the Phoenix flight
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  14. BrokenSoul8604

    BrokenSoul8604 Apparently Emotionless

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    Abroad the sky. Almost Lost.
    Leaning into what was once mine.
    Only I whisper to be heard.
    No one feels this pain.
    Enemies drift into my all.

    I am born to be haunted by all that surrounds me.

    Severed in ways unimaginable.
    Tortured through timid thoughts.
    Against the grainy texture of society.
    Never shall I breathe without bitter ease.
    Defeat, defeat, defeat.
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  15. Cockmaster700

    Cockmaster700 Worst Textcee Of All Time

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    moderater holding a ball as a hater tacless and factless hate his own a snake unknown banned from HEAVEN liven in sin among unforgiving men I'll wait for thou soul
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  16. Nereus

    Nereus Your Downfall

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    "Beckoned"

    Begging amongst withered stars
    Etching inflicted pain under dim light
    Cloak covered hatred prone demeanour
    Kills the care to motivate proper insight
    Oily sweat gleams the steam of it's source
    Neck stiffened spawning eerie notions
    Epitome of one summoned by own corpse
    Demeaning the honor of ones true focus
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  17. InTheStars

    InTheStars Reflective

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    I have had a little bit of trouble writing or even want to write for a while...this pic helped

    MY INSPIRATION

    Mindful of all that has occurred
    Yet still I am intact

    Inside I have feel abused
    Naturally reflecting out the outside
    Sinful pleasures and
    Playful passion that have been endured
    I happily give away without
    Regretting a single move
    All that I have learned
    Tells nothing of what I have been taught
    Inside I bleed all of my worries away
    Outside bright red skin is
    Naked, I see you, white dove, as my inspiration to live.
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  18. InTheStars

    InTheStars Reflective

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    This made me think of something else to write.

    WHEN I DIE

    When I die
    Heaven and hell is not what I will think of
    Every little thought will encompass you
    No matter where I will be taken
    I will die thinking of you
    Desperate I was to be saved
    I called to you and you answered
    Even in death your heart surrounds me
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  19. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    I hate

    Pushing aside nightmares that hold answers
    Oblivious to blessings above
    Everyone dies, death is cancerous
    Today just brought me closer..to
    Seeing....

    What I've been running from
    Inside of these words
    There was once a trace of my
    Heart....

    Everyday I
    Grow
    Open to things, I've never
    Seen


    A little quick keystyle!
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  20. BrokenSoul8604

    BrokenSoul8604 Apparently Emotionless

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    heh....hmmm...wonder if he's referring to anyone


    Jackles, Stars, and the Meaning behind souls caught my eye....nice drops everyone

    God Bless
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