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Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Feme Sole, Sep 25, 2003.

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  1. misspimp

    misspimp a.k.a KATURAH

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    Damn AzeussuezA and Xero...both your poems just reached out and slapped the shit out of me like the scary dude was tryna do in the pic lol....props to everyone....great work!!

    mad love
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  2. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    I stand here hoping
    For a shirt.
    Praying to accessorize
    Oh, my eyes! Oh, my eyes!
    I
    Couldn't find my helmet, so my
    Headphones
    Will
    Have
    2
    Do
    I peed in your pool!
    I peed in your pool!
    Yay!
    I purposefully
    Cut my hair to look
    Questionably Ga--

    Oh, wait. I think i got the wrong pic...
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  3. Cigma

    Cigma Maxwell's Demon

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    A naive child led me to a strange dangerous place.

    Travelling down my path I slowed my pace.

    Showed my face, effortless while they tried.

    Beguiled by friends although I knew the lies.

    Stood still, complacent just to sit for years.

    Till I finally got sick of it, no more joy in tears.


    Told them I wanted out, but they were loathe to let me go.

    They couldn't understand to live, I need to grow.

    In my heart I know, what we had will always be here.

    My concious clear, from that pit my spirit split - arose.

    Once dearest allies, transformed to foes.

    When they realized they were there because they chose.

    To weak, unwilling to climb out themselves.

    Deceived by one they knew brought hell.


    I gave them truth, but still they needed more.

    Beseeched for help, they begged implored.

    But it was them or it was me.

    Fighting free drained all my energy.

    None to spare, why can't they see?

    So in grief I fled the scene, like the light escapes the night...


    In times of doubt, I still feel them grasping.

    Yet at last I know the route.

    Running faster while they seethe and shout.

    One day I hope they find their own way out.
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  4. AzeussuezA

    AzeussuezA The Mods Are Gay

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    Sick bastard!
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  5. AzeussuezA

    AzeussuezA The Mods Are Gay

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    Appreciate it...
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  6. Jay Slimm

    Jay Slimm 6-1-6ko's

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    My heart beats faster - My goal so far away
    trapped in a nightmare - as clear as any day
    My enemy some entity unknown and so strong
    seems like my life my dreams are waving so long
    but I go on struggling - never giving up
    whether it's fiction or reality my will to live is tough
    I go on through thick and thin - bright and grim
    I control my foe - you'll never tame the fight in slimm

    i don't know i kinda like poetry......peace
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  7. McGirth

    McGirth New Member

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    the world is in black and white​
    there's just evil and me​
    there's nothing else out there​
    just evil and me​
    they see me eluding evil​
    they think that i'm good​
    evasive of them​
    they think my spirit is good​
    but theres no good in this world​
    there's just evil and me​
    I run - try to escape​
    that's all that I see​
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  8. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    my bad.....i have a new pic and i was testing it but i cant get it to work
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  9. Bobby Live germ

    Bobby Live germ New Member

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    i got a great idea to this...let me coo some thing up...i havet read no ones..so hopfully..it wont be a duplicate..

    one...brb
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  10. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    .........
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  11. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    Damn yo, I read the thing Azeus had up there, and then I got to the Quote by misspimp, thanx a lot Pimpin, lol, then I got to the fuckin quote from Beef, WTF!!!
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