Write to this picture....

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Feme Sole, Jun 19, 2003.

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  1. GorillaThugMC

    GorillaThugMC Minotaur Orator

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    Little blonde haired girl, retarded she must be
    About to fall off a cliff, what the fuck? Can't she see?
    Hopscotch is a stupid game, that's '94 style
    Off of a KoRn CD? Feme Sole's gone buck wild!
    This ain't really a poem, this ain't really how I feel
    That kid has his knapsack attached to a baseball bat, that's grimey for real!
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  2. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    [funny] [funny] 10/10 lol
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  3. utsukushikumegami

    utsukushikumegami That's Ms. Goddess to you

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    ::laughing too hard to say anything of importance:: [funny]
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  4. Kareem

    Kareem Still Ballin

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    ^ dumb kid
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  5. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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    If you’ve never experienced death, how do you know you will die?
    If you’ve never taken any risks……..how do you know your alive?
    Supply myself with curiosity and inquisitiveness. What will I find?
    A higher level of enlightenment...leaving most of mankind behind.
    In my mind I felt like a sheep, stuck in a perpetual awake like sleep.
    Born to be a clone, alone but not my own, moving my feet to the beat.
    Keep dancing to the pied piper of life…and one day you will realise.
    That once you take your first breath it’s begun an inevitable suicide.
    Why, because where all carbon copies….fake so I came to a point.
    No more living by the rules………...instead I just flipped the coin.
    Destroyed all modern expectations and then plunged right into society.
    Started wearing red, playing a new tune in my head, fuck the majority.
    Sorry if you don’t believe but I am free, taste the air no ones like me.
    If only you could see, I’m not a freak on a leash ‘cause unlike you my mind I will speak.
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  6. GorillaThugMC

    GorillaThugMC Minotaur Orator

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    Muchos Gracias! *enjoying his 15 minutes of poetry fame*
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  7. Kareem

    Kareem Still Ballin

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    homogorillathugmc ur an e-fag
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  8. Da Klimp

    Da Klimp Ninja Vampire

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    I like a lot of the poems I've read in here. I'll avoid saying which I like because the people whose poems I did not mention might feel hit or something, and when it comes to poetry, just about no one is the one to judge. But I must say that two of the best ones were Feme Sole's and BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum's.

    Oh, and what the hell is Kareem's problem? Why isn't he banned?
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  9. Kareem

    Kareem Still Ballin

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    ^ cuz i'm pimpin ur fat ass momma
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  10. Azazel_The_Fallen_Angel

    Azazel_The_Fallen_Angel Gringo

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    See how fast our games in life
    Can lead to pitts of shame
    As others point and follow might
    Misunderstand the same.
    You can choose to lead or follow
    But it really is mundane
    Because in the end we all will find
    Love can cause us pain.
    Seek it with a cautious soul
    Except both sun and rain
    And always look ahead because
    Life's a One-Way Memory Lane........
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  11. lewdDog

    lewdDog Life is are own illusion

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    little kids laughing n playing but not realizing wats going to happen as the day is ending.(sunset)
    oblizious of wat could happen still cant fation the thought of defeat.
    as her peers look on in eyes of grief ,
    silently wishing she'd reach the beach.{under the cliff}
    as DEATH takes another soul its time for the next roll.
    U could roll a 1-9 but eventually ur soul will be mine.(death)

    i dont no alittle sumthing my 1st time writing to a pic to but felt like writing sumthing hope people like it
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  12. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    Five lost souls on the edge of no return
    The earth is cracked
    Cliffs brings vision of aftermath
    In the form of jumping jacks
    Number three player bets she dies fast
    They all fall down like toy soldiers
    Life’s children chalked up to the edge
    Ready to die fast
    How long will life cliff last
    Erosion of hate and pedophiles schemes
    Takes a little girls dreams to the extreme
    Suicide bullet caught by faiths dark dream
    A picture is a thousand words of choice
    Korn spoke it in a cry for help voice
    Picture your child playing on Existences plank
    Imaginations of youth brought to resistance….
    We are those children blind to mans incompetence

    How life and death exist
    How heaven and hell fits
    The description of innocence
    Morbid
    Dark
    Surreal
    A game we all know to well
    Is the game of life in which we dwell
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  13. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    The earth is cracked
    Cliffs brings vision of aftermath
    In the form of jumping jacks
    Number three player bets she dies fast


    "They all fall down like toy soldiers"


    Life’s children chalked up to the edge
    Ready to die fast
    How long will lifes cliff last
    Erosion of hate and pedophiles schemes
    Takes a little girls dreams to the extreme
    Suicide bullet caught by faiths dark dream
    A picture is a thousand words of choice
    Korn spoke it in a cry for help voice
    Picture your child playing on edge of existences plank
    Imaginations of youth brought to resistance….
    We are those children blind to mans incompetence

    How life and death exist
    How heaven and hell fits
    The description of innocence
    Morbid
    Dark
    Surreal
    A game we all know to well
    Is the game of life in which we dwell……….(SMH-06-26-03)


    didn't mean to be lame and post on a post but this seem to be the better fit for this picture.
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  14. WoKoBo

    WoKoBo New Member

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    a heart destroyed by love

    your existence once brought
    me to a place called love.
    yet now it only brings me the pain
    of losing what i thought love was,
    like dirt swept up under the rug.
    everything was fine up until
    the tomorrow of two days ago...
    Last night, you stabbed me in the back
    with an ice pick.
    The sun rose, melting the evidence
    that now drips from my eyelids.
    these tears lead me to a place i dont want to be,
    but i willingly go anyway.
    They form a stream flowing off a cliff
    into the abyss of existence.
    i shall play in that stream,
    trying to savor for one last
    soon to be forgotten moment,
    my childish ways...
    my unique innocense that dwelled in my being
    before my heart dwelled around the being of you.
    one that destroyed my hearts capablilty to love again.
    Loves not what its said to be...
    its a disease without a cure...
    without hope.
    like me at this moment.
    Let me hop, skip, and jump
    into a place called nowhere.
    where love ceases to exist
    so as to guarentee the future existence
    of gullible hearts like mine.
    goodbye.
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  15. marc antony

    marc antony It's all about da ass....

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    notice satan's imp's makin prints, this is just government extended to the playground with crazy crayons for our children and the cliff prison which they playnow, stay down "except for the little kids that played on the playground/cause for some little girl she'll never see more than six years of life", skip skip skip to my loom but the loom is hidden in a room past the cliff try and reach it, meet your doom
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  16. *GeMiNeYeZ*

    *GeMiNeYeZ* ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~

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    I'd always wished to skip life and go straight to heaven...

    Until my daughter played hopscotch on a cliff...

    I wish I never made that wish.
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  17. iceheart

    iceheart The Frozen Poet

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    are you ever gonna change the picture? you should, it could be like the topic of the month or something. peace

    iceheart
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  18. ARCHITECT

    ARCHITECT New Member

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    when you going to use the picture i sent you
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  19. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    that's his glove. not a knapsack.
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