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  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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  2. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    I wish it were bigger...
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  3. Atmosphera

    Atmosphera New Member

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    I Dont Know What Happened But The Picture Captured Part Of Me So Silently I Speak To Myself



    Many times she said to me that love and life are tender, But why should I concede this point or otherwise surrender? Nor will I assail her more while curs and boors defend her -- The effort, vain, the purpose, lost; I cannot comprehend her. Many times she made it known that I could never save her, That petulance and headaches were the sum of what I gave her. And loathing in this style, sure as steel she would not waver, Her disposition calloused toward those fallen from her favor. She slanders goddess Luna when she writes as though she needs him; Hangs herlself, a garish opal, glows until she bleeds dim; Gives herself in body to a boy as she misleads him, Her heart betrothed to someone else whose decadence precedes him And here I leave those better days in songs and photographs, As she carves my trifling name into her girlhood epitaphs. To reduce impassioned trysts to ungainly teenaged gaffes -- A sentiment which one reflects upon, pauses, and then laughs.
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  4. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    The Seer

    We dance to the rhythm of dreams
    Different in scheme
    Stuck between the real and
    Reality
    Speak truth through fatality
    Immortality
    Casually saddening
    Finality
    We behold the pale horse
    And
    Evade remorse
    As the perceptions of the day
    Become acquainted in dreams
    Fade into the scenes, I
    Try not to cry, I
    Hit the ground twice
    But can’t not see
    We ask not, want not
    God pours through We
    Stay in dimensional limbo
    He did this to me
    Weeds finish through me
    As a nightmare escapes
    I dare awake, and
    Write where its fate
    Has a light fair gait
    Born of grizzly pate
    Through the dungeons and purgatory
    Fights dared in hate
    We are the prophets of heart
    Emotions abound
    Those are the sounds
    Of the hope filled abound.
    I write because my heart
    Is compelled by it.
    I can’t stop.
    My thoughts are repelled my it.
    I see, feel, hear, taste
    And smell by it.
    Perceive the world with my pen,
    Escape cells by it.
    Stand in the fellowship of men
    And fair angels in bloom
    Angles of whom create
    Infinite space in a room
    Of antiquity
    Time is here, no past or future
    That’s the route through which the soul
    Must pass to suit the
    Needs of understanding
    Demanding sometimes on man
    The
    Capacity to finally see his dreams.
    I remember night scapes
    When I awake and I relate
    To try and make the night awake
    And denial fly away.
    We as poets owe a duty to the world of readers
    Future seers borne through our words as breeders
    We’re the
    Way the heart is heard or seen
    Worst can be the loss of heart’s purity
    We’re the soldiers in the night
    Bearing boulders of light
    On Shoulders of might
    With the Onus to write
    Verbal Onanism
    Sinful if we spill forth our wisdom
    Never to be read, never to be heard or forgiven
    Speak, fair poet, youthful muses and scribes
    You can ignite your youthfulness through truthful delight.
    Shout down, vintage sage. Speak once through your eyes
    Give us the might of wisdom from your decades of site.
    This is the right and true path of the poet and seer
    Who holds a power and a burden through the purpose so clear.
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  5. S. Issue

    S. Issue Who?

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    Jaws drop and I am gently taken by the ferocious wind
    where I create the final mind states
    of the lost and the good at heart, childless mothers
    crying for my breathes to put life into loved
    ones lost beyond barriers of buried trees...
    Where the heavens collide with
    destiny and forever transforms silent
    dreams into crying realities...
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  6. Sun_Flower

    Sun_Flower Bluez By Loves Eye

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    Time itself as no boundaries
    Life itself shades many flavors
    Like velvet lights in clear sequence
    Air
    Our breath in all its form

    Nuturing mind body and soul

    Seasons change like water
    In mistful diversions
    Her strive dissipates
    Side by side two in one rides on
    Through belief at hearts ground

    Surrender matter and bear its presence

    So as this picture dies in my eyes
    I’m bonded to the face that cries
    By stare
    Into burnt burden
    Of dying lowly
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  7. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    "So as this picture dies in my eyes
    I’m bonded to the face that cries
    By stare
    Into burnt burden
    Of dying lowly"

    damn that's what i'm talkin about, i havent seen you post anything in a long ass time. This was refreshing

    please if you can hit me up, i would like to talk to you

    deadsmilez@aol.com
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  8. bare with me cus i just look at the picture and try doing something on the spot..

    All seings eyes in skies of falling timber, purple rivers and streams caught in the eyes of the sinner.
    Mortal man and a million woes, the stallion of the forrest, and the maiden without clothes..
    The path seems deadly, and trees rise..eventually..
    all shall come to pass, the forrest is alive but will it last?..
    Hope is the tool, im in love im a fool..show me the heavens born from this land, show me what the lady in the sky will grow from the sand..show me more of her heart, not just her eyes, she watches me everyday, everynight im hypnotised,
    worried about my kingdom...
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  9. varentao

    varentao New Member

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    Naked truth stands silent
    Whistling pain
    Violet skies dawn upon us
    Greyness reigns
    Eyes shadow souls
    Walking blind
    Autumn has fallen
    Emotions clash...
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  10. SAMARA

    SAMARA truth is a sword

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    What is the untranslated phrase at the bottom of the picture?
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  11. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    ^^^ the name of the person who drew and the name of the picture i believe
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  12. SAMARA

    SAMARA truth is a sword

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    it does not appear that way, it is difficult to read as it looks like a phrase.
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  13. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    it is when i picked the picture, it was bigger and it was better to read
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  14. Cigma

    Cigma Maxwell's Demon

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    the art of dying....
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  15. varentao

    varentao New Member

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    Fleeting love...
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  16. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    wondering aimlessley between
    yesterdays heartbreak
    and tommorows failure
    unaware of the beauty within today...

    that one for you mind
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  17. augee.ali

    augee.ali Lively Up Yourself...

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    Quick drop:

    What the dope man done sold me? [dunno]
    I feel like...
    No one can hold me,
    I can't even control me...
    I'm flippin out,
    and seein shit,
    I wouldn't normally,
    And hearing colors
    That I normally speak...
    WAIT.......
    I can't SPEAK colors,
    Even though I can
    Paint a picture with words,
    And you'll see what I'm talkin about,
    As I stand with no desire to be heard...
    Everything is a purple blur,
    And I see naked transparent
    Women dancin'
    With a cold pot of grits...
    What the dope man done sold me...
    Cuz it got me hallucinatin'
    A lotta shit!
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  18. SAMARA

    SAMARA truth is a sword

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    that was not an original drop
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  19. marc antony

    marc antony It's all about da ass....

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    the color purple within which we walk/
    purple our moods, our actions, our thoughts/
    purple our talk, our hearts, our wants/
    purple the skies purple the trees/
    purple you purple me, purple is she who sees/
    a blue face mixed with red passion/
    to blanket and tint the scene we are passing/
    purple that purple this purple you/
    all the mixtures of my red roses and violets are blue/
    so purple i see purple i breathe/
    purple the color of our hopes and our dreams/
    red of my blood and red of my eyes/
    mixed with blue hues emitted from the skies/
    red fish and blue fish is me walkin with you-ness/
    highness royal purple royalty is purple/
    you are my queen your are my princess/
    I am your king and your prince in this vision/
    purple the leaves and also purple the path/
    red wine of grapes, nectar of blue berries/
    purple the path on which we are carried


    *bows head in silence*
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  20. utsukushikumegami

    utsukushikumegami That's Ms. Goddess to you

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    I wish I could have gotten a better feel for that picture...it's so gorgeous...my poem doesn't seem to match it well, but oh well, here it is:

    Can you see it?
    The eyes of the night watching
    In the deep night in this dead forest
    The faint light in the distance blinds my chosen path…

    Like in a dream, shadows take ghostly forms
    Haunting beauty wanders this isolated realm
    And searches on a star bound destiny
    What is this reality I feel?

    These images appearing before me
    Like those of a midsummer’s dream…
    Darkness is falling in this world
    Can you hear the voice calling your name?

    The fog is thick
    Like tears dissipating in cold water
    I am absorbed in this fantasy once more
    Lost forever in this child’s nightmare…
    Watching…waiting…
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