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  1. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    test
  2. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    i never do these so i keyed this up a second ago....know its not all that so feel free to show me up...lol

    I stared into this oblivion
    And my eyes gripped tight the glory
    I don’t deserve such beauty for my
    Mind body and soul have embraced My every sin
    I once fiddled with death, as my
    Thoughts mixed with insomnia
    And I visualized each artery beneath my skin
    Tell me…..
    Where will this end
    Perhaps in the fiery pits of hell or
    Blown away with the wind
    The clouds circle as the sun fades
    I wanna leave but I can’t find
    The strength to turn and walk away
    I reached for the skies
    And touched heaven but my
    Rights were greatly outweighed
    So I drop to my knees
    And my body felt angels
    Soothe my chaotic ways
    I no longer feel so empty
    I feel whole today
    But have I really found the truth
    Or have I stepped into another
    Hallway of insanity?
    Has the storm stopped…..
    Or when I open my eyes
    will I still see rain

    blah......
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  3. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    I stand on the edge of my dream's
    the shore of my soul
    waiting to see a vessel thats never coming,
    The sund blinds my eyes
    but this
    the last time
    for my journey ends here but my heart,
    ever running,
    I have travelled far from places unknown
    learned, shared, loved, lost and grown
    through fire and ice
    when heartbreak was my home
    I have smiled,
    once,
    I can almost recall it,
    that one time I felt joy before
    my confidence was blown,
    I have travelled far ,
    but alas,
    I am too weak for this test,
    I can no longer continue,
    I'm tired I must rest,
    I close my eyes,
    This sun set's on my breath.
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  4. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    good lookin lpoet.

    tight piece, good to see you write to a pic, nice work, I like dit...much love
    peace
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  5. NAiT

    NAiT myself

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    miraculous my vernacular
    no reaction as spectacular
    visions spin blending splendidly
    drift together like the clouds and sea
    just a shroud of what covers the proof
    illusions are breathtaking rippling the truth
    looking at life from a step back
    like a snow dome shaken unstirred relaxation
    just a piece of driftwood lost in that lake
    test
  6. Nasty__Ness

    Nasty__Ness The Queen of Topicals

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    okay a quick write (thanks for the pic lpoet)...

    I stand out in the open leaving me open to the world
    The warmth of the sun,
    And chills from the deepest waters
    Stranded on my emotional complex
    My next step is to be baptized by the elements
    As my heart is clouded with no silver lining in sight
    But reflections to my past and present.
    Shadowed upon copious miles
    Yet pounding on effortlessly to present itself.
    And my goals are watered from tears that have traveled
    A mire puddle has grown to a stream, river, lake, sea
    Surrounding my obstacles, out of reach…
    But dare I leap…
    I stand out in the open, leaving me open to all.
    test
  7. Im swirling
    can't you see?
    Im dreaming sleepily
    gazing
    It's amazing
    a gracefull mazefull of ripples
    an iceberg or a hill tipples
    tumbling forth in subtle form
    immortilising my thought
    it shimmers still as my standing age
    the horizion bound to my restraint
    I stand and cannot run
    and the moon could be but a cloud in the sun
    test
  8. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    I write to a picture of remembrance.

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    I write to a picture of remembrance.
    My life
    My life
    My life
    plots the course to two sunshine—
    I take a sip of purple water
    My lips are no longer chapped
    I’m older
    I found my path to redemption
    I have reached the end of the world.
    I continue to change my ways with holy solutions
    The world in which I stand is my own delusion
    I found myself Side by side with myself until the sunset…
    I walk alone accompanied by the brightest planets
    My body is the shore that keeps my thoughts at bay,
    while two solid rocks, keep angered tides away.
    The seclusions in my existence ripples with the tides
    I see off in the distance a reflection of mine own eyes
    While purple rain washed away soiled memories
    The shores hold two sets of footprints in the sand
    One set from six- the other sets was Jesus and his armies
    He didn’t carry me we walked together in sequence
    One man mixed images of life so he could be
    remember by bliss.
    Jesus had became the second burning planet in an instance
    I’m on my own standing still, and waiting for a heaven sent…
    test
  9. misspimp

    misspimp a.k.a KATURAH

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    **I'm so excited because I've never done one of these before....and i wasnt plannin on it either...but the poem i wrote last night kinda goes with it...so i hope u all enjoy!!**


    If Only I Could Afford Tommorrow

    If only I could afford tommorrow....
    This land would belong to me forever...
    But instead...
    I write to you this letter.

    Dear Mommy,
    I've put my childhood behind me.
    I'm staring at the prettiest sea...
    Standing on the most beautiful black beads...of sand...
    Realizing now that time has escaped my hands!
    ANd that only I can define who I am.
    I've ran...as far as I could...
    Always said that I wouldn't...
    Knowing that I would.
    & I should...have seen this day coming.
    When the life that I've always known would change.
    If only I could afford tommorrow...
    I would buy 3 weeks ago's yesterday.
    & today would already be paid in full.
    Just so I could mess up another chance.
    I'm empty...
    Like the streakless rays of my sun's glare.
    It's rare....that you would catch me...
    Wanting to buy tommorrow.
    With feelings numb to the world...
    & A broken heart hollowed.
    Wanting for someone....
    To give me some guidelines to follow.
    & Only God knows...
    About the bones & shadows....
    that are burried in my closet...
    So i ran all the way here...
    The ocean is where I'll wash it.
    I'll let it all go...
    & drift away into the tides...
    & if I could afford tommorrow...
    Then I'd make it back home...
    Before the tsunami begins to rise!
    test
  10. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    the second thought.....to the picture a hand...

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    lol[remix]
    I write to a picture of remembrance
    To
    My life
    My life
    My life that
    plots the course to two sunshine—
    I take a sip of purple water to sooth
    My no longer chapped lips.
    I’m older
    I found my path to redemption.
    I have reached the end of the world and
    I’ve come to this conclusion,
    as I continue to change my ways with holy solutions
    The world in which I stand is my own delusion.
    I found myself Side by side with myself
    I no longer walk alone, until the sunset and
    the tides came to rest.
    I will be accompanied by the brightest planets.
    My body is the shore that keeps my thoughts at bay,
    while two solid rocks keep angered tides away.
    The seclusions in my existence ripples with a tides rise of persistence...... to be continued
    test
  11. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    Ok, ok, Prophet, you mah dog and all, but MissPimp took the award on this one...Absolutely beautiful piece...I actually have something for this picture myself...but Imma leave it alone, might post it in the realm, might not...anyway, Misspimp, you did da damn thang...6ftground thank you sooo much for the Remix, loved them both...Wow, impressive on this piece you all came, but Misspimp bitchslapped errrbody, lol...
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  12. misspimp

    misspimp a.k.a KATURAH

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    Well damn Xero....i thought it was good...but i didnt think i'd be bitch slapping anyone with it...LOL....however thanx a million and a half times for the love....im speechless...

    I Loved everyones piece on here as well....and praise goes to whoever ofund the picture

    mad love
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  13. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    i inhale on the purple
    and keep it there
    for a sec...
    exhale into a blissful sky
    and began to reflect...
    on the past, present, and
    the future...
    eyes half open tryin
    to get a better
    picture...
    my focus is lost in a
    foggy matrix...
    my life is worthless cause
    but my words
    are sacred...
    and todays can be
    never new...
    when the pain seems to
    always continue...
    i realized not only did
    i lose me, but i
    lost you...
    i've came to
    a time...
    where i face off unto
    purple skies...
    rage drapin the top of my lungs
    but only a whispers becomes of
    those precious cries...
    i've lost you
    and i need to know
    who am i...
    all i know is i left
    the real me soulless,
    denied...and name
    him malik,
    a person for whom
    is made up
    by lies...

    my name was never king
    and today a poet
    dies...

    keystyle
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  14. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    `~*I dont usually write in here, dont know why, but I figured I would give it a shot, anyway, lemme know what you think*~`


    Will you join me here in my Palace on the Sun? Where time sits still and light waits on no one. Patience is the virtue that rules time here. Darkness is the bane that always embraces me so near. I would like too, but I cannot ask you to stay. It is up to you, but feel free to walk away.

    All are welcome here to my Palace on the Sun. A place consumed entirely by light, but inside there is none. Fire that rages on even in the darkest night. Stunning arrays of warmth, comforts, and light. A light brighter than any light could ever hope to be. The light I shine though, I cannot see.

    Can I dance with you on your Stage of Stars? Where no one wears masks even though we all bear scars. This monsters masquerade is one of a kind. It’s not something that everybody can find. Most get lost in the lore of the magic. Others forget its simplicity thinking that it’s tragic.

    Few seem to want to dive into my Ocean of Stars. Each flickering light in the distance resembles scars. Diamonds that were thrown across a blanketed velvet sky. Mistaken for hopes and dreams that people often deny. Darkness stretching forever with flickering little holes. Dancing among its emptiness like lost souls.

    Can I find Escape in your Eyes? Where the endless darkness of the perpetual night meets its demise. Moats of life and power stream from your tears. Eternity’s of solitude are no longer among your fears. A peer through tinted irises is just like the air. Light inside and out, light everywhere.

    I would like to find Escape in the windows of your Eyes. Halos grace the rims of the iris so I fear no lies. Just as beautiful as their delicate frame. Each tear breathes oxygen to fuel their flame. Stare into the window that I present too. I want to belong to the whole entire different world inside of you.
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  15. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    Malik Man, as usual, you FUCKIN RIPPED IT!!! but still, the award goes to Misspimp, lol, but that was off the fuckin hook right there, you shoulda posted that in the realm instead of in here, not gonna get justice in here man...damn...
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  16. RxQueen

    RxQueen Worship. Play.

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    As I gaze out into the vast milkiness of a blues infused sky
    I think to myself, "Why, heaven, why?"
    What on earth have I done to myself?
    Why have I forsaken your meaty offerings of this beautiful wealth?
    I cannot love the stars as much as I used to.
    It pains me to see their tears drip into the ocean the way they always do.
    The water seems so calm now, but you know that it will change.
    All my faculties are beyond me now, my senses tuned into strange.
    The knife is at my wrist, ready to make you an offering.
    The water laps at the lands edges, unnerved by my bothering.
    It kills me to see you so calm like this.
    So serene and peacefully alive, but I know that only death could offer such bliss.
    A lifetime of heartache contained in the grains of sand at my feet.
    I want to run from you forever. Find shelter in a hole, crawl away and retreat.
    As I stand here now, gazing out upon the moon.
    Heavy in it's weight, I see the sky struggling to hold you. Sweating just to make room.
    I think of all the little things now. You know, the things that don't matter.
    You make me feel so small now! Your beauty has left me battered.
    I wish I could make peace within myself. Tell myself it will all be alright.
    But your bruise infused hues sting my eyes with the truths of tonight.
    Tonight is all it ever was meant to be.
    A moment I have to myself, for once, to set myself free.
    You mock me now with your waves and nymph like sea sounds.
    Hypnotically psychotically in a trance you leave me, wearing nothing but this frown.
    I am the disenchanted one. The one the waters floors wait for.
    Biding their time within the darkness, whispering to the surface for just a little more.
    More! More! More! You want to even the score.
    And I want to give in and give you me. Make this the final trip as to what I'm here for.
    I see the sea creatures now floating on their sides.
    Bobbing along on your soft sided shoulders, gently whisked away on their last ride.
    To eternity! To evermore! The other side of the rainbow.
    Take me now my sweet darling, for as high as you make me feel, I've never been so low.
    test
  17. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    good drops by everyone..props to 49th prophet for the pic
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  18. misspimp

    misspimp a.k.a KATURAH

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    Xero...i definetly read this one before...i dont know where....but im pretty sure i already told u i loved it....cuz i do....it sounds better to me now than it did the first time....MInd/Soul.....i loved your piece as well!!!!

    mad love
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  19. Dark_Angel

    Dark_Angel Dark_Angel

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    gotta say you all did a GREAT job, but agree, misspimp took it away with her peice! good job everyone
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  20. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    I pull up my sleeves
    So I can make worlds collide
    I stand aside
    Swallow my pride
    Because this
    This makes me cry inside
    All the things I've done
    All the things gone wrong
    There's no way it can be right
    But still, I go along
    Maybe because I dont want to be alone
    Sitting on high, Ruling from my throne
    I watch both suns ravage each other
    Tearing apart bonds, like a child to its mother
    And stabing the very life that I breathe
    Taking it from my lungs
    Like an infant when it begins to teeth
    I am feeling ohh so young
    Damn near immature, not ready for this
    But I watch oblivion as these two suns kiss
    Something I've caused
    Brought upon by many pains
    I havent paused
    There are no strains
    Only screams, distant in the night
    They are consumed and eaten alive by the light
    There is no escape, because I hold the key
    Fate, obscured by false destiny
    I pull them together so they are no more
    Now I stand alone here, Pacing on the shore
    All the lives I've crossed are gone
    Am I really the king? or am I a pawn?
    Used to get done what others wont do?
    Or do I really belong to the world that lies deep within you??? This was a quick keystyle poem, kinda bored, so I figured why not? lol...anyway...yeah...
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