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Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Xero Satsujin, Nov 13, 2003.

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  1. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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  2. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    I've cried countless tears
    Over these past years
    But none of them are like this
    Because this is what I miss
    A time when all seemed well
    Not trapped to this here hell
    Confined to a place only in sleep
    Where pain leaps at the tears I keep
    So this is one that I let go
    This is one that I let show
    It fell, and it rolled down my face
    Leaving deep burning marks in its place
    And I start counting the tears all over again
    Because they mixed with the ink in my pen
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  3. MisterEThoughts

    MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth

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    i dropped my tears one by one...
    they started to formulate into a forumula of one...
    deeply in the transaction of my sleep...
    i get up in the morning and i wheep...
    crying for the one who left before...
    leaving me in a tranquility of my sleep...
    i morn and fall back into one moment of despair...
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  4. Dark_Angel

    Dark_Angel Dark_Angel

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    something i just keystyled to the picture, havent done one of these 'write to pic' things in a while

    staining a page with tainted ink
    never seemed to matter much
    my work was an expression of myself
    am i then tainted?

    fear is in my hand
    honesty sliding smoothly
    across the page
    as this tainted ink
    slowly stays bubbled
    as the surface
    for all to see

    the page cant except it
    true honesty
    chemically formed
    within my eyes
    always sliding smoothly
    this hasnt happened before
    i knew i shouldnt cry
    even my one outlet
    wont except these tears...
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  5. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    This isn't a tear
    it's emotions escaping
    as a symbol of regret
    that this life is forcefully raping
    watching victims
    scream as thier will it's penetrating
    to leave them alive
    but with death resonating
    from a beatless heart
    that drums the march of the fading
    breath that falls
    as the saline is escaping
    for to combust into pieces
    is better than hating
    every emotion within us
    when they start rapidly mating
    to create new feelings
    that confuse and are frustrating
    when you cant care for them
    and they turn into
    an emotion escaping.
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  6. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    Xero, MisterEThoughts, Dark_Angel very nice work, hot shit from all of you
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  7. MisterEThoughts

    MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth

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  8. MisterEThoughts

    MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth

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    damn 49th u are my inspiration bro fuck u amaze me everytime damn bro peace we gotta talk
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  9. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    I like all the pieces so far, but Dark Angel's piece stands out to me, because it's like she can't escape, and I know all too well what that is like...Welcome back MisterEThoughts, good to see you back up in the realm...Prophet, I got ya message but I was at work so I couldnt respond...peace...
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  10. Strike

    Strike packin that metal

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    anonymous unclear in da midst
    when in a search for self
    A mirror becomes clear in the mists...
    it reflects me
    all filled up with transparantness
    its scares me
    hazardous seemingly hollow...
    a tear from gods cheek at a horrid pace...
    hopin to be swallowed...
    And never leave the comfort of his face...
    outcasted feelin scorned and denied
    my destination is uncertain...
    But I find comfort bein born in his eyes

    iono felt this with the pic I cant really compete with the real poets..cause damn yall got some nice pieces up in hea..but I hope some of you like it
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  11. TrufDXaggerator

    TrufDXaggerator New Member

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    We stand toe to toe face to face
    Setting the stage for a rampage of rage
    Clenched teeth-clenched fist-lose feet
    "I aint neva seen dis nigguh fight i wanna see how Truf be"
    "Yo Truf i think dis boy is pussy"
    Me too im jus waitin til dis dude tries to push me
    Im gon hit him so hard he'll feel mo pressure than Bush be
    Crowds surround and hound wantin see us both brawl
    All i need is one hit directly to the jaw
    Madd heads all around drinkin and placin they bets
    Dis been the longest 30 seconds and niether one of us has swung yet
    It dont matter i aint neva scared im ready to vent
    My hesitance is evident
    By this drip of sweat
    Stating MY Nervousness
    Truthfully Speakin and Truf Fully Spittin OUT
    Jus keystyle of wut i think about dis image cus i see a drop of sweat.
    Yo Angel i mos def feelin dat i'll tell u why when i get a chance....Prophet u an intense poet aint u?deep as an abyss...Im feelin urs Xero always makin me think(i hate u lol)...I replied to urs MisterE...and Strike(read wut i said about Prophet)lol i dont expect everyone to reply to everyone like i did im jus too nice lol let me shut up OUT
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  12. Dark_Angel

    Dark_Angel Dark_Angel

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    wow the quality of all these peices, great work
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  13. quruxley

    quruxley SHHHHHET MAN!

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    Some really nice pieces here!


    it's happenin again
    that thing we call crying
    that weakness
    that disgusting show of emotion
    .....makes you wish you were stronger

    you hurt
    so then you bleed
    you hurt
    so then you bleed

    with the lights off
    it's so much easier
    giving way to the misery
    inside you
    dying to get out
    anyway that's possible

    seeping through your eyelids

    .drip
    ..drip
    ...drip
    ....drip


    caressing your sunken cheeks

    now slide your tongue out
    no! no!
    a bit more to the right
    .....yes.....
    quickly catch them as they fall
    and pretend it's the last time
    you'll ever see them

    because

    you promised yourself
    and you never break your promises
    right?
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  14. misspimp

    misspimp a.k.a KATURAH

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    these are all very beautiful pieces, Xero, truf, 49th and dark angel...u all expressed your feelings very well!! Very nice

    mad love
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  15. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    Thank you very much misspimp =)

    Everyone did an excellent job on this I must say

    much love

    peace
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  16. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    Yo, thanx all for the pieces up here, and all did do a great job including the new comers...MissPimp, thanx for that, and yeah, I'll holla...1
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  17. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    This picture represents vitality…

    ......

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    Gaze.... Look harder​

    Can you see it?

    the liquid pain has been charted

    is it not seen to the untrained eye

    no refection can trap lights of truth or fear

    of surprise from ones own eye

    the truth is made clear

    A tear--- no…

    perhaps a rain drop from an guardian angel eye,

    writing a letter to his creator- there is danger beneath the skies.

    Our fears are tears of warning something is conjuring

    within a solitudes sphere no being knows life is growing.

    our seclusion under a microscope represents the essence of existence

    a description of not knowing in the form of liquid question

    6 billion tears absorbed by Earths own sheets of evolution,

    maybe this letter that holds the liquid drop could moisten the world-

    or even better-- a symbolic jesters to drought land settlers to adore

    a tear drop no…. just molecules waiting to burst out into a streams of life
    while leaving a water spot trail for breathing souls to follow to heavens doors.
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  18. Listen2

    Listen2 New Member

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    tears escape from my eyes//
    the cause of this break is piling lies//
    from the people i cared most for//
    now my hearts only left soar//
    but i thought if i devote more//
    time..people wouldnt disregard me//
    or my plans to be//
    a succesful person in life, try ta be in the right//
    no more fist fights, no more hatin outta spite//
    just shake them off, tears and all//
    jus remeber when i fall that those fakes dont call/
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  19. StubbilyMug

    StubbilyMug DayorDollar Records

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    my eyes on a textured surface
    good eye front
    depth inserted bent mirror imperfect
    not certain of clear circles
    splashed into view

    askew through the lake
    wait
    fish drop from weight
    sail straight by
    fly with porous wings
    strings stapled together feathered underwater
    sent to severed worlds
    pearl
    look closer at the girl
    -I tell myself
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  20. DaJackle

    DaJackle ThoughtS ProcessinG

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    the heat is getting to me
    ...i'm trying, i'm trying
    i tell
    myself

    but
    i can't escape
    the heat is turning my body moist
    my heart pounding faster

    i'm trap
    in my crescendo of pulsating veins

    i got to be quiet...
    ...quiet
    close your eyes...bequiet
    constrict in darkness's arms
    where do i go?

    my temperature's rising
    my sweat...
    ..they'll hear me
    its dripping
    .....stay calm

    the heat is getting to me
    atmoshpere of scorching flames
    don't sweat...
    ...don't breath
    its burning
    i have to run
    ...the'll find me
    my sweat is heavy
    ...so is your sin
    close your eyes
    the eyelid of your guilt

    i'm innocent...
    ...then why do you sweat?
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