World Domination-produced bye gdot-drop linkz

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  1. ran-dom31z3d

    ran-dom31z3d formaly know as gdot

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  2. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    beats nice...
    delivery reminds me of packfm..ya flow is ight...u speed up in sum parts n kinds mumble up..so i cant really catch what u sayin....but basicly this is a pretty good drop....cant really say much on it...vocals was ight..coulda been cleand up alil...but the quality still worked...i could hear ya fine...

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  3. ran-dom31z3d

    ran-dom31z3d formaly know as gdot

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    upping hit link
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  4. DiStOrTiOnZ

    DiStOrTiOnZ New Member

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    beats arrigh tnot my steez but dope

    the intro was a bit strange lol.. but that seems like what it is your going for

    you got a louis logic vibe/sound

    flow is decent.. som of the shit is a little forced and doesnt come out right but it just sounds like it needs to be a little more polished

    overall its a coo track

    do me a favor and get back at me

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  5. ran-dom31z3d

    ran-dom31z3d formaly know as gdot

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    ye i know some of its a little forced i was experminting on this shit. but im get ur link in a bit tomoro or some ish cuase i need some matrice time
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  6. ran-dom31z3d

    ran-dom31z3d formaly know as gdot

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  7. V.I.K

    V.I.K The Feedback Returner

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    LOL, nice intro. Props for that. Ya doubles are off from ya main verse recording. Which gives the illusion that your flow is off, although it may not be. Gotta work on tightening up your doubles. Lol, nice sample for the hook too.. Im hesitant to say work on ya flow, cuz personally i dont think there's anything wrong with it. Its tough to tell though, cuz those doubles are fuckin it up... I think your style is unique, the fast and slow thing. It sounds like it works, but again, im not positive. Props for lyric choice. No elementary rhyming type shit. Could work on ya emotion. You kinda monotone in ya style. Definitely try adding some cadence. Overall though this wasnt too bad. For ya next track though, definitely keep that double issue in mind. It'll help you tighten em up. Ight? Be good. 1

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  8. ran-dom31z3d

    ran-dom31z3d formaly know as gdot

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    getting links now drop more feed.
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  9. raidar

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    yeah the beat was decent - too happy for me im kinda an angry dude .. lyrically it was better - ya flow is lil off at a few parts and the voice overs are pretty fucked up - like mine always are ... lower them ... or try recording without them you might sound cleaner ... your pronunciation can use a lil work too but the track wasnt that bad at all ... unique.
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  10. ran-dom31z3d

    ran-dom31z3d formaly know as gdot

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    yo i wana hook u up wiht some raw beat if thats kool?
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  11. Member.

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    peepin.. beat is kinda cool, weird trumpets..

    some lines are a bit rushed, and the doubles kinda makes it hard to understand some shit.."i pissed in gods eye... and he blinked"

    not bad, you got some work to do.. but we all do.. good drop..

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  12. ran-dom31z3d

    ran-dom31z3d formaly know as gdot

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    hit ur linking uping
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