Wordz vs. Tacky Rd. 2

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  1. Gsus

    Gsus aka Wordz bka G. Legit

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    U droppin first....
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    everything else the same...lets go
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  2. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    I run the forum like Egyptian government, watch nothin change
    Try to protest, you’ll better the forum by getting shot in the fuckin face
    Your lyrics are shit, must I fix your sig for your lame ass
    Cuz truth be told you’re more like Jay-Z, the way you make a Dame Dash
    And while I’m givin your sig tips please improve this nuisance
    It aint workin with that blue on blue shit, and PLEASE remove your music
    Your rhymes are dope, now if you could only burn me
    Every good punchline that tries to cross you mind dies on that lonely journey
    Your ego is undeserved, your verses start out crappy then worsen
    Saying you’re great, ignorance is bliss, no wonder youre the happiest person
    Planning shit out in your life isn’t only absent when rappin
    You musta been born on the highway, reports say thats where most accidents happen
    You need a ghost writer, I swear this dumbfucks worthless
    Cuz if you write what you think and I guarantee you come up verseless
    Wordz, Gsus, G.Legit, you don’t deserve me writing a verse to spit
    Why didn’t anyone bother telling this faggot not to make aliases until he’s worth a shit
    I’m Tim Lincecum, a world champ still serving this this cocky fag high heat
    After my second Cy Young, third rematch so i can give this Rockie fan strike 3
    Hes a VH1 reject, basically hes just a true bitch
    Don’t get me wrong hes got a Real Chance… to lose this
    But yes, I am your father, you are not from the hatchery
    I have your birth certificate on my wall, It says “We’re sorry. From the Condom Factory”
    It must be frustrating you cant beat me, I’m sure you believe you’re better
    You’ll be the best in the forum if me, Raz, Jai, Smitty, deth, mrjdm, prec1se, jook, mr. freeze, lyricalpriest, murderous keys, heart cloaker, krayz, stotch, konflikt, shady k, infactuation, and bloodgang leave forever
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  3. Gsus

    Gsus aka Wordz bka G. Legit

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    *has begun writing*
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  4. Gsus

    Gsus aka Wordz bka G. Legit

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    Listen...

    Ya first verse against me, mad me laugh, the rest was trash...so i guess this whatchu could call, savin the best for last...

    Tac scared of pussy, bitches to dude...
    is like lil kids watchin lions in zoos/

    Its straight irony wit this fag though, how Im talkin to shit to an asshole...he an "animal in bed", a "Tiger" to these fags yo...saluting rainbow colored flagpoles...and he "6 under par"...a caddy, the way he take "Wood to every last hole"/

    Yo bitch said she'd "blow my brains out", she more g's than u, ready to "Cock and squeeze the Tool", but she aint holdin a pistol....instead she got on her knees, tilted her head back like she was ready to sneeze, and started blowin my whistle/

    Tac spells pussy in reverse, so u know this caT like it from the back...and he aint talkin bout dope flows, when he say he "givin em crack"...Mikaela Ocean can tell u about that...go ahead and ask...he'll even admit she fucked em in the ass/


    Now that he lost his virginity, every gay man in San Francisco tryin to join the search party...and run a "train on em" like Michael J. Fox tryin to find Marty...

    But just cuz Im son'n Tac, doesnt mean i'd fuck his mom, but i would fuck her face...see fuckin his mom is like sendin a hotdog into outter space...and her walls is like seeing stars..maannnn, cuz after u see em, u realize u still gotta go a looooong way...way...way...way(echo)/

    Im feelin sorry for this lame who couldnt find a date for the prom...
    Accordin to Jason's sig, he was fine without one, he stayed home fuckin his mom/

    Why am I frontin? Tac the hardest "nigga" I know spittin....sike...
    He actually look like what Mike(MJ) would look like if he was actually born white/


    Tryin to be one of the brothers, fitted caps, long tees and baggy jeans....
    Dumb mothafucka even dressed up as one of us for Halloween/

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  5. Gsus

    Gsus aka Wordz bka G. Legit

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    uppin for votes
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  6. Halloween Jack

    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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    And while I’m givin your sig tips please improve this nuisance
    It aint workin with that blue on blue shit, and PLEASE remove your music
    Your rhymes are dope, now if you could only burn me
    Every good punchline that tries to cross you mind dies on that lonely journey
    Planning shit out in your life isn’t only absent when rappin
    You musta been born on the highway, reports say thats where most accidents happen
    I’m Tim Lincecum, a world champ still serving this this cocky fag high heat
    After my second Cy Young, third rematch so i can give this Rockie fan strike 3
    But yes, I am your father, you are not from the hatchery
    I have your birth certificate on my wall, It says “We’re sorry. From the Condom Factory”
    It must be frustrating you cant beat me, I’m sure you believe you’re better
    You’ll be the best in the forum if me, Raz, Jai, Smitty, deth, mrjdm, prec1se, jook, mr. freeze, lyricalpriest, murderous keys, heart cloaker, krayz, stotch, konflikt, shady k, infactuation, and bloodgang leave forever

    Lol^

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    Its straight irony wit this fag though, how Im talkin to shit to an asshole...he an "animal in bed", a "Tiger" to these fags yo...saluting rainbow colored flagpoles...and he "6 under par"...a caddy, the way he take "Wood to every last hole"/
    Now that he lost his virginity, every gay man in San Francisco tryin to join the search party...and run a "train on em" like Michael J. Fox tryin to find Marty...
    But just cuz Im son'n Tac, doesnt mean i'd fuck his mom, but i would fuck her face...see fuckin his mom is like sendin a hotdog into outter space...
    Tryin to be one of the brothers, fitted caps, long tees and baggy jeans....
    Dumb mothafucka even dressed up as one of us for Halloween/

    haha. aight, tight battle y'all. tac started off ehh.. the egypt subject could've been used to flip a harder punch. but dude got way better from there. nigga said some funny shit and had some stingers.. that condom line had me chucklin.

    gsus started off strong.. lion line was aight n the wordplay in that tiger woods segment was serious. i thought he'd continue on that path but the rest of the verse didn't have that witty effect. he had personals, but they didn't hit as hard n seemed forced. if he'd spent a lil more time with them, he would've had tac cuz there was some 'ouch' potential in those quotes. hotdog shit made me laugh too lol.

    overall not a bad battle at all.. but i got tac ahead, what sealed it were the highway line n his closer i was like Loool..

    vote: tac

    good shit n good luck my nigs.







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  7. Gsus

    Gsus aka Wordz bka G. Legit

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    1-0 your way thanx jack
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  8. smittyrhythm

    smittyrhythm you love 2 hate me

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    close battle.. lots of personal punches from both sides.

    Tac came with some hard wordplays I think some may go unnoticed but are there regardless, nice closer; who doesnt like to see their name third in the list..

    Gsus looks like he really did his homework thoroughly, bringin in quote punches and finishing off with that pic close was almost priceless.

    I cant call it.

    good second round...there should be a third.
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  9. Gsus

    Gsus aka Wordz bka G. Legit

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  10. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    dont know if theres any point upping this when its only 5 threads down, but up
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  11. smittyrhythm

    smittyrhythm you love 2 hate me

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    y dont yal just close it with a third round ...? it's a close enough battle
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  12. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    vote= Tac

    pretty easy here, Gsus structure/format doesn't allow for real hard hitting punches

    it takes a while for them to gain steam and sometimes they lose their momentum,

    the tiger woods was a hard punch though, i think the sexual references went on for too long with no switch up, got boring after a while

    I feel that his quotes and reliance on them held him back,


    tac was solid with punches throughout,

    until your worth a shit, the closer, birth certificate, happiest person, and dame dash all good hard as hell hitting personals more than enough to win

    vote- tac
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  13. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    Tac came pretty strong with funny lines and a solid flow. Standard issue with some strong lines

    Gsus has very creative wordplay, good aggression, and very personal attacks plus a very creative way of stringing together disses that I really liked to see.

    Vote - GSus

    Peace to tha Gods...
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  14. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    I was allll set to call this for TAC.He was hilarious and his bar structure was cleaner.He was throwing hard punches and they were crisp and clean.

    And then that closer where he named a gajilliion people that were better than Gsus had me lol and I thought it was just "over". And then I was gonna skim through Gsus' verse...

    Gsus snapped me back to attention with his first 6 bars,and he just launched wicked true personal after personal after personal and that ender was just the...ahem..****th Stryque.

    Vote GSUS
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  15. Infallible

    Infallible Just Another Victim!

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    vote tac.....no need to specify. just fresher and the justifying lines of gsus was not necessary.
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  16. G Force

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    This was quite an interesting battle.

    I've read a couple of T.a.C's battles and think he's quite slept on. He delivers some quite imaginative schemes and did precisiely that here with a couple odecent personals in there.

    Gsus has done his homework in this battle and wrote some good lines. I liked that last line wih the picture reference and some other funny stuff in like that 'echos' line. For these reasons i reckon you win although i think in the future you should work on your tructure coz its all over the place. lines arer all different lengths which means you can lose many readers, which ultimately means your punches can lose desired impact.

    VOTE = GSUS
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