(wordplay) Cypher -if You Gotta Sick Freestyle Game Post

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  1. Bar nigga

    Bar nigga 314 STL Ancient of daze..

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    a bar limit would be good. only reason i posted all that was because of the 100 bars he posted LOL

    his shit wasnt a battle verse tho...this is a battle. his shit was non direct
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  2. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    I had punches directed at him,I was flipping things he actually said.Unfortunately,I'm new to the site so it took me awhile to cut and post his quotes onsite because for some reason there was some site-oriented difficulty in doing so.

    I want a REAL BATLLE with a BATTLE THREAD and everyone can judge as long as they judge the categories right (I'd like you,J.ANTHONY,to be one of the judges.You seem to be both more knowledgeable and less biased than others who've weighed in).I want 3 rounds in order to be sure there's no tie.48 bar max/round.That's 3 new rounds of us goin in. To make it fair,both of us can protest a vote if we think the vote is shady,and judges judge based on specific categories too with their actual definitions.Where I battle? You can only protest 3 categories,so you can't reverse the decision of a whole judges panel,and you can NOT protest both Punches AND Personals in the same round.But judges gotta justify their decisions using bars from each lyricist like on KINGOFTHEDOT.

    Categories are:

    Punches
    Personals
    Humor
    Attitude (rap definition:"focused,passionate lyricism that evokes the specific response or responses that the lyricist and/or producer(s) desire.A dance song should make you want to dance,a battle verse should be vicious and aggressive,a ballad should evoke deeper emotions,etc.")

    Wordplay (Definition:Witty or clever verbal exchange; repartee. The act or an instance such exchange")


    Rhyme Scheme: People who use more words with their syllables lined up and don't sacrifice flow for words with lotsa syllables have a superior rhyme scheme and basically automatically win the Flow category AND Rhyme Scheme because it's harder to have a rap packed with multisyllable words that are appropriate to the rap,make sense AND have power flow well.

    Creativity: The ability to bring into existence and/or create something new.In battles,that means NEW PUNCHES,NEW RHYME SCHEMES,NEW APPROACHES AND CONCEPTS.Not that same ole "you're gay" or "I'll shoot you" thing all the time and/or used the same way.


    Vocab: (Rap definition: "It's not just the number of big words that you use,but how clearly you convey your meaning,how well you select and use your words.It's also how well you use words or phrases that aren't frequently used but are directly connected to what you're talking about.If you combine big words that clearly convey your meaning with infrequently used words and surgically used words without clouding your meaning or losing the crowd,your hiphop vocab is sicc.")

    Sound Manipulation (Definition:,"sound manipulation" deals with the literal combination of word usage and rhyme scheme to produce,repeat and/or emphasize specific sounds as an indication of refined skill)

    Flow (Definition:A continuous movement of something abundant; as, a flow of words.)



    Metas:"1.a figure of speech in which a word or phrase is applied to something to which it is not literally applicable (e.g. food for thought). 2. A thing symbolic of something else." <---too many heads don't know what a actual metaphor is.


    Opener
    Closer
    Enjoyment

    Beat (if we write to a beat)

    Punches and Personals count for 1-20 points each,everything else is 1-15 points.The reason that Punches and Personals count more than everything else is because these categories are what stand out most and win battles if everything else is more or less even.Just to be clear? Personals are punches but not all Punches are Personals.The reason that everything else is close to Punches and Personals in point totals is because Punches and Personals aren't the only important thins in a high quality rap or battle.

    Just to give yall some hella clear examples of SOUND MANIPULATION and how ILL IT IS and how EVERYBODY HERE IS A REAL BIG FAN OF IT,check these freestyles out:

    GRAFH AND CORY GUNZ SHOWING HIGH LEVEL SOUND MANIPULATION:

    YouTube - Cory Gunz & Grafh Freestyle!

    SUPA DUPA WAKK AZZ NON SKILL HAVIN SOUND MANIPULATION:

    YouTube - "Teach me how to jerk" music video


    An example of how to judge the categories and give points for some cats would be something like:


    WORDPLAY CATEGORY:

    0 wordplay is not present

    1-3 wordplay is terrible, the lyricist obviously doesn't comprehend the concept minimum 1 wordplay line
    4-6 wordplay IS wordplay, but is not challenging or original minimum 2 wordplay lines for this
    7-9 wordplay is very good, it is clever and funny when it should be must have at least 3 wordplay lines to achieve this
    10-11 wordplay is madd dope, used often and masterfully at least 6 lines minimum
    12-14 wordplay is heavily featured in 40-50% or more of the verse,and it's aggressive,funny,fresh and original.
    15 some of the best examples of everything mentioned above that the judge has ever witnessed

    Judges must cite bars with wordplay in it to justify their score.


    PUNCHES category judging is madd subjective cuz we all have different tastes,but here's a way to get everybody's style of punches objectively judged for points:

    knowledgeable judges know enough about all kinds of punches to be able to judge a verse on its punching power and compare it to a totally different kind of verse with punches.A judge should have the knowledge to appreciate a verse from CANIBUS (who tends to use more knowledge-based punches) and a verse from TUPAC and be able to compare them by seeing which one of them went in the most with their style and should be able to choose a winner objectively even if the judge PREFERS THE STYLE of the LOSER who DIDN'T DO AS WELL WITH THE STYLE THE JUDGE PREFERS AS THE OTHER MC WHO DID BETTER WITH A STYLE THE JUDGE LIKES LESS.You feel me? On top of that,YOU GIVE THE MOST POINTS FOR THE MC WHO USED THE BETTER,MORE VERSATILE KINDS OF PUNCHES CUZ THEIR VERSE WAS MORE WELL-ROUNDED.The only exception is if one lyricist goes in so hard that he totally dominates the other lyricist and the other lyricist wasn't good with the disses he threw,even though he used a broader and deeper array of disses. So awarding points for punches should look something like:

    1 point for every diss up to 10/20.Wakk disses or failed attempts at disses don't count.
    1 point for every 2 disses after the 10th diss.
    2 points for every great diss


    You should cite the bars with what you call GREAT DISSES and gave 2 points for,and give examples of punches that WEREN'T GREAT in your opinion as judge and explain why.


    And if we choose a beat to flow to? Leave a link to the beat and we get judged on the quality of our beat selectiion: like,how do the lyrics we write fit the kind of beat we selected?

    So JASON ANTHONY is a judge.Who else? And bar nigga whatcha think of this? Right now I'm at work,I'll be back here later tonight before I bounce to live life.Was too busy to be here yesterday
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  3. Bar nigga

    Bar nigga 314 STL Ancient of daze..

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    lol nigga u typin out paragraphs of nonsense


    u got ripped, now post round 2 or shut the fuck up

    u got bodied in round 1
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  4. Bar nigga

    Bar nigga 314 STL Ancient of daze..

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    lol come on now nigga, u did all that typin but didnt drop yo round 2...
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  5. Bar nigga

    Bar nigga 314 STL Ancient of daze..

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    yo verse was corny as fuck, now u on here talkin about "lets do 3 new rounds" LOL nigga yo first round count...that shit was weak thats why u wanna do over lol



    ole scary ass nigga, tryin to save face
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  6. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    My first round ate yours son,and if you wanna keep it? That's cool with me.Be down with 2 more and we got 3 in.I'll set the battle thread with both of our verses in it,AND I'll respond to your second garbage ass rhyme.Check into the battle thread.
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  7. Bar nigga

    Bar nigga 314 STL Ancient of daze..

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    what battle thread?


    and i'll post my own verse nigga...u dont gotta copy and paste my shit, just tell me which thread titty boy
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  8. Bar nigga

    Bar nigga 314 STL Ancient of daze..

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    just link the thread, and i'll post. i'm leaving out in a couple hours so do it now
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  9. Bar nigga

    Bar nigga 314 STL Ancient of daze..

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    yeah, matterfact...u make the battle thread, drop yo verse then i drop mine...no edits...

    then we go in for round 2 in the new thread
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  10. Radical Sun

    Radical Sun New Member

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    Holy cypher thread Batman! :cry:
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  11. Bar nigga

    Bar nigga 314 STL Ancient of daze..

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    ^ deth, look he said batman!

    yo idol
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  12. Bar nigga

    Bar nigga 314 STL Ancient of daze..

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    batman lol

    how appropriate
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  13. Bar nigga

    Bar nigga 314 STL Ancient of daze..

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  15. mr.redeyez

    mr.redeyez Member

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    Tha k spit it go skeet skeet skeet
    when it hitcha u gone leak leak leak
    blood n- brains on tha street street steet
    beep beep beep beeeeeeep


    ha . Ha . Ha


    im on some killa shit
    let me illustrate
    u dont feel ma shit
    u niggaz fake
    a milli, would be really great
    trix on ma dick, u silly snake
    i wont let ya know tha code
    ima pill poppa, im rollin slow
    i fold tha foe, den roll it ho
    bad thick chick, she rolli pole
    me an a white chick, uh' oreo
    i sold ma soul, fuck tha world
    coke-uh-cola, cluck tha world
    im high bitch... Freestyle
    happy new years, they decease now
    i take a piss, n pop n tha porn
    ma life scorn, we children of tha corn
    im done b.e.z
    u dont want none believe me,
    like boosie i been betrayed they decieved me

    smh.......................
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  16. tbone

    tbone Well-Known Member

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    life is like a roller coaster
    ya never know what would approach ya
    so step in keep ya heart open
    staying focus never slipping on these bitches coach em
    never lacking on these nyggaz roast em
    bringing in the new year toasting enjoying the moments
    time wait on no man so i hope that ya invest in
    its a long stretch so i'm steady pressing on a come up til the end
    wont stop til I see the light, to take me away from my darkness
    brighten up my future achieving my goals, realizing struggles is just my hardship
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  17. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    SEE MY MAINFRAME IS CLEAR OF EGO VIRUSES
    I SPEAK THE STORY WITH TRUTH AND REAL VERSES
    PLUS I’M PROTECTED BY THE CRUCIFIX AND BIBLE VERSES
    Now it’s the second day in a new year
    full of curses
    Inherited by the masses,
    war still popping off like firecrackers
    Now I want to go fire a cracker-
    Got me thinking phuck all you slackers
    It’s a new year and niggaz still be on who’s the better text rapper
    I’m in this cipher mind on point like pins
    And yes I got the mentality of a
    caged tiger
    I can’t wait till I get out and maul
    all you a haters
    but right now my stack’s tall like Webster
    but this year my stacks will stand like Yao Ming
    Y’all know what I mean
    I was raised off M.O.B
    That’s money over busters
    Money over Bitches like a trix i'm might rape ya
    and take back my paper
    call me the 2011- Jack the rip"ya".
    to the other white meat. Nicca this 6ftG.
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    Enoch85 New Member

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  19. Gen The God

    Gen The God The Life or Death Poet

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    Tight verbs and syllables lashing, the umbilical slashin villian who fashions...
    to kill with a passion, ill skill when I'm rappin...
    instilled within captions...."MY PRESCENCE IS GREAT..."
    the heavens'll shake, from the heavy weight, of whoever's free will that I'm smashin...
    to bits of integral mass, you'll need infinite measuring tape...
    and Einstein's theories of depth to equate, how far I'ma dig in that a**!!!
    s*** is a wrap, reducing ya brain's critical mass, leaving you stupefied....
    if a lame tries to CROSS Gen with a rap, he will get CRUCIFIED!!!
    leaving that bloodclot dead, my eyes are bloodshot red (Mr. redeyez), when spittin these BARS NIGGA...
    turning rappers to b****, as if they'd seen me smashing their chick like I'm hard liquor...
    clappin gats at ya parked pickup, making ya heart skip a beat like a hard hiccup!!!
    cause I'm BLAZIN CATS like I'm part-Hitler at a BAR MITZVAH!!!
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  20. Bar nigga

    Bar nigga 314 STL Ancient of daze..

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    i spit gems
    with smarter refinement, ya can't be retarded to find it
    the particles of my rhymes..sparkle and shine
    bars harder than diamonds
    every line is divine forever be heavenly like the stars in alignment
    marvel the science, i come from the force responsible for their designin...
    Aztecs, Egyptians, and Mayans started flyin before new age pilots
    heiroglyphics hidden in pyramids
    ankh's illuminatin the dark for enlightment...
    a marble giant
    carved with carbon fiber picks with enuff spark to charge an appliance or start an alliance...
    part of a larger assignment, snatchin hearts outta tyrants
    ridin against the wicked ready to be martyred in violence
    don't be afraid to push the margin defiant, they conquer compliant
    as long as you quiet in silence..they remain strong as Goliath..
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