Word of Mouth collabo (pt. 1)

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  1. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    WORD OF MOUTH COLLABO (part 1)

    Ok new concept I wanted to try with some talented overlooked poets in the realm, I’m talking MASTERS of the pen with Pent uP, JF, Ab Zero, Nis, Poet X, and a special quest appearance from the one and only XERO!?!?!….the idea was I started a theme and pass it on and the next poet interprets it then passes it on and so on and so on…..this is the results of a poets word of mouth:

    ~Lurid Dreams in the Realm pt 1~


    UFO

    Poetry has become the muse of my dreams
    Where pillows kidnap theories and concepts
    Asleep with the pen and pad never feeling free
    Old age is the monster hanging under the bed
    And literature is the written word whispers
    Of forgotten ancestors who are not all dead

    Pent uP

    Poetry is the Peter to my Dreams Pearly Gates
    where pillows murder structure and rhythm,
    Asleep where the pens scheme's purely hate!
    Under the bed is old age, awaiting a victim
    But literature whispers "You're surely safe
    because my ancestors are written and living"

    Johnny French

    I sing the poetic hymns with Peter at the Lord's Entrance
    Structure and rhythm unshaped and unformed as the clouds we walk on
    Floating lavishly above hate that the pens leak
    As the old age has taken over the body and time arrests you, you sit
    Only to be forever shielded and remember by scriptures
    Scriptures that lead the path my ancients have breathed and created on



    Absolute Zero

    At Heaven's gate, I share melodies with he who denies
    Cumulonimbus prose: Chaotic shambles and we stumble...
    Soaring, overlooking ignorance.......my weapon branded...
    And the elders have taken me in as their own...I tremble
    In front of stone tabs that blind society from me forever...
    The law that my forefathers birthed so long ago....

    Nislanif

    Dem a cry fi mi, but I've only gone home
    We stand inna lead clouds over Babylon's flow
    His citizens no hear we, forefathers pon the clouds
    Me am a natural amongst the mystics, me getting' lifted now
    De I beneath the sands of time forever, tears pon de soil
    Them legislate me a ga wait an eternity to be seen. Won Lov.

    Poet X

    Sheppard's callin', could this now be Christ?
    As I stand at heavens façade, over jaded forget my life
    Deaf minds lead dumb stares, upon his crown of thorns
    Transcend a fragile shell, as one's soul is now reborn
    Ancient loves of lost forever, ones memories are now torn
    Enter light and air eternal, composed, a shell, new love to lore, live well

    Xero Satsujin

    And the crack of dawn like the birth of life is a blessing.
    Meddling and wanting more from it is definitely eye catching.
    So open the eyes that wish to explore.
    See beyond your border and the contracts you've signed in blood.
    Go back to the beginning when we were form from soft mudd.
    WAKE UP! Stretch forth and kiss the sky.
    God is watching, this dramatization is for you and I.
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  2. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    Oh yeah take note this whole thing is keystyle?!?!....from start to finish on the spot?!?!

    just crazy
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  3. Malikhi

    Malikhi Headliner

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    im at lost of words lol, this was insanely brilliant, from start to finish i was like "whoa"
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  4. iceheart

    iceheart The Frozen Poet

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    there is a reason you said masters of the pen.
    lol way to go on getting xero to drop on that.
    that was just plain awesome.
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  5. very nice. Lol@ nislanif rwriting in rasta persona. kingston pon de riddim. seen. BO!
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  6. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    vote - Xero killed it
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  7. iceheart

    iceheart The Frozen Poet

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    does he ever not?
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  8. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    Woah, THAT'S how it started? We were all so wrong and yet, so we write.
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  9. Johnnie French

    Johnnie French Voodooradio.podomatic.com

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    Well I did enjoy, I'll do more next time and give it more of my effort. I did that bit in 5 minutes or less and told him to pass it. Everyone, did well.
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  10. Johnnie French

    Johnnie French Voodooradio.podomatic.com

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    Btw I'ma start chargning mothafuckas points if ya'll can't spell my name right.
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  11. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    where would we be with out NislaniF???

    I don't think I did all that good...feelin like JF, lol...Took me about 5 minutes to write, and wanted to put more but I was at work so it was cut short...But thanx for making me feel welcome, if I wasn't at work I'd post the lastest piece I wrote and read the board...but, se la vi...
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  12. absolute zero

    absolute zero Among the living

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    last line killed it xero.

    It's good that you're humble though.

    Good work everyone, God Bless.
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  13. Poet x

    Poet x a ploy at being human...

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    zero, man ur nice, and thats all i have to say about that, and that last line definately the truth, i love ur humble demeanour, it definately adds to your greatness. as for my post, my lil keystyle though it only took me a few minutes to write the subject matter was deep for me, i am amazed at how off skilt i was with it though compared to when the collabo began.
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  14. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    Same. Dude IM'd me while I was talking to my girl on the phone like "I need it now" and I was like "brb". 20 minutes later, I remembered I essentially had his IM on hold and was like "Oh! Right, the six lines. Here." and wrote that right quick. But I had been bumpin' that new Jamrock cd lately, so...[dunno]
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  15. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    Is he really a relative of THE MARLEY??? or just usin the name??? BTW, loved how that was done...Everybody else, Grrrreeeaaatt!!!
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  16. MISSKEYdaQUEEN

    MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther..

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    man...this was FIRE...I'm at school on the edge of my seat like WHOAAA!!!

    I thinf JF and Nislanif added some really nice things to the piece...

    It was like everyone came with a piece of them, and just gave us this piece man I feel blessed

    Xero, are we worthy??

    Great job you guys!!!
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  17. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    Damian Marley is the youngest son of Bob Marley. His mother was Miss Jamaica.
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  18. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    Miss Jamaica

    thats so hard to live under i bet
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  19. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    Hell yea that would be hard to live under, lol...But shit, I didn't know, and now I do...Knowing is half the battle...GOOOO JOOEEE!!!!
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  20. iceheart

    iceheart The Frozen Poet

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    lmao xero i completely forgot about gi joe til you said that
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