[WK17] 25. Yung Troy 0-2 v. 26. Proof 0-0 (Vote!)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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  2. Quant_m

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  3. Proof

    Proof Jamaicans do errything

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  4. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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  5. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    Weezy spittin bad quotes gettin fortune and fame
    if I said "my skills are like yours"< thats a quote worser than Wayne's
    lame bastid bout ta make me bash ya face in
    if Proof aint a chinese, then why I'm bout ta break chin
    ...my punches aiming for rooks
    that's why I hope this cat-fish in my pond..
    so I can catch em' wit tha right hook
    lucky punk, I aint mad cuz you've beaten me once
    rasta wan' fight, I'll catch ya roll..
    then smoke ya like jamaican blunts
    I know good< you're just the antonym
    a win for you is looking like Real's brother..your chance is slim
    are ya serious?..put ya bra and panties on, call it a quits
    ^cuz whether this, or a verse..your style is playtex
    you're just a made bitch who's verses don' say shit
    this webpage< ya lyrics filler up like a service station...

    fuck tha hatas....
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  6. Proof

    Proof Jamaicans do errything

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    u think that’ll strike fear in me, when ya gonna learn?
    match this proof content? Nigga please ya gonna burn
    I’m hella better than you- plus I’m more experienced
    But u keep resettin ya record like we’d ever take u serious
    Ur really 0-20… and we just finished week 16
    U’ll even post first n lose to a noshow verse’s weak 16
    fuckin gump, ur the guy in the game we elite try to replace
    we’d only put u down in an emergency like fire escapes
    Wanna own proof? go to the dojo ‘n make them flows tighter-
    relevance is so minor u need a older brother and a ghostwriter
    I’ll be the sole survivor, u winnin is Akon
    If u believed it could happen… letcha boy getta taste of the shit you on
    U gotta be high as fuck to try ya luck against odds
    A champion? Troy couldn’t hold A cup without his girlfriend’s bras
    That flat chest bitch just wont stop callin- beggin me for meat
    head doctor, nrolls her tongue over n over for her residency
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  7. Area51.

    Area51. New Member

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    this battle coulda been better, seen better from both before

    ...my punches aiming for rooks
    that's why I hope this cat-fish in my pond..
    so I can catch em' wit tha right hook
    are ya serious?..put ya bra and panties on, call it a quits
    ^cuz whether this, or a verse..your style is playtex

    Yung the rhymes a bit of a stretch in that 2nd one but w/e, only shit I liked from ur verse, u dropped mad inconsistant this week, but I liked that Catfish line alot, thought it was dope.
    closest shit proof had to being quoted was the A-Cup line, n that wasnt that great. overall alot of his shit didnt hit, most of it was either too simple or put too plainly.

    v/ Yung Troy
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  8. Nick Rainey

    Nick Rainey When it RAINES it Pours!

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    .v.

    Overal this was a really mundane battle in my humble opinion, either had any significant concepts or damaging punches. To put to honestly, this shit was just bore joe. Stil there has to be a winner and I'm leaning towards Proof cause Troy got really redundant while reading his verse. So in actuality it came down to who bored me less ..Vote - Proof.
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  9. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    You be criticizing dudes like you really the shit..I'm seein hate in dat vote sorry ta say..I tried to give the benefit of the doubt when you voted against me last week cuz I thought I really lost dat battle but come on hata..I don't know who you really are but if you were a dope mc, you're sure as hell not one now..I'm gettin better and I can give a fuck if you don't see it...so stay the fuck out my threads ho...
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  10. Nick Rainey

    Nick Rainey When it RAINES it Pours!

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    LMAO..you'sa loser dudeson, that was a clown-ass statement, who cares? Go find a skill level lame.
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  11. Aloe

    Aloe www.myspace.com/aloemusic

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    young:

    Weezy spittin bad quotes gettin fortune and fame
    if I said "my skills are like yours"< thats a quote worser than Wayne's
    --what?

    lame bastid bout ta make me bash ya face in
    if Proof aint a chinese, then why I'm bout ta break chin
    --no

    ...my punches aiming for rooks
    that's why I hope this cat-fish in my pond..
    so I can catch em' wit tha right hook
    --okay i guess.. but not really

    lucky punk, I aint mad cuz you've beaten me once
    rasta wan' fight, I'll catch ya roll..
    then smoke ya like jamaican blunts
    --omg

    I know good< you're just the antonym
    a win for you is looking like Real's brother..your chance is slim
    --ehhhh

    are ya serious?..put ya bra and panties on, call it a quits
    ^cuz whether this, or a verse..your style is playtex
    you're just a made bitch who's verses don' say shit
    this webpage< ya lyrics filler up like a service station...
    --this shit didnt even rhyme

    proof:

    u think that’ll strike fear in me, when ya gonna learn?
    match this proof content? Nigga please ya gonna burn
    --filler

    I’m hella better than you- plus I’m more experienced
    But u keep resettin ya record like we’d ever take u serious
    --ok but doesnt really hit

    Ur really 0-20… and we just finished week 16
    U’ll even post first n lose to a noshow verse’s weak 16
    --decent

    fuckin gump, ur the guy in the game we elite try to replace
    we’d only put u down in an emergency like fire escapes
    --cool

    Wanna own proof? go to the dojo ‘n make them flows tighter-
    relevance is so minor u need a older brother and a ghostwriter
    --eh

    I’ll be the sole survivor, u winnin is Akon
    If u believed it could happen… letcha boy getta taste of the shit you on
    --not hittin

    U gotta be high as fuck to try ya luck against odds
    A champion? Troy couldn’t hold A cup without his girlfriend’s bras
    --heh kinda funny

    That flat chest bitch just wont stop callin- beggin me for meat
    head doctor, nrolls her tongue over n over for her residency
    --okay i guess

    ok sorry guys, but i really wasnt feelin this battle. young, i cant say i was feelin any of your lines and proof, there were a couple lines of yours i was fuckin with, but nothing really good.

    proof had the better verse and the better of two bads... so vote = proof
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  12. KempoMRK

    KempoMRK The Don Corleone

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    Troy's opener was pretty decent. The concept was cool 'n I liked it. Break chin had strange wording. The concept was ok, the wording just seemed rushed and unnatural, which made it a bad line. Cat-fish was forced. It was creative, but it was too forced to be good I thought. Smoke ya lines have been done quite a lot before. Chance is slim was ok. Playtex I didn't like. Filler was aight.

    Proof's opener I didn't like. It seemed fillerish. Resettin ya record was a simple, blunt personal, 'n it worked well. Weak 16 I didn't like. lmao. Fire escape was dope. I liked that a lot. Creative 'n well worded. Relevance I didn't like too much. Boy get a taste I didn't like. Dunno where he was really going with it. Seen a lotta A Cup lines before. It was still an ok line though, cos it was worded alright. Didn't like the closer.

    I thought Proof got this. Both dropped some creative stuff, but that fire escape line from Proof edged it his way I thought. That was a tight line.

    v/ Proof
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  13. D.LOKE

    D.LOKE New Member

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    VOTE: Yung Troy

    It came down to the only 2 lines quotes that were attention getters in this. everything else both guys had was garbage but the fish line and the fire escape one is the ones that desided the battle. I like the fire espace one cause it was kinda funny.. but the duel meaning to the fish hook shit on first read was a nice clean ass punchline that I thought was kinda hot. so for LOTB I say Yung Troy got the edge.



    YOUNG

    ...my punches aiming for rooks
    that's why I hope this cat-fish in my pond..
    so I can catch em' wit tha right hook

    VS

    PROOF

    fuckin gump, ur the guy in the game we elite try to replace
    we’d only put u down in an emergency like fire escapes
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  14. Wash.

    Wash. Registered Bruiser

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    favorite line from young-

    ...my punches aiming for rooks
    that's why I hope this cat-fish in my pond..
    so I can catch em' wit tha right hook

    favorite line from proof-

    U gotta be high as fuck to try ya luck against odds
    A champion? Troy couldn’t hold A cup without his girlfriend’s bras

    this had lackluster battle battle writtin all over it. but proof had a better verse. most of the lines from both weren't hittin too hard, but like i was sayin proof gets the nod. step your games up though guys.
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  15. Caveat1

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    Weezy spittin bad quotes gettin fortune and fame
    if I said "my skills are like yours"< thats a quote worser than Wayne's
    OK
    lame bastid bout ta make me bash ya face in
    if Proof aint a chinese, then why I'm bout ta break chin
    AIGHT
    ...my punches aiming for rooks
    that's why I hope this cat-fish in my pond..
    so I can catch em' wit tha right hook
    DECENT
    lucky punk, I aint mad cuz you've beaten me once
    rasta wan' fight, I'll catch ya roll..
    then smoke ya like jamaican blunts
    THIS WAS COOL
    I know good< you're just the antonym
    a win for you is looking like Real's brother..your chance is slim
    GOOD
    are ya serious?..put ya bra and panties on, call it a quits
    ^cuz whether this, or a verse..your style is playtex
    you're just a made bitch who's verses don' say shit
    this webpage< ya lyrics filler up like a service station...
    ALL THE REST WAS OK


    u think that’ll strike fear in me, when ya gonna learn?
    match this proof content? Nigga please ya gonna burn
    GOOD START
    I’m hella better than you- plus I’m more experienced
    But u keep resettin ya record like we’d ever take u serious
    NICE
    Ur really 0-20… and we just finished week 16
    U’ll even post first n lose to a noshow verse’s weak 16
    THIS WAS ILL
    fuckin gump, ur the guy in the game we elite try to replace
    we’d only put u down in an emergency like fire escapes
    LOL GOOD CONCEPT
    Wanna own proof? go to the dojo ‘n make them flows tighter-
    relevance is so minor u need a older brother and a ghostwriter
    ILL
    I’ll be the sole survivor, u winnin is Akon
    If u believed it could happen… letcha boy getta taste of the shit you on
    COOL
    U gotta be high as fuck to try ya luck against odds
    A champion? Troy couldn’t hold A cup without his girlfriend’s bras
    AIGHT
    That flat chest bitch just wont stop callin- beggin me for meat
    head doctor, nrolls her tongue over n over for her residency
    GOOD CLOSE

    V-PROOF
    WASNT THAT CLOSE
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  16. Constrikta of CVI

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    One sided battle in my eyes. Let me break this down.


    Yung Troy

    Weezy spittin bad quotes gettin fortune and fame
    if I said "my skills are like yours"< thats a quote worser than Wayne's
    ...simple opener, not really effective
    lame bastid bout ta make me bash ya face in
    if Proof aint a chinese, then why I'm bout ta break chin
    ...this was ok I guess
    ...my punches aiming for rooks
    that's why I hope this cat-fish in my pond..
    so I can catch em' wit tha right hook
    ...no
    lucky punk, I aint mad cuz you've beaten me once
    rasta wan' fight, I'll catch ya roll..
    then smoke ya like jamaican blunts
    ...nah
    I know good< you're just the antonym
    a win for you is looking like Real's brother..your chance is slim
    ...iono bout this either
    are ya serious?..put ya bra and panties on, call it a quits
    ^cuz whether this, or a verse..your style is playtex
    ...ehh c'mon man
    you're just a made bitch who's verses don' say shit
    this webpage< ya lyrics filler up like a service station...
    ...ok at best

    Proof

    u think that’ll strike fear in me, when ya gonna learn?
    match this proof content? Nigga please ya gonna burn
    ...ok open
    I’m hella better than you- plus I’m more experienced
    But u keep resettin ya record like we’d ever take u serious
    ...lol
    Ur really 0-20… and we just finished week 16
    U’ll even post first n lose to a noshow verse’s weak 16
    ...ok
    fuckin gump, ur the guy in the game we elite try to replace
    we’d only put u down in an emergency like fire escapes
    ...nice
    Wanna own proof? go to the dojo ‘n make them flows tighter-
    relevance is so minor u need a older brother and a ghostwriter
    ...lol
    I’ll be the sole survivor, u winnin is Akon
    If u believed it could happen… letcha boy getta taste of the shit you on
    ...eh
    U gotta be high as fuck to try ya luck against odds
    A champion? Troy couldn’t hold A cup without his girlfriend’s bras
    ...lol
    That flat chest bitch just wont stop callin- beggin me for meat
    head doctor, nrolls her tongue over n over for her residency
    ...ok closer

    Troy didn't bring enough here to beat Proof. Proof had the more polished verse, and not only did it flow better, but it hit alot harder in the dissing department as well. Proof outclassed Troy from top to bottom.

    Vote- Proof
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  17. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    Proof Wins.
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